for New Employ12/2 c1 Akren483
I really admire your writing in "New Employ" Your characters and storytelling are captivating. As readers, we appreciate exploring the landscapes of your imagination and discovering new ideas and truths along the way. I'd love to hear about your ideas that you are working on also if you have any book recommendations, I'd love to hear them. I'm excited for your upcoming projects.
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I really admire your writing in "New Employ" Your characters and storytelling are captivating. As readers, we appreciate exploring the landscapes of your imagination and discovering new ideas and truths along the way. I'd love to hear about your ideas that you are working on also if you have any book recommendations, I'd love to hear them. I'm excited for your upcoming projects.
Feel free to DM me here
Discord: akren8_29921
Instagram: akren_35
Email:
11/4 c9 
3Kn4sakura of fierce deity
I love the story and ideas you've come up with for your oc. Your reality thinking outside the box here.l! Now I can only hope Loona and him get together. Lol) update soon!
3Kn4sakura of fierce deityI love the story and ideas you've come up with for your oc. Your reality thinking outside the box here.l! Now I can only hope Loona and him get together. Lol) update soon!
10/31 c9 50Bladewolf101
Jesus, Ajax is gonna be on John Wick levels of badassery now that he's got a younger body again. Or maybe John Wick and the Punisher combined.
And it seems Loona is liking it.
I am so looking forward to what's to come, can't wait to see Ajax fuck up DHORKS like he fucked up the Colombian drug cartel.
Curious question, will any of the Hazbin Hotel crew make a cameo appearance?
50Bladewolf101Jesus, Ajax is gonna be on John Wick levels of badassery now that he's got a younger body again. Or maybe John Wick and the Punisher combined.
And it seems Loona is liking it.
I am so looking forward to what's to come, can't wait to see Ajax fuck up DHORKS like he fucked up the Colombian drug cartel.
Curious question, will any of the Hazbin Hotel crew make a cameo appearance?
8/27 c8 Bladewolf101
So, I'm going to assume that de-ageing him to like his twenties is going to make it easier for a Loona x Ajax pairing, right?
So, I'm going to assume that de-ageing him to like his twenties is going to make it easier for a Loona x Ajax pairing, right?
8/11 c8 Arika 24
Why is Blitzo demanding?
Why is Blitzo demanding?
8/10 c8 3coldblue2015
Sorry for not reviewing every chapter.
Life has been...rough.
Ajax:
I can't believe what Ajax did, but love it! Honestly, this makes Ajax a different mortal with almost a whole century of experience that would make Veteran Soldiers nervous in a young body. It is something to consider that...Ajax has hit Super Soldier territory. Like he is in PRIME of his Youth, possible his 20s maybe even young 20s. Obviously this chapter foreshadow Age with "CHERUB" episode, but it also shows that Ajax really did not want to let go of his profession...Basically a sign of a Sin of Pride, Wrath and Gluttony. Ajax is not a Sloth or Greedy, but we have no idea on Lust. The Cherubs got to interact with Ajax and I am glad Ajax is kind to Collin because Cletus and Keenie are the worst and kind represents the PROBLEMS of Heaven in the "Helluva Boss/Hazbin Hotel" Universe. Still...I wonder if Ajax will die at some point. Also, love the fact Ajax was involve with Lilye and Loopty death by trying to make their Deaths look like accidents and when Ajax did not complete the Job...well, that was another mark that Ajax was slipping his old age and he did not like that.
Questions
1) Are we going to get more description of young Ajax, like his features or where he stopped his age at what time: 20s or 30s?
2) Would Ajax be considering a Super Soldier given all his experience and training back in a young body?
3) How will Loona, Blitz, Moxxie, and Millie deal with working with a young Ajax?
4) Can we expect Heaven or someone to notice Ajax youth back and realize he is threat/dangerous to natural order or someone that knows too much?
Suggestions
1) I figure Ajax in his early 20s. Kind of like Ajax wants to be at the prime of his youth to fight back harder and to not have all pain/mistakes will old age. I know Ajax has black hair, facial fuzz, red eyes, and probably a tan skin tone. Some more descriptions about Ajax height or body built or even other descriptions like freckles.
2) Yeah, I would consider Ajax a Super Soldier with all his experience and even with a young body. Probably Ajax going to train his body back up and figure out his new limitations given his OLD body was very limited.
3) Blitz, Moxxie and Millie are going to surprise and interesting to read how Ajax can work on the field. Probably Ajax being better killer or even have more personality traits in his youth being sadistic and creative with his kills...Loona will be test because she recognize Ajax even his youthful body. Probably Loona having thoughts she did not have before or realizing she had attraction to older Ajax before he became hot and young to Loona...Which might be issue with Blitz given he protective of Loona and with Ajax being young we can see Blitz trying to keep Ajax and Loona apart.
