for The Warg Lord (GOT)(SI)9/28/2024 c5 Mianna
You’ve used “toddler” again. A newborn baby is NOT a toddler. Toddler is a baby that can walk.
You’ve used “toddler” again. A newborn baby is NOT a toddler. Toddler is a baby that can walk.
9/28/2024 c1 Mianna
Can you change “toddler” to newborn? A toddler is an older baby who can walk (toddle) usually over 2 years old. It doesnt make sense and is kind of jarring.
Can you change “toddler” to newborn? A toddler is an older baby who can walk (toddle) usually over 2 years old. It doesnt make sense and is kind of jarring.
9/13/2024 c56 slademartin123
i gotta say, a rapier and making him into more of a fencer removes any Intimidation feeling i got from him. you do you though.
i gotta say, a rapier and making him into more of a fencer removes any Intimidation feeling i got from him. you do you though.
9/2/2024 c42 Dretnuh
Is Jon gonna make a claim on the throne at some point in this, or is he just gonna be like given a lordship and a castle in the north or something?
Is Jon gonna make a claim on the throne at some point in this, or is he just gonna be like given a lordship and a castle in the north or something?
8/25/2024 c68 naruto
great chapter keep it up
great chapter keep it up
8/26/2024 c68 Ariadne Venegas
Oh that is a little bad, they had a man with brain.
About the city I hope Jon make them a sewer system or they will be rally Kingslanding 2
Oh that is a little bad, they had a man with brain.
About the city I hope Jon make them a sewer system or they will be rally Kingslanding 2
8/25/2024 c68 L3onidas
Awesome time that I reread this story with 2 updates coming in no time , god speed for your excellent writing my friend
Awesome time that I reread this story with 2 updates coming in no time , god speed for your excellent writing my friend
8/13/2024 c67 naruto
great chapter keep it up
great chapter keep it up
8/11/2024 c52 Guest
Captain Jack from pirates of the Carribean
Captain Jack from pirates of the Carribean
8/11/2024 c47 Guest
Ironic the Reach are the best spear makers when Dorne are the best spear users
Ironic the Reach are the best spear makers when Dorne are the best spear users
7/28/2024 c66 naruto
great chapter keep it up
great chapter keep it up