for New Employ4/11/2023 c2 Dingo
There won’t be any Loona x Ajax in this story will there cause I’ve already seen too many other Loona x human ocs in other peoples stories
There won’t be any Loona x Ajax in this story will there cause I’ve already seen too many other Loona x human ocs in other peoples stories
3/5/2023 c2 Guest
not harem please
not harem please
3/5/2023 c2 ReadingBeta
That went easier than I expected given he’s earlier rampage. The sex I’m hoping to see here will be our oc fucking Loona, n then getting Octavia, n finally Stella to make a harem of girls who wants to be screwed by him. Update soon.
That went easier than I expected given he’s earlier rampage. The sex I’m hoping to see here will be our oc fucking Loona, n then getting Octavia, n finally Stella to make a harem of girls who wants to be screwed by him. Update soon.
3/5/2023 c2 ThunderBasilisk
I see fun times ahead. And I do wonder whats gonna change with him being hired. Like the Mayberry job.
I see fun times ahead. And I do wonder whats gonna change with him being hired. Like the Mayberry job.
3/5/2023 c2 Guest
Please update soon. I already love this story. Please make a happy ending. Make Ajax and loona stay alive forever and together, get married and have children please
Please update soon. I already love this story. Please make a happy ending. Make Ajax and loona stay alive forever and together, get married and have children please
3/5/2023 c2 
1Marbled Gold
Let's see how our boy does then.
This is going to be fun, and you captured the characters personalities perfectly.
1Marbled GoldLet's see how our boy does then.
This is going to be fun, and you captured the characters personalities perfectly.
3/5/2023 c2 pyrojack25
Ex-US Army with a short temper, not completely bothered being ragdolled. Makes one wonder what the hell were they doing with him. But now he's alive and employed by these four knuckleheads, to which the controversy will start climbing up.
Can I assume this was after the first episode with Mayberry? (Poor gal) Referencing the fish tank tipped me off.
And now he's got the book, not knowing what it's meant for. Well Rourke, here's hoping you enjoy breathing. ;P
Ex-US Army with a short temper, not completely bothered being ragdolled. Makes one wonder what the hell were they doing with him. But now he's alive and employed by these four knuckleheads, to which the controversy will start climbing up.
Can I assume this was after the first episode with Mayberry? (Poor gal) Referencing the fish tank tipped me off.
And now he's got the book, not knowing what it's meant for. Well Rourke, here's hoping you enjoy breathing. ;P
1/17/2023 c1 guest
I am now interested, I love it
I am now interested, I love it
12/26/2022 c1 Rainsfere
Man I’ve been looking for a good Helluva Boss story and I was ready to sink my teeth into this until I recognized your name.
You always write interesting summaries that pique my interests but you never ever finish anything you write. Their Guardian, The Virtual Journey, and even your most popular series has not been updated in over a year. Your Star Wars story, the first story I read from you, hasn’t been updated in three years.
Now some authors write faster than others, some slower. Some have dedicated schedules and some are sporadic but somehow remain consistent with that. You don’t fit in any of those. The point I’m trying to make is that while I want to give this a shot, there’s just no reason to do so. On top of that you also started two new stories as well which only discouraged me further. You have talent, that I can’t deny, but you lack the focus and dedication to reach the finish line. That is a tragedy for readers who enjoy your work but it’s an even bigger disservice towards yourself.
Man I’ve been looking for a good Helluva Boss story and I was ready to sink my teeth into this until I recognized your name.
You always write interesting summaries that pique my interests but you never ever finish anything you write. Their Guardian, The Virtual Journey, and even your most popular series has not been updated in over a year. Your Star Wars story, the first story I read from you, hasn’t been updated in three years.
Now some authors write faster than others, some slower. Some have dedicated schedules and some are sporadic but somehow remain consistent with that. You don’t fit in any of those. The point I’m trying to make is that while I want to give this a shot, there’s just no reason to do so. On top of that you also started two new stories as well which only discouraged me further. You have talent, that I can’t deny, but you lack the focus and dedication to reach the finish line. That is a tragedy for readers who enjoy your work but it’s an even bigger disservice towards yourself.
12/26/2022 c1 ReadingBeta
Nun uh. Must have lemon in here. The whole reason I checked this out. No gay. Now update soon so I can see where this is going.
Nun uh. Must have lemon in here. The whole reason I checked this out. No gay. Now update soon so I can see where this is going.
12/25/2022 c1 Marbled Gold
With this story, your full potential shall be unleashed with how graphic things can get.
Can't wait to see what you do.
Have a Merry Christmas.
With this story, your full potential shall be unleashed with how graphic things can get.
Can't wait to see what you do.
Have a Merry Christmas.
12/25/2022 c1 ThunderBasilisk
This is gonna be great. And i cant wait to see how you work your chaos into this series.
This is gonna be great. And i cant wait to see how you work your chaos into this series.