for A Young Girl's Weaponization of the Mythos3/6 c43 
3Another S.T.A.L.K.E.R
Story was good. Even if it is quite wrong about ‘climate changeglobal warmingthe biggest con in historyone that has the potential of harming the environment if CO2 levels get lower, the plants will dieits another tool of globalist elite much like Communism claiming they are freeing the workers (but are actually hurting everyone and achieving little or negligible benefit).
3Another S.T.A.L.K.E.RStory was good. Even if it is quite wrong about ‘climate changeglobal warmingthe biggest con in historyone that has the potential of harming the environment if CO2 levels get lower, the plants will dieits another tool of globalist elite much like Communism claiming they are freeing the workers (but are actually hurting everyone and achieving little or negligible benefit).
2/19 c45 22Kingdark
It took me several days (!) to finish this story, but just... Wow. That's basically my thoughts on this story. Wow. Freaking wow. I like stories about Tanya and I definitely like stories that cross her fandom with other fandoms but just... Wow. I'm very, very impressed.
That said, there are a few things I feel I should point out. Firstly, for some strange reason you had a space between the end of a word and an exclamation mark like so ! instead of so!
This didn't happen just once in a while but 418 times.
Then, and I've come to the conclusion that this wasn't a mistake as much as it was a deliberate choice, but there are a handful of chapters, where the tenses suddenly change. You go from 'he walked down the street' to 'he walks down the street.' I though it a strange choice, but it wasn't enough to make me stop reading. And if I'm complaining about stupid things, then I might as well mention that there were a lot of times where you... (I always confuse the two, so forgive me for being a bit too wordy) but there were times where you went with 'tell' instead of 'show.' The only way I can keep the two apart in my mind, is that one of the two is writing without spoken dialogue. (tell the story) and that writing a story WITH a lot of dialogue (showing a story) is what I prefer personally. That's not to say there isn't any dialogue, because there is. Just not quite enough for my liking. But again, I'm just complaining to complain at this point, so don't take it seriously.
I also have to admit that I didn't quite see the emperor thing coming. I mean, I had been wondering if it was just one big fabrication, but I figured I would see what happened in the end. One more thing I would've liked to see, is to be told what happened to Merlin in the end. And perhaps a direct clarification that these were just code names. When his name was mentioned, I immediately thought of Harry Potter and a moment later of the tv-series 'Merlin' but clearly, that wasn't the case.
Anyway, that's it for me. I checked your other stories, and you seem to be focussing on Warhammer a lot, but I'm afraid that fandom isn't quite for me, because it's a bit too dark for my liking and because I simply don't know enough about it. I have a hard time to keep track of a lot of different characters.
Thank you for writing and sharing your story.
Kingdark.
22KingdarkIt took me several days (!) to finish this story, but just... Wow. That's basically my thoughts on this story. Wow. Freaking wow. I like stories about Tanya and I definitely like stories that cross her fandom with other fandoms but just... Wow. I'm very, very impressed.
That said, there are a few things I feel I should point out. Firstly, for some strange reason you had a space between the end of a word and an exclamation mark like so ! instead of so!
This didn't happen just once in a while but 418 times.
Then, and I've come to the conclusion that this wasn't a mistake as much as it was a deliberate choice, but there are a handful of chapters, where the tenses suddenly change. You go from 'he walked down the street' to 'he walks down the street.' I though it a strange choice, but it wasn't enough to make me stop reading. And if I'm complaining about stupid things, then I might as well mention that there were a lot of times where you... (I always confuse the two, so forgive me for being a bit too wordy) but there were times where you went with 'tell' instead of 'show.' The only way I can keep the two apart in my mind, is that one of the two is writing without spoken dialogue. (tell the story) and that writing a story WITH a lot of dialogue (showing a story) is what I prefer personally. That's not to say there isn't any dialogue, because there is. Just not quite enough for my liking. But again, I'm just complaining to complain at this point, so don't take it seriously.
I also have to admit that I didn't quite see the emperor thing coming. I mean, I had been wondering if it was just one big fabrication, but I figured I would see what happened in the end. One more thing I would've liked to see, is to be told what happened to Merlin in the end. And perhaps a direct clarification that these were just code names. When his name was mentioned, I immediately thought of Harry Potter and a moment later of the tv-series 'Merlin' but clearly, that wasn't the case.
Anyway, that's it for me. I checked your other stories, and you seem to be focussing on Warhammer a lot, but I'm afraid that fandom isn't quite for me, because it's a bit too dark for my liking and because I simply don't know enough about it. I have a hard time to keep track of a lot of different characters.
Thank you for writing and sharing your story.
Kingdark.
1/25 c45 SomePervyGuy
Thank you for this story. It was truly a Supreme read. *steals Lady of the Stars Tanya for possible "use" in the future*
Ahem anyway, will look around and see when some of your exquisite writings catch my mind. Time is hard to come by.
Have a wonderful time whereever and whenever you are!
Thank you for this story. It was truly a Supreme read. *steals Lady of the Stars Tanya for possible "use" in the future*
Ahem anyway, will look around and see when some of your exquisite writings catch my mind. Time is hard to come by.
Have a wonderful time whereever and whenever you are!