4) I figure DHORKS will notice. Heaven would be interesting because Ajax is breaking LAW by extending his life through unnatural means or the fact Ajax committed the sin of murder so much that it becomes aa issue. Ajax could have Human mortal threat and Heavenly threat in the future given Ajax has become something more dangerous or better at his professions.
Keep up the good work, stay safe, and stay healthy!
3coldblue2015Sorry for not reviewing every chapter.
Life has been...rough.
Ajax:
I can't believe what Ajax did, but love it! Honestly, this makes Ajax a different mortal with almost a whole century of experience that would make Veteran Soldiers nervous in a young body. It is something to consider that...Ajax has hit Super Soldier territory. Like he is in PRIME of his Youth, possible his 20s maybe even young 20s. Obviously this chapter foreshadow Age with "CHERUB" episode, but it also shows that Ajax really did not want to let go of his profession...Basically a sign of a Sin of Pride, Wrath and Gluttony. Ajax is not a Sloth or Greedy, but we have no idea on Lust. The Cherubs got to interact with Ajax and I am glad Ajax is kind to Collin because Cletus and Keenie are the worst and kind represents the PROBLEMS of Heaven in the "Helluva Boss/Hazbin Hotel" Universe. Still...I wonder if Ajax will die at some point. Also, love the fact Ajax was involve with Lilye and Loopty death by trying to make their Deaths look like accidents and when Ajax did not complete the Job...well, that was another mark that Ajax was slipping his old age and he did not like that.
Questions
1) Are we going to get more description of young Ajax, like his features or where he stopped his age at what time: 20s or 30s?
2) Would Ajax be considering a Super Soldier given all his experience and training back in a young body?
3) How will Loona, Blitz, Moxxie, and Millie deal with working with a young Ajax?
4) Can we expect Heaven or someone to notice Ajax youth back and realize he is threat/dangerous to natural order or someone that knows too much?
Suggestions
1) I figure Ajax in his early 20s. Kind of like Ajax wants to be at the prime of his youth to fight back harder and to not have all pain/mistakes will old age. I know Ajax has black hair, facial fuzz, red eyes, and probably a tan skin tone. Some more descriptions about Ajax height or body built or even other descriptions like freckles.
2) Yeah, I would consider Ajax a Super Soldier with all his experience and even with a young body. Probably Ajax going to train his body back up and figure out his new limitations given his OLD body was very limited.
3) Blitz, Moxxie and Millie are going to surprise and interesting to read how Ajax can work on the field. Probably Ajax being better killer or even have more personality traits in his youth being sadistic and creative with his kills...Loona will be test because she recognize Ajax even his youthful body. Probably Loona having thoughts she did not have before or realizing she had attraction to older Ajax before he became hot and young to Loona...Which might be issue with Blitz given he protective of Loona and with Ajax being young we can see Blitz trying to keep Ajax and Loona apart.
4) I figure DHORKS will notice. Heaven would be interesting because Ajax is breaking LAW by extending his life through unnatural means or the fact Ajax committed the sin of murder so much that it becomes aa issue. Ajax could have Human mortal threat and Heavenly threat in the future given Ajax has become something more dangerous or better at his professions.
Keep up the good work, stay safe, and stay healthy!
3/3 c7 1Ultrautahraptor
I love what you did with Striker in this chapter, made him feel somewhat more menacing and experience like Ajax, although not as much. I was literally excited when Ajax and Striker fought wnf i was hoping for Ajax to win however as he himself as pointed out, hex hold.
Also what is he planning to do with that golden tooth? Make a neglace out of it like how people would do with a Shark tooth? Makes sense really
1UltrautahraptorI love what you did with Striker in this chapter, made him feel somewhat more menacing and experience like Ajax, although not as much. I was literally excited when Ajax and Striker fought wnf i was hoping for Ajax to win however as he himself as pointed out, hex hold.
Also what is he planning to do with that golden tooth? Make a neglace out of it like how people would do with a Shark tooth? Makes sense really
10/7/2023 c5 3coldblue2015
Thanks for updating and this was a great chapter!
