
5/12 c1 areianjacks
Hi areianjacks here,
I just finished reading your story, and I wanted to take a moment to say how much I loved it! The way you crafted the characters, the storyline, and the emotions throughout was truly Absorbing. It kept me hooked from start to finish, and I really appreciate the effort and creativity you put into it.
Thank you for sharing such an amazing piece of work, I genuinely enjoyed every moment of it! Keep up the great work, and I look forward to reading more from you
Hi areianjacks here,
I just finished reading your story, and I wanted to take a moment to say how much I loved it! The way you crafted the characters, the storyline, and the emotions throughout was truly Absorbing. It kept me hooked from start to finish, and I really appreciate the effort and creativity you put into it.
Thank you for sharing such an amazing piece of work, I genuinely enjoyed every moment of it! Keep up the great work, and I look forward to reading more from you
5/8 c8 AJGuardian
Okay. I've read all the chapters in one go. Went to the reviews and found people with VERY SHORT ATTENTION SPANS.
You've always had shifting POVs and suddenly these people are worried about the Rachni queen. I'm pretty sure you will go back to show us how Harry handled it, RIGHT? You won't make an ass out of my assumption here, hopefully.
Good luck to the next chapter.
Okay. I've read all the chapters in one go. Went to the reviews and found people with VERY SHORT ATTENTION SPANS.
You've always had shifting POVs and suddenly these people are worried about the Rachni queen. I'm pretty sure you will go back to show us how Harry handled it, RIGHT? You won't make an ass out of my assumption here, hopefully.
Good luck to the next chapter.
4/26 c2 Seigga
Harry chastising LilyMufasa VoiceYou could have been killed. You deliberately disobeyed me, and what's worse, you put Leia in danger!"
Harry chastising LilyMufasa VoiceYou could have been killed. You deliberately disobeyed me, and what's worse, you put Leia in danger!"
4/23 c6 Guest
les togruta suporte pafaitement les climas froid asoka a du aller sur illume une planète de glace pour trouver sont cristale kayber
les togruta suporte pafaitement les climas froid asoka a du aller sur illume une planète de glace pour trouver sont cristale kayber
4/7 c6 Guest
la salle des archive du vaissaux sont pas des megaoktek mes plus taux des petaoktek
la salle des archive du vaissaux sont pas des megaoktek mes plus taux des petaoktek
4/5 c8 Jimhh
I am enjoying your story, I have read 1000's of stories on this site and others, you have a gift for story telling. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Thank you.
I am enjoying your story, I have read 1000's of stories on this site and others, you have a gift for story telling. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Thank you.
3/23 c8 Guest
voldemorts a aucun chance contre harry qui est un seignieur noir des sits et j éspaire qu il ne revient pas
voldemorts a aucun chance contre harry qui est un seignieur noir des sits et j éspaire qu il ne revient pas
3/22 c7 Guest
le chapitres 8 n est pas la
le chapitres 8 n est pas la
3/22 c6 Duder
Just nit-picking a bit; but Megabytes are NOT a huge amount of storage. They're actually the third lowest in terms of data (for instance 10 GIGABYTES 1 gigabyte 1,000 megabytes is an average library's worth of info [116, 481.6 books, ebooks, and assorted other media]). The average cell phone now holds anywhere from 128 gigabytes to over 1,000 gigabytes (1 TERABYTE) and Supercomputers have processing power in the PETABYTE (1,000 terabytes) range.
Considering this takes place in the future where even these vast sums would be seen as obsolete and small by humanity; and then put that against the vastly technologically superior Sith Empire? Yeah megabytes just don't cut it.
Sorry for the lecture, but the thought just would not stop bugging me.
Just nit-picking a bit; but Megabytes are NOT a huge amount of storage. They're actually the third lowest in terms of data (for instance 10 GIGABYTES 1 gigabyte 1,000 megabytes is an average library's worth of info [116, 481.6 books, ebooks, and assorted other media]). The average cell phone now holds anywhere from 128 gigabytes to over 1,000 gigabytes (1 TERABYTE) and Supercomputers have processing power in the PETABYTE (1,000 terabytes) range.
Considering this takes place in the future where even these vast sums would be seen as obsolete and small by humanity; and then put that against the vastly technologically superior Sith Empire? Yeah megabytes just don't cut it.
Sorry for the lecture, but the thought just would not stop bugging me.
3/22 c8 Guest
Lily is getting a lesson in ruling
Lily is getting a lesson in ruling
3/21 c1 Guest
c est pour quand les chapitres suivant
c est pour quand les chapitres suivant
3/21 c1 Guest
merci pour le nouveaux chapitres je nr l est pas encore j èspaire qu il y en n aura d autre
merci pour le nouveaux chapitres je nr l est pas encore j èspaire qu il y en n aura d autre
3/23 c7
2AnimeFanReader01
Personally, I would have chunked Voldemort into a black hole and be done with it. Due to time dilation, stars can be born and die before he knew what happened. If Harry wanted to die, it would be pretty simple to detonate the bomb i'd put in the box with him.

Personally, I would have chunked Voldemort into a black hole and be done with it. Due to time dilation, stars can be born and die before he knew what happened. If Harry wanted to die, it would be pretty simple to detonate the bomb i'd put in the box with him.