for The Fox's Information War9/8 c8 Kouteikuro
Great Story.
Although the pairing is interesting, I feel that Anko or Shizune would be a better fit for Naruto if you're looking for an older woman, maybe both.
Great Story.
Although the pairing is interesting, I feel that Anko or Shizune would be a better fit for Naruto if you're looking for an older woman, maybe both.
9/3 c7 nobody
well this is obviously abandoned just like every other story where Naruto is trained by Ibiki which is a shame as this had such a good start to it
well this is obviously abandoned just like every other story where Naruto is trained by Ibiki which is a shame as this had such a good start to it
8/7 c7 marquis.shax
you gonna update this anytime soon or is it going to be abandoned like every other story where Naruto trains under Ibiki
you gonna update this anytime soon or is it going to be abandoned like every other story where Naruto trains under Ibiki
6/20 c1 SamsonOfOld
Not a fan of ninjas marrying or having sexual intercourse of any kind with weak civilian women. They have no understanding of anything that ninja do or suffer through
Not a fan of ninjas marrying or having sexual intercourse of any kind with weak civilian women. They have no understanding of anything that ninja do or suffer through
6/14 c1 marquis.shax
I disagree with your pairing for this story. Honestly I have nothing against Tsunami as she's a beautiful woman but there's a very BIG issue here and it's not JUST the age or that she's in another country. My MAJOR issue with Tsunami is she's a CIVILIAN she WOULDN'T understand Naruto's life style in the slightest. If you're hell bent on him being with an older woman then have him be with Shizune as she's not only a smart an beautiful woman but she's also get this a KUNOICHI meaning she'd COMPLETELY understand Naruto's life style
I disagree with your pairing for this story. Honestly I have nothing against Tsunami as she's a beautiful woman but there's a very BIG issue here and it's not JUST the age or that she's in another country. My MAJOR issue with Tsunami is she's a CIVILIAN she WOULDN'T understand Naruto's life style in the slightest. If you're hell bent on him being with an older woman then have him be with Shizune as she's not only a smart an beautiful woman but she's also get this a KUNOICHI meaning she'd COMPLETELY understand Naruto's life style
6/7 c6 BlueLeader
I hope Naruto's allowed to use everything he's learned now and stop holding back for the exams.
I hope Naruto's allowed to use everything he's learned now and stop holding back for the exams.
6/5 c6 nate.cannon.7399
Welcome back. Ibiki makes a good teach for Naruto. He know the feeling of being feared. He doesn't cate about social standing. So being know as the demon's master wouldn't effect him.
Teachers with enough social standing to weathered the hate or don't care or able to hide it.
Ibiki, Anko, ino-shika-chō and, might guy or the purple hair cat masked anbu (unable remembered her name). itachi could teach Naruto for few years like 3- ish years. Before he kill his clan and flee.
Welcome back. Ibiki makes a good teach for Naruto. He know the feeling of being feared. He doesn't cate about social standing. So being know as the demon's master wouldn't effect him.
Teachers with enough social standing to weathered the hate or don't care or able to hide it.
Ibiki, Anko, ino-shika-chō and, might guy or the purple hair cat masked anbu (unable remembered her name). itachi could teach Naruto for few years like 3- ish years. Before he kill his clan and flee.
6/5 c6 
55pain17ification
Nice chapter. Wish Naruto had more of a reaction to the Hokage's so-called "reason" for keeping the truth for him, but that's just my opinion.
Your story, your decisions, our enjoyment :)
55pain17ificationNice chapter. Wish Naruto had more of a reaction to the Hokage's so-called "reason" for keeping the truth for him, but that's just my opinion.
Your story, your decisions, our enjoyment :)
5/28 c2 Leo's Gemini
Whoa. Okay nice deviation. I was still kinda waiting for Anko's reaction to Naruto tricking her about confirming Ibiki's information. And I think I see the new path you're laying out for every body. I really hope that he gets more than "play catch up" to everybody.
Whoa. Okay nice deviation. I was still kinda waiting for Anko's reaction to Naruto tricking her about confirming Ibiki's information. And I think I see the new path you're laying out for every body. I really hope that he gets more than "play catch up" to everybody.
5/28 c1 Leo's Gemini
Strangely enough I recognized your own spin regarding this idea from the get-go and how it is coming through as a very engaging premise of a story. I did read the story that you mentioned this fic is based off of, and I am still hooked onto yours. I look forward to reading more and how Anko reacts. I know that it is still in the early stages of the story however, I am a little sad that he will still be let go to be under kakashi in a year. Before I click next to read chapter two, I just wanna express that.
Strangely enough I recognized your own spin regarding this idea from the get-go and how it is coming through as a very engaging premise of a story. I did read the story that you mentioned this fic is based off of, and I am still hooked onto yours. I look forward to reading more and how Anko reacts. I know that it is still in the early stages of the story however, I am a little sad that he will still be let go to be under kakashi in a year. Before I click next to read chapter two, I just wanna express that.