Ajax:
Okay, from what I can gather...He was raped or raped serval times, because he brutally killed a Serial-Killer/Rapist AND he did not like Verosika Mayday flirty/touchy nature...Kind of getting the Gutts from "Berserker" vibes coming on here. I have to admit, it was interesting to read Ajax actual challenge Loona during her first time on the field. She did good job, but she also was not truly focused on the situation/mission at hand. It is rather interesting to read Ajax vs Vortex, along with most of Verosika crew NOT being able to push Ajax like they did Moxxie...Almost got TeamFourStar vibes with "Hellsing Ultimate Abridge" going on...Still, it was not bad and Loona even convinced Ajax to HELP out Verosika and her crew from the Police mercy. I have to admit, I do see Ajax side to care about Loona in this chapter. I also read Ajax very protective of his professionalism and his fellow co-workers/teammate...I wonder how Loona will react when she is Syphilis anymore after couple months or weeks of anti-biotics and medication fixing that problem.
Also, great job point out Human Disguise that Loona was in, her shadow still had her Hellhound form. Good job!
Loona:
...I have to admit, she slightly cares about what Ajax thinks of her. The fact remains that besides Blitzo and Moxxie talking about her work-ethic issues, but Ajax points out directly that she on her first mission OUT OF HELL and she not doing a great job. I do love Loona actually pointing out to Ajax that Human Disguise, which made Ajax question that was thing, and he was being punked. Still, it rather sweet that Ajax did help Loona out with her Syphilis. I did love Loona opportunity for fortune for whoever Ajax THIRD party for supplies, but Loona finds another weird thing about Ajax...He does not like steal and make profit off criminal activity. Him, Ajax, who kills people and was Black Ops form of Hit-Man... does not like steal. It rather odd and I love that Loona points out that Ajax does NOT avoid Hell. No, Ajax does not care for Earth and seems to easily accept Hell and wanting to stay there...That odd for Human being, especially if they are concern or find out their is an Afterlife.
Questions
1) When we get to the DHORK's encounter IMP, would Ajax file pop up and actually get MANY heads or leaders of Government/Black Ops nervous that Ajax is involved with Supernatural and is VERY, very good at his job?
2) Is it possible that Ajax no longer cares for Earth and is just happy that there a sense of order in Afterlife where Evil people go to Hell and people who are good go to Heaven?
3) How likely will we get Loona noticing a sense of care she and Ajax have for one another as story goes on?
4) Can we get a chapter where Ajax experience Extermination Day and getting his hand on some Exorcist heavenly Blades/Guns?
5) Are we going to have Ajax consume some of Hell food to notice some changes to his body, like the Fish in the ocean that turned into a small Kaiju because of Bellzejuice?
6) When Ajax dies and becomes a Sinner, would something he hate be something Young and Youthful his appearance is and he would HATE that physical look?
Suggestions
1) I just realized that...Ajax has to have a LARGE file that he actually known to TOP men in Shadowy Government. I figure Ajax being part of IMP and than Agent 1/2 sending the video evidence of the Supernatural might be interesting, BUT alarm bells will go off if Senior Shadowy Government officials notice Ajax in the mix and be a bit concerned that former asset that was slowly going into retirement is re-activated and running with a murderous group of little red imps, and what looks like a werewolf; armed to the teeth and with high body count.
I mean, Ajax hinted that he took down dangerous gangs, drug cartels and smaller governments; so why wouldn't DHORK's video send alarm bells off for certain powerful Shadowy Figures in the Government?
2) I feel like that is the reason. Honestly, Ajax knows he is not a good person and yet probably wonders if their some form of justice or payment he has to go through with all the lives he killed. Now? There is a Hell, there is a Heaven, and unknown if there is a Purgatory. Still...I feel like Ajax is that Anti-Hero that is okay with getting his punishment sent and is not really in attached to Earth. In fact, I think Ajax cannot see the difference with Earth and Hell, other than Furies/Silkies/Walking Supernatural creatures existing walk around in Hell and Humans are two-faced assholes a majority of the time.
3) Loona is going to notice. She is only close to Blitz and is okay with Millie and Moxxie. Still, it would set alarm bells off for her when Loona notice she does care for the Human in the group and strangely the Human cares for her right back. I'm not asking for sex-dream, but I feel like Loona and Ajax will notice small/comfortable moments with each other along with fighting on dangerous missions where they look out for each other.
4) That not a bad idea...Kind of like random urban legend in Imp City about a lone resident of Hell taking on Exorcist's during Extermination Day, who kills them and takes their weapons. People of Hell would not know if it a Sinner or Native, but they would find bodies. I could read Ajax making sure IMP crew having Angelic Weapons as a LAST resort when they have to fight enemies in Hell.
