for Devensian12/12/2024 c33 dearedwardc
these last two chapters were intense! i internally flinched when i read the trigger warnings but yeah.. it had to be done. the final battle with Ora was so well written! I loved it
these last two chapters were intense! i internally flinched when i read the trigger warnings but yeah.. it had to be done. the final battle with Ora was so well written! I loved it
12/12/2024 c37 Wutizlyfe
YAY! I can’t wait for the sequel! And I’m excited to read Ewar’s outtakes! You’re so sweet and sad that he waited in the cave for her so long
YAY! I can’t wait for the sequel! And I’m excited to read Ewar’s outtakes! You’re so sweet and sad that he waited in the cave for her so long
12/12/2024 c36 Wutizlyfe
Sequel! This story was Amazing! you are such a talented writer, and the story kept me enthralled the entire time! I never knew what to expect, but I always loved where it went! My heart dropped a few times, i got teary eyed a few times and I laughed a lot. Please write a sequel!
Sequel! This story was Amazing! you are such a talented writer, and the story kept me enthralled the entire time! I never knew what to expect, but I always loved where it went! My heart dropped a few times, i got teary eyed a few times and I laughed a lot. Please write a sequel!
12/11/2024 c29 dearedwardc
OMG! I know I’ve said this a few times before but this story just got MORE interesting againI never imagined myself enjoying adventure genre but here I am, binge reading it for a few days already! I hope their journey goes well
OMG! I know I’ve said this a few times before but this story just got MORE interesting againI never imagined myself enjoying adventure genre but here I am, binge reading it for a few days already! I hope their journey goes well
12/11/2024 c37 frostedglaze
Why couldn't Jessa die?! That woman is just evil and I hope more people heard what she said to Edward and take justice in their own hand. She needs to die horribly... I vote for her being the first person in history to discover poison ivy and uses it as toilet paper.
I just do mot trust Jess, I can see her sneaking in and trying to kill Bella. Oh pretty please let her die. She can be stung to death by bees.
Poor Edward, the man needs food, especially with the arduous journey ahead of him.
I am glad you are feeling better, chronic illness is no joke. Please take care of yourself.
Why couldn't Jessa die?! That woman is just evil and I hope more people heard what she said to Edward and take justice in their own hand. She needs to die horribly... I vote for her being the first person in history to discover poison ivy and uses it as toilet paper.
I just do mot trust Jess, I can see her sneaking in and trying to kill Bella. Oh pretty please let her die. She can be stung to death by bees.
Poor Edward, the man needs food, especially with the arduous journey ahead of him.
I am glad you are feeling better, chronic illness is no joke. Please take care of yourself.
12/11/2024 c27 dearedwardc
thank god they actually communicated with each other about children. i’d hate to see a miscommunication or misunderstanding again between them. i guess they really learned and went through some character development during that one and a half year
thank god they actually communicated with each other about children. i’d hate to see a miscommunication or misunderstanding again between them. i guess they really learned and went through some character development during that one and a half year
12/11/2024 c37 bozbaby
Happy you are feeling better. Take your time with these chapters/stories. Do I want to see a new update everyday because the stories are that freaking good? Yes! However, your health comes first. Period.
Sooo I’m looking forward to see how Ewar, Bella and/or the tribe deal with Essa. My suggestion is that she is to be determined to be unmarriageable and/or a social outcast. This would mean she’d have to stay with the Bat People and be a thorn in their side, but casting her out of the tribe is a death sentence. However, I wouldn’t put it past her to try to poison Bella or other types of revenge. Maybe she had some nocturnal fun with Jaiham and he gave her a deadly prehistoric STD? Ugh… Just want her to go away and be miserable. Yes, yes, she’ll make for some good drama in the sequel.
Looking forward to updates! And feel better, sweetie. Rest, relax and chill when needed. Hot cocoa and hot tea work wonders, especially with a cozy blanket on the couch.
Happy you are feeling better. Take your time with these chapters/stories. Do I want to see a new update everyday because the stories are that freaking good? Yes! However, your health comes first. Period.
Sooo I’m looking forward to see how Ewar, Bella and/or the tribe deal with Essa. My suggestion is that she is to be determined to be unmarriageable and/or a social outcast. This would mean she’d have to stay with the Bat People and be a thorn in their side, but casting her out of the tribe is a death sentence. However, I wouldn’t put it past her to try to poison Bella or other types of revenge. Maybe she had some nocturnal fun with Jaiham and he gave her a deadly prehistoric STD? Ugh… Just want her to go away and be miserable. Yes, yes, she’ll make for some good drama in the sequel.
Looking forward to updates! And feel better, sweetie. Rest, relax and chill when needed. Hot cocoa and hot tea work wonders, especially with a cozy blanket on the couch.
12/11/2024 c25 dearedwardc
it’s a relief to know that the language they use here is based off another one that actually exists- for a second i was worried that you had to invent a new one just for this story lol anyway, yay! things are looking up finally. i know this is not the end yet (and i believe ora will make an appearance sooner or later) but this chapter was like a breath of fresh air after all that angst! so happy for Alie and Jas
it’s a relief to know that the language they use here is based off another one that actually exists- for a second i was worried that you had to invent a new one just for this story lol anyway, yay! things are looking up finally. i know this is not the end yet (and i believe ora will make an appearance sooner or later) but this chapter was like a breath of fresh air after all that angst! so happy for Alie and Jas
12/11/2024 c24 dearedwardc
I’m so glad they’re back together but I’m still so frustrated at them for not talking to each other at all during the journey. the misunderstanding was a minor one they could’ve solved in between the few weeks of travel to the cave!
I’m so glad they’re back together but I’m still so frustrated at them for not talking to each other at all during the journey. the misunderstanding was a minor one they could’ve solved in between the few weeks of travel to the cave!
12/11/2024 c22 dearedwardc
I can’t with these two arghhh it’s like they take one step forward, and then two steps backward! their miscommunication is worse than when they didn’t know each other’s language at all oh my god
I can’t with these two arghhh it’s like they take one step forward, and then two steps backward! their miscommunication is worse than when they didn’t know each other’s language at all oh my god
12/10/2024 c37 traceybuie
So many tears... I can barely see to type. It's heartbreaking how Ewar discovered all of the brave amazing things Bella has done while she is now laying unconscious. Thanks for writing and sharing.
So many tears... I can barely see to type. It's heartbreaking how Ewar discovered all of the brave amazing things Bella has done while she is now laying unconscious. Thanks for writing and sharing.