1/18 c45 Mistletainn
... Just who did Zerayah ended up with? I gotta know! But doesn't seem I'd get the answer. Alas. Still, thanks for your hard work! I'm looking forward to read more from you.
... Just who did Zerayah ended up with? I gotta know! But doesn't seem I'd get the answer. Alas. Still, thanks for your hard work! I'm looking forward to read more from you.
1/18 c45 Father A. Anderson
Just finished reading this story, and what a ride it has been. The ending was fitting and feelt good. I find it funny that in a world with mythos warfare, Tanya is a lot happier and well-adjusted. I loved this story.
Just finished reading this story, and what a ride it has been. The ending was fitting and feelt good. I find it funny that in a world with mythos warfare, Tanya is a lot happier and well-adjusted. I loved this story.
1/15 c45 1DeOPOrange
I followed this story mostly on Spacebattles. I will say, thank you for this masterpiece, honestly probably the greatest fanfic I have ever read, at least off the top of my head, even without much knowledge of Lovecraft mythos or Yojo Senki I still greatly enjoyed it. Now I suppose I'll just have new chapters of your other Darth Cain story to look forward to. Goodluck with all your future endeavours!
1DeOPOrangeI followed this story mostly on Spacebattles. I will say, thank you for this masterpiece, honestly probably the greatest fanfic I have ever read, at least off the top of my head, even without much knowledge of Lovecraft mythos or Yojo Senki I still greatly enjoyed it. Now I suppose I'll just have new chapters of your other Darth Cain story to look forward to. Goodluck with all your future endeavours!
1/14 c45 arispuffer
Such dream you cook up here, we win the Emu war, and Lovecraft not a racist and miserable.
All in all tho, thank you for such an incredible journey. I will always cherish this story. It has now been upgraded as one of the rarer guilty pleasure that I visited every now and then.
Such dream you cook up here, we win the Emu war, and Lovecraft not a racist and miserable.
All in all tho, thank you for such an incredible journey. I will always cherish this story. It has now been upgraded as one of the rarer guilty pleasure that I visited every now and then.
1/14 c45 4LightTrain
Now I want to see a Mass Effect crossover after the end of this story, a mythos charged humanity with Tanya at the head greeting, (maybe fighting), and most *definitely* scaring the shit out of the other aliens!
4LightTrainNow I want to see a Mass Effect crossover after the end of this story, a mythos charged humanity with Tanya at the head greeting, (maybe fighting), and most *definitely* scaring the shit out of the other aliens!
1/13 c45 HoundOfCasterbris
Its been a great ride. It always tickles me pink the most human incarnation of Tanya is the most literally and metaphysically detached from it. Sweet, sweet juxtaposition~
Though if you went back and made a story of the Hell Divers one shot here, it would be a great time for all.
May your muse be generous and ever within reach!
Its been a great ride. It always tickles me pink the most human incarnation of Tanya is the most literally and metaphysically detached from it. Sweet, sweet juxtaposition~
Though if you went back and made a story of the Hell Divers one shot here, it would be a great time for all.
May your muse be generous and ever within reach!
1/13 c45 HoundOfCasterbris
Its been a great ride. It always tickles me pink the most human incarnation of Tanya is the most literally and metaphysically detached from it. Sweet, sweet juxtaposition~
Though if you went back and made a story of the Hell Divers one shot here, it would be a great time for all.
May your muse be generous and ever within reach!
Its been a great ride. It always tickles me pink the most human incarnation of Tanya is the most literally and metaphysically detached from it. Sweet, sweet juxtaposition~
Though if you went back and made a story of the Hell Divers one shot here, it would be a great time for all.
May your muse be generous and ever within reach!
1/13 c1 109c-wolf
I'm glad to see Gehrman's "kids" will miss him. as for the emu. it would be funny if it turned out the country just couldn't admit they wanted to wipe out all emu
109c-wolfI'm glad to see Gehrman's "kids" will miss him. as for the emu. it would be funny if it turned out the country just couldn't admit they wanted to wipe out all emu
1/13 c45 MarkoncioX
It has been an honor following our Not!cult leader in this mad adventure all this time, it almost feels like a life time ago when I sacrificed a goat to keep the muse satiated, only for her to start leaving rent free on your head and expand the scope of the story tenfold.
From the start you managed to keep us enthralled and waiting for more Tanya and Co shenanigans, and even in the end left us with some bread crumbs for future writers to continue expanding.
Hopefully the Muse comes back swinging with a sledgehammer, and a tad bit of your madness, to bring forth more of your great work in the future.
May the Lady of Stars keep you safe from other otherworldly entities and the cosmic horror that is bureaucracy,
Until next time Zahariel.
It has been an honor following our Not!cult leader in this mad adventure all this time, it almost feels like a life time ago when I sacrificed a goat to keep the muse satiated, only for her to start leaving rent free on your head and expand the scope of the story tenfold.
From the start you managed to keep us enthralled and waiting for more Tanya and Co shenanigans, and even in the end left us with some bread crumbs for future writers to continue expanding.
Hopefully the Muse comes back swinging with a sledgehammer, and a tad bit of your madness, to bring forth more of your great work in the future.
May the Lady of Stars keep you safe from other otherworldly entities and the cosmic horror that is bureaucracy,
Until next time Zahariel.