5) Probably not a big mutation, but I could see Ajax eat some food from Hell and gain a few changes. Maybe drug trip hallucination, but really Ajax eating certain meat and taking notice his tired old body feeling LESS tired and becoming stronger. I don't know. This is a idea, but "Helluva Boss" shows that Fish taking in Beelzejuice turns them into Kaiju monsters so that is thing in this Universe.
6) I figure Ajax might be rape victim...Than he might reject form of physical attraction. Also, probably because he was victim as child and maybe again as teenager or adult during distressing moments. Point is, Ajax as old mortal likes what he looks like but once he dies...He could turn to be youthful and handsome...Which brings back traumatic memories from his past.
Keep up the good work, stay safe, and stay healthy!
3coldblue2015Thanks for updating and this was a great chapter!
Ajax:
Okay, from what I can gather...He was raped or raped serval times, because he brutally killed a Serial-Killer/Rapist AND he did not like Verosika Mayday flirty/touchy nature...Kind of getting the Gutts from "Berserker" vibes coming on here. I have to admit, it was interesting to read Ajax actual challenge Loona during her first time on the field. She did good job, but she also was not truly focused on the situation/mission at hand. It is rather interesting to read Ajax vs Vortex, along with most of Verosika crew NOT being able to push Ajax like they did Moxxie...Almost got TeamFourStar vibes with "Hellsing Ultimate Abridge" going on...Still, it was not bad and Loona even convinced Ajax to HELP out Verosika and her crew from the Police mercy. I have to admit, I do see Ajax side to care about Loona in this chapter. I also read Ajax very protective of his professionalism and his fellow co-workers/teammate...I wonder how Loona will react when she is Syphilis anymore after couple months or weeks of anti-biotics and medication fixing that problem.
Also, great job point out Human Disguise that Loona was in, her shadow still had her Hellhound form. Good job!
Loona:
...I have to admit, she slightly cares about what Ajax thinks of her. The fact remains that besides Blitzo and Moxxie talking about her work-ethic issues, but Ajax points out directly that she on her first mission OUT OF HELL and she not doing a great job. I do love Loona actually pointing out to Ajax that Human Disguise, which made Ajax question that was thing, and he was being punked. Still, it rather sweet that Ajax did help Loona out with her Syphilis. I did love Loona opportunity for fortune for whoever Ajax THIRD party for supplies, but Loona finds another weird thing about Ajax...He does not like steal and make profit off criminal activity. Him, Ajax, who kills people and was Black Ops form of Hit-Man... does not like steal. It rather odd and I love that Loona points out that Ajax does NOT avoid Hell. No, Ajax does not care for Earth and seems to easily accept Hell and wanting to stay there...That odd for Human being, especially if they are concern or find out their is an Afterlife.
Questions
1) When we get to the DHORK's encounter IMP, would Ajax file pop up and actually get MANY heads or leaders of Government/Black Ops nervous that Ajax is involved with Supernatural and is VERY, very good at his job?
2) Is it possible that Ajax no longer cares for Earth and is just happy that there a sense of order in Afterlife where Evil people go to Hell and people who are good go to Heaven?
3) How likely will we get Loona noticing a sense of care she and Ajax have for one another as story goes on?
4) Can we get a chapter where Ajax experience Extermination Day and getting his hand on some Exorcist heavenly Blades/Guns?
5) Are we going to have Ajax consume some of Hell food to notice some changes to his body, like the Fish in the ocean that turned into a small Kaiju because of Bellzejuice?
6) When Ajax dies and becomes a Sinner, would something he hate be something Young and Youthful his appearance is and he would HATE that physical look?
Suggestions
1) I just realized that...Ajax has to have a LARGE file that he actually known to TOP men in Shadowy Government. I figure Ajax being part of IMP and than Agent 1/2 sending the video evidence of the Supernatural might be interesting, BUT alarm bells will go off if Senior Shadowy Government officials notice Ajax in the mix and be a bit concerned that former asset that was slowly going into retirement is re-activated and running with a murderous group of little red imps, and what looks like a werewolf; armed to the teeth and with high body count.
I mean, Ajax hinted that he took down dangerous gangs, drug cartels and smaller governments; so why wouldn't DHORK's video send alarm bells off for certain powerful Shadowy Figures in the Government?
2) I feel like that is the reason. Honestly, Ajax knows he is not a good person and yet probably wonders if their some form of justice or payment he has to go through with all the lives he killed. Now? There is a Hell, there is a Heaven, and unknown if there is a Purgatory. Still...I feel like Ajax is that Anti-Hero that is okay with getting his punishment sent and is not really in attached to Earth. In fact, I think Ajax cannot see the difference with Earth and Hell, other than Furies/Silkies/Walking Supernatural creatures existing walk around in Hell and Humans are two-faced assholes a majority of the time.
