
1/20 c17 Dreymord
I tried to ignore the contradiction, but it keeps propping up: how does he have friends living in isolation? didn't you say he only ever tested at Ilvermony and never sat classes, as a cover story? so how can he have made friends or had classmates?
I tried to ignore the contradiction, but it keeps propping up: how does he have friends living in isolation? didn't you say he only ever tested at Ilvermony and never sat classes, as a cover story? so how can he have made friends or had classmates?
1/19 c15 Dreymord
This is quite different from canon. In canon, James and Sirius were the best in the entire school, grades wise, and that's despite spending more time on pranking than studying. Also, how come James never fought? didn't they pick on Snape here? doesn't Snape fight back? I seem to remember he even attacked them himself if he could find one of them alone.
This is quite different from canon. In canon, James and Sirius were the best in the entire school, grades wise, and that's despite spending more time on pranking than studying. Also, how come James never fought? didn't they pick on Snape here? doesn't Snape fight back? I seem to remember he even attacked them himself if he could find one of them alone.
1/19 c14 Dreymord
Dumbledore claiming something is for the greater good is very ironic - he came up with the slogan, then renounced it after what Grindelwald did with it. I'm surprised he'd try to justify himself that way.
Dumbledore claiming something is for the greater good is very ironic - he came up with the slogan, then renounced it after what Grindelwald did with it. I'm surprised he'd try to justify himself that way.
1/14 c62 Guest
Another wonderful job on this story, great new chapter.
Another wonderful job on this story, great new chapter.
1/15 c62 Fenrir070
Never expected that from Peter. This has to be one of the more interesting solutions to the "Peter problem" that I've read from time travel stories. I've seen Peter redeemed, gone full evil and even killed beforehand but never this. Liked the scene with the reveal as well as D's reaction. Thanks for writing and posting.
Never expected that from Peter. This has to be one of the more interesting solutions to the "Peter problem" that I've read from time travel stories. I've seen Peter redeemed, gone full evil and even killed beforehand but never this. Liked the scene with the reveal as well as D's reaction. Thanks for writing and posting.
1/7 c61 Mando-Vet
Excellent chapter; I'm curious what will change, now that everyone knows the truth. I look forward to seeing what happens next! :)
Excellent chapter; I'm curious what will change, now that everyone knows the truth. I look forward to seeing what happens next! :)
1/7 c38 flys36
Wait... doesn't Harry look like James? So does that mean Lily is attracted to a guy who looks like her grandfather?
Wait... doesn't Harry look like James? So does that mean Lily is attracted to a guy who looks like her grandfather?