for Dreams of Home3/14 c45 Guest
It's nothing sopecific to this fic, but it's always frustrating to see how pasive everyone is when fighting voldemort on poter fics. I mean snatch some guy from his bed put him on veritaserum and the whole thing can be over in a week. A terrorist group whit high profile members just openlly walking about whould last nothing in the real world and that is whitout literal thruth potions.
It's nothing sopecific to this fic, but it's always frustrating to see how pasive everyone is when fighting voldemort on poter fics. I mean snatch some guy from his bed put him on veritaserum and the whole thing can be over in a week. A terrorist group whit high profile members just openlly walking about whould last nothing in the real world and that is whitout literal thruth potions.
3/14 c43 Guest
I mean it was fairlly obvious by the first time she was introduced, a little weird considering the wizards inclinations but we don't really know if he dabled in the fairer sex or not.
I mean it was fairlly obvious by the first time she was introduced, a little weird considering the wizards inclinations but we don't really know if he dabled in the fairer sex or not.
3/13 c1 Mutant Ascension
Well this is interesting however I do have 2 things to say the first thing is that dragonpox does have a cure in fact dragonpox has had a cure since like the 14th or 15th century. And I'm pretty sure that they have progressively been improving the cure this entire time anyway the issue is that when a witch or a wizard gets drug and pox and they're very old after all the average lifespan of a witch or wizard is like a 140 years and I'm pretty sure that's dependent upon how magically powerful they are so for above average witches and wizards they would live even longer. After all the previous headmaster before Dumbledore Armando Dippett did live for like 354 to 355 years and even when he died, he didn't die from old age but from some kind of accident so he could have lived for a few decades longer maybe even make it to 400 years.
Anyway just like most other species the bodies of witches and wizards degenerate with age. And so when old witches and wizards get dragonpox because of how old and fragile their body are even when they're given the cure for dragon pox many of them still die because of the damage done to their elderly bodies by the dragon pox, however if a wizard isn't that old the cure works perfectly fine. I believe slug hard mentioned this in the books too Draco Malfoy when he was talking about draco's grandfather saying that while he's sorry that his grandfather died he wasn't surprised because of getting dragonpox at his age.
The second thing Is why do you Harry Potter fan fiction writers love to place limitations on the magic in the world of Harry Potter that does not exist? The Fidelius Charm Has no limitations on what it can conceal so it doesn't matter how large Potter Manor is it can still be placed under the charm, at worst it might require multiple Potter's to work together to place the Fidelius charm on the Manor. Seriously if you needed to come up with a good excuse for why it's not under one you could have simply just said they didn't place it under the Fidelious charmed because it had not been necessary until now, after all it has been decades since the end of World War 2 and the defeat and imprisonment of Grindelwald.
Well this is interesting however I do have 2 things to say the first thing is that dragonpox does have a cure in fact dragonpox has had a cure since like the 14th or 15th century. And I'm pretty sure that they have progressively been improving the cure this entire time anyway the issue is that when a witch or a wizard gets drug and pox and they're very old after all the average lifespan of a witch or wizard is like a 140 years and I'm pretty sure that's dependent upon how magically powerful they are so for above average witches and wizards they would live even longer. After all the previous headmaster before Dumbledore Armando Dippett did live for like 354 to 355 years and even when he died, he didn't die from old age but from some kind of accident so he could have lived for a few decades longer maybe even make it to 400 years.
Anyway just like most other species the bodies of witches and wizards degenerate with age. And so when old witches and wizards get dragonpox because of how old and fragile their body are even when they're given the cure for dragon pox many of them still die because of the damage done to their elderly bodies by the dragon pox, however if a wizard isn't that old the cure works perfectly fine. I believe slug hard mentioned this in the books too Draco Malfoy when he was talking about draco's grandfather saying that while he's sorry that his grandfather died he wasn't surprised because of getting dragonpox at his age.
The second thing Is why do you Harry Potter fan fiction writers love to place limitations on the magic in the world of Harry Potter that does not exist? The Fidelius Charm Has no limitations on what it can conceal so it doesn't matter how large Potter Manor is it can still be placed under the charm, at worst it might require multiple Potter's to work together to place the Fidelius charm on the Manor. Seriously if you needed to come up with a good excuse for why it's not under one you could have simply just said they didn't place it under the Fidelious charmed because it had not been necessary until now, after all it has been decades since the end of World War 2 and the defeat and imprisonment of Grindelwald.
3/11 c70 Sophiamay
Hi there! Your story completely captivated me, and I couldn’t help but think about how amazing it would look in comic form.
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Hi there! Your story completely captivated me, and I couldn’t help but think about how amazing it would look in comic form.
I’m a digital artist available for commissions, and I specialize in collaborating with authors to adapt their stories into stunning comics. If this sounds like something you’d be interested in, I’d be happy to discuss the details and bring your story to life!
You can contact me on Discord (danban1247275) or Twitter ( Mariegrey90) to chat further. I’d love to hear your thoughts!
73/9 c69 Lizzarnia5887
I had issues with chapters 64 and 67 they said they were outdated for some reason
I had issues with chapters 64 and 67 they said they were outdated for some reason
3/5 c1 Guest
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3/4 c64 Guest
Thank you for the new chapter, cannot wait to see what comes next.
Thank you for the new chapter, cannot wait to see what comes next.
3/5 c69 Mando-Vet
Oh man, this just keeps going from bad to worse! Just when I think Harry can't possibly screw up anymore, he surprises me! Lol
Oh man, this just keeps going from bad to worse! Just when I think Harry can't possibly screw up anymore, he surprises me! Lol
3/4 c69 amortentiate
Good chapter. Good to see ol' Arcturus thinking it through. Can't wait to see Arcturus confronting Ted. That should make for some comic moments.
Cheers
Good chapter. Good to see ol' Arcturus thinking it through. Can't wait to see Arcturus confronting Ted. That should make for some comic moments.
Cheers
3/1 c52 Sextant
Honestly, I really like this story but some of it makes no sense. Why didn't Harry up all the information to his family?
Harry is, basically, traumatized because he lost his entire family and friends.
He goes to the past to fix things. But he isn't fixing anything. He is playing defense when he knows who the main death eaters are. Logically, he would have also told his family who they are and began assassinations.
Why isn't he on the offense? So he can play angsty teenager?
The biggest point of contention is that 9 months have gone by at this point and, knowing what Pettigrew did, has done nothing about it. Harry is skilled. He could have taken Peter, looked into his mind, or had Dorea do it, looked at his arm and then taken appropriate action. Instead, the cause of James and Lily's murders remain on the loose.
Honestly, I really like this story but some of it makes no sense. Why didn't Harry up all the information to his family?
Harry is, basically, traumatized because he lost his entire family and friends.
He goes to the past to fix things. But he isn't fixing anything. He is playing defense when he knows who the main death eaters are. Logically, he would have also told his family who they are and began assassinations.
Why isn't he on the offense? So he can play angsty teenager?
The biggest point of contention is that 9 months have gone by at this point and, knowing what Pettigrew did, has done nothing about it. Harry is skilled. He could have taken Peter, looked into his mind, or had Dorea do it, looked at his arm and then taken appropriate action. Instead, the cause of James and Lily's murders remain on the loose.
2/27 c39 Sextant
I'm confused. Harry is a twin to James but also a twin to, who would be, his maternal g-grandfather. Unless there is some absolutely crazy sub-plot in the works, just...what?
I'm confused. Harry is a twin to James but also a twin to, who would be, his maternal g-grandfather. Unless there is some absolutely crazy sub-plot in the works, just...what?