3) Loona is going to notice. She is only close to Blitz and is okay with Millie and Moxxie. Still, it would set alarm bells off for her when Loona notice she does care for the Human in the group and strangely the Human cares for her right back. I'm not asking for sex-dream, but I feel like Loona and Ajax will notice small/comfortable moments with each other along with fighting on dangerous missions where they look out for each other.
4) That not a bad idea...Kind of like random urban legend in Imp City about a lone resident of Hell taking on Exorcist's during Extermination Day, who kills them and takes their weapons. People of Hell would not know if it a Sinner or Native, but they would find bodies. I could read Ajax making sure IMP crew having Angelic Weapons as a LAST resort when they have to fight enemies in Hell.
5) Probably not a big mutation, but I could see Ajax eat some food from Hell and gain a few changes. Maybe drug trip hallucination, but really Ajax eating certain meat and taking notice his tired old body feeling LESS tired and becoming stronger. I don't know. This is a idea, but "Helluva Boss" shows that Fish taking in Beelzejuice turns them into Kaiju monsters so that is thing in this Universe.
6) I figure Ajax might be rape victim...Than he might reject form of physical attraction. Also, probably because he was victim as child and maybe again as teenager or adult during distressing moments. Point is, Ajax as old mortal likes what he looks like but once he dies...He could turn to be youthful and handsome...Which brings back traumatic memories from his past.
Keep up the good work, stay safe, and stay healthy!
10/6/2023 c4 ReadingBeta
Really not feeling the synergy here with such an OC character in this mix. So I’m out.
Really not feeling the synergy here with such an OC character in this mix. So I’m out.
10/6/2023 c4 ReadingBeta
Like it was suppose to be anything else other than another fuck up day.
Like it was suppose to be anything else other than another fuck up day.
10/6/2023 c3 ReadingBeta
I thought the oc would be a lot younger.
I thought the oc would be a lot younger.
10/5/2023 c5 1Ultrautahraptor
You made another awesome chapter. You put the sheer brutality that I imagined he would have and as well as fine instincts. And for those who are wondering what I mean by instincts, I mean that all the time in war he must have some undercover soldiers from different military, who people he should thrust and not thrust, and if there's a ambush going to happen. In the military it's sometimes best to thrust your instincts than reasoning, if your instincts are warning you, you should listen to them.
Anyways I like how you made him more brutal in the scene where he ripped someone's throat out. I love it actually I actually do. I also like how you made him stand up for those who can't, for example in this chapter Moxxie. And I can't wait to see how he will progress for Ajax.
Also I'm quite curious if the IMP learns just how dangerous Earth is. Yes they are from hell, however they're are things on Earth that are best to stay clear off. If Earth is Hell then is Hell is paradise, for other people Hell is Hell and Earth is paradise.
1UltrautahraptorYou made another awesome chapter. You put the sheer brutality that I imagined he would have and as well as fine instincts. And for those who are wondering what I mean by instincts, I mean that all the time in war he must have some undercover soldiers from different military, who people he should thrust and not thrust, and if there's a ambush going to happen. In the military it's sometimes best to thrust your instincts than reasoning, if your instincts are warning you, you should listen to them.
Anyways I like how you made him more brutal in the scene where he ripped someone's throat out. I love it actually I actually do. I also like how you made him stand up for those who can't, for example in this chapter Moxxie. And I can't wait to see how he will progress for Ajax.
Also I'm quite curious if the IMP learns just how dangerous Earth is. Yes they are from hell, however they're are things on Earth that are best to stay clear off. If Earth is Hell then is Hell is paradise, for other people Hell is Hell and Earth is paradise.
10/5/2023 c5 3Azrael-50
Nice job! I would love to see more of Ajax and what his drive was in pursuing decades of military and secret service experience. Also I would love to see him in a cameo or episode of Hazbin down the line after January when the show comes out. Looking forward to the next one! Also Ajax somewhat reminds me of Billy Butcher from The Boys lol.
3Azrael-50Nice job! I would love to see more of Ajax and what his drive was in pursuing decades of military and secret service experience. Also I would love to see him in a cameo or episode of Hazbin down the line after January when the show comes out. Looking forward to the next one! Also Ajax somewhat reminds me of Billy Butcher from The Boys lol.
10/5/2023 c4 ThunderBasilisk
Awesome chapter. Really liked how you handled the Verosika situation. Cant wait for more!
Awesome chapter. Really liked how you handled the Verosika situation. Cant wait for more!