
8/9/2023 c10
1blcoachmac
Them there idiots aren't long fer the story if they attempt anything against Harry, Charlus and especially Dorea!

Them there idiots aren't long fer the story if they attempt anything against Harry, Charlus and especially Dorea!
8/8/2023 c17
17griffin blackwood
Love the rumor of harry replacing james as that so hilariously belieabvle

Love the rumor of harry replacing james as that so hilariously belieabvle
8/8/2023 c17 mike3308
I'm glad that Harry came out on top in the battle with the upper year Slytherins.
I'm glad that Harry came out on top in the battle with the upper year Slytherins.
8/8/2023 c17 atrelis
Loved the chapter! Glad to see Elaina learning about wizarding history and standing up for herself and Harry
Loved the chapter! Glad to see Elaina learning about wizarding history and standing up for herself and Harry
8/8/2023 c17 scyfly
that wasnt very smart of him
he turns his back on his assailants and gets cursed for it, so it wasnt confidence but a bluff made in overconfidence. then fully having the chance to make a big stink about this brutal attack he takes them down gently as possibly with more threats. you know the same threats he just made and got called out on. how long before he gets cursed in his back again?
that wasnt very smart of him
he turns his back on his assailants and gets cursed for it, so it wasnt confidence but a bluff made in overconfidence. then fully having the chance to make a big stink about this brutal attack he takes them down gently as possibly with more threats. you know the same threats he just made and got called out on. how long before he gets cursed in his back again?
8/8/2023 c1
1BeautifulCherryBlossom
Found this in someone's favorite list, decided to check it out and I got to say - it is of to a great start. Will finish this before tonight probably and then wait anxiously for an update.
Back in time stories (which I love - it's my vice) can be very cliche and silly but this does not seem to have that slimy feel to it. I like it.

Found this in someone's favorite list, decided to check it out and I got to say - it is of to a great start. Will finish this before tonight probably and then wait anxiously for an update.
Back in time stories (which I love - it's my vice) can be very cliche and silly but this does not seem to have that slimy feel to it. I like it.
8/2/2023 c11 Critical2023
just read the flashback and I can only see him after a few days in a dorm room full of others screaming names of people dying that isn't born yet. the Voldemort affiliated blacks won't have to hire anyone to do anything to him, because he will either be institutionalized or in Azkaban after waking up firing spells, hurting or killing a dorm mate. I liked it up until this point where you never resolved his flashback issues earlier. good luck but I won't bother reading to find out which chapter you have James and Sirius find out, before they should, he's James and lily's son.
just read the flashback and I can only see him after a few days in a dorm room full of others screaming names of people dying that isn't born yet. the Voldemort affiliated blacks won't have to hire anyone to do anything to him, because he will either be institutionalized or in Azkaban after waking up firing spells, hurting or killing a dorm mate. I liked it up until this point where you never resolved his flashback issues earlier. good luck but I won't bother reading to find out which chapter you have James and Sirius find out, before they should, he's James and lily's son.
7/25/2023 c16 EP
SYMPA
SYMPA
7/26/2023 c16 Hands Off MY Wolfie
A nice look at the younger group of his parents' age. Too many of the Harry meets the young Marauders have turned into a Marauder story with Harry in the background. Thank you for keeping Harry at the forefront.
Thanks for sharing.
A nice look at the younger group of his parents' age. Too many of the Harry meets the young Marauders have turned into a Marauder story with Harry in the background. Thank you for keeping Harry at the forefront.
Thanks for sharing.