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10svald
Coming here after reading The last Compartment on the left first sure was one hell of a experience. Still, that contrast between the two different versions of Voldemort made this story even better imo. Def hitting the top 3 under the twisted and sick stories ive read on here. Well written indeed, cant wait for the next chapter. Tho i will agree with previous commenters, if u find the drive and want to write it, do consider writing the other ending you proposed as well after finishing this one, I'd love to read that too, if youll allow me to be greedy like that fitting in with the themes of the story lol
10svaldComing here after reading The last Compartment on the left first sure was one hell of a experience. Still, that contrast between the two different versions of Voldemort made this story even better imo. Def hitting the top 3 under the twisted and sick stories ive read on here. Well written indeed, cant wait for the next chapter. Tho i will agree with previous commenters, if u find the drive and want to write it, do consider writing the other ending you proposed as well after finishing this one, I'd love to read that too, if youll allow me to be greedy like that fitting in with the themes of the story lol
12/10/2024 c10 2Black Doberman
this is the one of the most deplorable/disgusting breakdowns of a harry i have read in a while. keep the chapters coming.
2Black Dobermanthis is the one of the most deplorable/disgusting breakdowns of a harry i have read in a while. keep the chapters coming.
5/22/2024 c10 Park Otsutsuki
Awesome chapter. Now they have all of eternity to themselves. Honestly, this is really the only thing Harry's got left. Because everyone and everything is ruined for him at this point. Everyone in his life, has manipulated him and use him. This is one of the better outcomes. Considering the circumstances
Awesome chapter. Now they have all of eternity to themselves. Honestly, this is really the only thing Harry's got left. Because everyone and everything is ruined for him at this point. Everyone in his life, has manipulated him and use him. This is one of the better outcomes. Considering the circumstances
5/19/2024 c9 Park Otsutsuki
Yes, Justice! Long live the best ending. Literally, is the only ending for harry. He has nothing left.
Yes, Justice! Long live the best ending. Literally, is the only ending for harry. He has nothing left.
5/19/2024 c9 Sons of death
I love your version of Voldemort. Her calling Harry dodger is just so perfect to me and I love it.
I love your version of Voldemort. Her calling Harry dodger is just so perfect to me and I love it.
4/21/2024 c8 1Aguywhodied
I’m voting for the coil ending. That being said, I think it would be interesting if at the end, Harry wakes up and realizes that it was all some sick fantasy of his and he’s still in hogwarts.
1AguywhodiedI’m voting for the coil ending. That being said, I think it would be interesting if at the end, Harry wakes up and realizes that it was all some sick fantasy of his and he’s still in hogwarts.
4/20/2024 c8 LightenedShadow
I think a coil ending would work well. I have read a few stories with a Harry that falls like this but turns back. I like that this story reminds me of The Devil In Me. Which was one of my favorite Harry falling to the dark sideand staying with it stories.
I think a coil ending would work well. I have read a few stories with a Harry that falls like this but turns back. I like that this story reminds me of The Devil In Me. Which was one of my favorite Harry falling to the dark sideand staying with it stories.
4/18/2024 c8 Lawbringer
I'm gonna be real I love the twisted direction of this story so much I really want the coils ending. But on the other hand a daring and triumphant rescue does make a good story. If I had to pick I would say keep it twisted buuuuuut I'm one of those assholes who wants both slices of this delicious treat so I would hope desperately that ya would write both lol. Love all of your works and I wait with baited breath to see your next updates!
I'm gonna be real I love the twisted direction of this story so much I really want the coils ending. But on the other hand a daring and triumphant rescue does make a good story. If I had to pick I would say keep it twisted buuuuuut I'm one of those assholes who wants both slices of this delicious treat so I would hope desperately that ya would write both lol. Love all of your works and I wait with baited breath to see your next updates!