5/24/2024 c32 Stormzy
Skipped to chapter 30 and actually started liking the work. Hopefully I'm not too lost after it but definitely worth it. Would have dropped this work otherwise.
Skipped to chapter 30 and actually started liking the work. Hopefully I'm not too lost after it but definitely worth it. Would have dropped this work otherwise.
5/24/2024 c16 Stormzy
This is a decent work. Nothing crazy good but not bad to read. However, if you keeping adding constant OCs whose names and backstories I'm going to have to remember the story will definitely become too bothersome for me to read.
This is a decent work. Nothing crazy good but not bad to read. However, if you keeping adding constant OCs whose names and backstories I'm going to have to remember the story will definitely become too bothersome for me to read.
5/6/2024 c60 naruto
great chapter keep it up
great chapter keep it up
5/4/2024 c59 naruto
great chapter keep it up
great chapter keep it up
4/28/2024 c59 1Joe Lawyer
I'd love to read your new fic but I don't read K rated stories. It puts artificial guardrails around the story that kills it for me. Make an M rated one and you'll have my attention.
I'd love to read your new fic but I don't read K rated stories. It puts artificial guardrails around the story that kills it for me. Make an M rated one and you'll have my attention.
4/21/2024 c58 naruto
great chapter keep it up
great chapter keep it up
4/19/2024 c7 1Spyloxguy43
good story but To be honest you could be a littl more realistic with the talking as most people from that time period would refer to people of higher status as lord not mister also some of the names within the stories aren't northern like at all adam and tom aren't northern names as they are seen more predominantly in the south. otherwise a very nice story its just the little things that bug me.
good story but To be honest you could be a littl more realistic with the talking as most people from that time period would refer to people of higher status as lord not mister also some of the names within the stories aren't northern like at all adam and tom aren't northern names as they are seen more predominantly in the south. otherwise a very nice story its just the little things that bug me.
4/16/2024 c57 naruto
great chapter keep it up
great chapter keep it up
4/12/2024 c56 naruto
great chapter keep it up
great chapter keep it up