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5/18/2023 c9 GalitAvigail
Sooo funny Love this story thank you for sharing. Love from Israel, Galit
5/17/2023 c9 Pimpertinkle
I loved the new chapter.
Hope you update soon;)
5/17/2023 c9 bozbaby
Loving the story! Definitely love how you meshed turn-of-the-century science with modern science. Great stuff! Also, even though you haven’t written it yet, or even if you intended to, it depends on which Radium’s isotope Alastair used in his machine and whether it had decayed enough to be safe or still very, very dangerous. (I worked with radiation for a few years in the US Navy, both gamma sources (Iridium and Cobalt) and xray for industrial purposes, examining metal for discontinuities that could cause failure of the material. Bad juju.). However, when he left, as you rightly stated, Madam Curie and other scientists hadn’t figured out isotopes, decay rates and how hazardous radioactivity was, or if they did, it was the bare beginnings, so it is unlikely Alastair knew which isotope he used.

Sorry, I geek out over this stuff. Looking forward to hearing Ewar and Bella finally be able to communicate!
5/17/2023 c9 B
Thank you for updating. What an amazing chapter! Fantastically written and I loved how u incorporated other historical events and his reasoning for keeping the chair hidden.

Can’t wait for next update, please don’t us wait to long for it !
5/17/2023 c9 cbmorefie
Thanks
5/17/2023 c9 Rita01tx
Quite the colorful character is our Alistair LOL! I actually like his theory that he was meant to time travel to the late ice age to help the people advance. The human race does seem to get these strange "boosts" in progress every now and then LOL!
5/17/2023 c9 Guest
Can’t wait for them to comprehend each other
5/17/2023 c9 15Cullen Cousin
good chapter
5/17/2023 c9 6Cheerra12
Excellent chapter as always! So excited to see this update in my inbox. Great portrayal of Alistair. Can’t wait for the next chapter! Glad that Edwar and Bella can finally communicate!
5/17/2023 c9 Kathryn L. Malone
LOL! Kinda loving Alistair! He's a HOOT! Anxious to find out what he is so concerned about regarding the last picture.
5/17/2023 c9 frostedglaze
Choking on my tea for 5 minutes is worth, just to have read Alistair looking for the hidden clitoris. Let's hope Edward ha an evolutionary moment and suddenly can start speaking english.
5/17/2023 c9 Romana973
Thanks for a great chapter!
5/17/2023 c9 acw1
:)
5/15/2023 c8 LaurelLeafSinger
Mr. Tuddleston, I presume? That body found in the ravine that Bella mentioned in the first chapter may not have been the inventor Alistair. Why couldn’t he be popping around, time traveling, even if one chair was still at his home? Also, Bella said the portrait eyes were creepy. LOL. I can’t help thinking that “Mayant-hattatar” reminds me of Mad Hatter.

Poor Ewar, he’s such a good -and hunky!- guy. And really, couldn’t Bella try learning some of his language? Ewar has proven that he learns quickly.

So sad that Oza/Rosalie attacked Bella. She may have been able to save the baby…
5/9/2023 c8 majose
Shouldn’t she have picked some of the language already?
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