for RWBY: The Road to Paradise2/8/2023 c3 Concerned Guest
Hey, it's me again. Your writing has certainly improved since Remnant's New Visitor. Keep it up.
For your question, I'd personally say that you could rewrite the current chapters and continue on with this story, but if you have a new plan for the direction of the story, then I suppose creating a separate story could work fine.
As for the 'try not to cringe at my own work' rule: don't worry about that. It's always natural for someone to cringe at something they've done previously, it's a part of improving and realizing that a person could've done better before if they knew.
Hey, it's me again. Your writing has certainly improved since Remnant's New Visitor. Keep it up.
For your question, I'd personally say that you could rewrite the current chapters and continue on with this story, but if you have a new plan for the direction of the story, then I suppose creating a separate story could work fine.
As for the 'try not to cringe at my own work' rule: don't worry about that. It's always natural for someone to cringe at something they've done previously, it's a part of improving and realizing that a person could've done better before if they knew.
1/4/2023 c1 Singular Ash
Also the guy below doesn’t know what their talking about. The music is perfect and i think it only enhances the scene. Music is a big part of rwby in my opinion so it really works with this fandom.
I think i would find it a bit annoying with any other fandom but not this one.
Also the guy below doesn’t know what their talking about. The music is perfect and i think it only enhances the scene. Music is a big part of rwby in my opinion so it really works with this fandom.
I think i would find it a bit annoying with any other fandom but not this one.
1/4/2023 c1 Singular Ash
Dark stuff aside. I think this was an amazing start. It’s too early to judge the story so I’ll give an opinion on that later.
Now for the writing. It seems very good from what i can see.
I’m actually very interested in seeing what you have planed for this. So much so that i would have offered to edit for you but I don’t think you really need it.
I’ll just leave comments about my opinions and criticisms for now.
Dark stuff aside. I think this was an amazing start. It’s too early to judge the story so I’ll give an opinion on that later.
Now for the writing. It seems very good from what i can see.
I’m actually very interested in seeing what you have planed for this. So much so that i would have offered to edit for you but I don’t think you really need it.
I’ll just leave comments about my opinions and criticisms for now.
1/3/2023 c1 Fatswordsman
Not a bad start but personally i would prefer you kill the bully at least because i hate a goody two_shoes oc but this is just my own opinion keep showing us what you story have to offer and good luck. (P.s: Sorry if i miss spell any word because English isnt my first language.)
Not a bad start but personally i would prefer you kill the bully at least because i hate a goody two_shoes oc but this is just my own opinion keep showing us what you story have to offer and good luck. (P.s: Sorry if i miss spell any word because English isnt my first language.)
1/3/2023 c1 
2selfishgecko
It’s not a horrible start though it would be nice if you didn’t have the music mixed in with what’s going on in the story.
2selfishgeckoIt’s not a horrible start though it would be nice if you didn’t have the music mixed in with what’s going on in the story.