for Back, Black, and Ready to Snack12/3/2024 c87 
2Black Doberman
Great chapter, and again hope everything gets better for ya. keep up the good work.
2Black DobermanGreat chapter, and again hope everything gets better for ya. keep up the good work.
12/3/2024 c15 Church21
Bah I give up; really wanted to like this. It had such a cool premis and so much potential. I kind of suffered through him going to school and dry humping all things weasly even though he was supposed to become the black heir. Worst case scenario I thought at this time was going to be i’d get thru it and come to the end it would end with a Hydrus/Ginny pairing. But him confessing everything to Dumbledor in an emotional breakdown just kind ended things for me. Best I can tell Harry returned to a Voldimort free world so since their was nothing to fight he wanted to slowly turn the more conservative half of the wizarding world into dumbledor ideologs so they can all worship and kiss his feet together. Wished for something similar but on a more nutral ideological rout but i did enjoy for the most part of what i read. Thanks for the content. Really wish he would have leaned more black rout in this. Not evil but not muggle loving ether
Bah I give up; really wanted to like this. It had such a cool premis and so much potential. I kind of suffered through him going to school and dry humping all things weasly even though he was supposed to become the black heir. Worst case scenario I thought at this time was going to be i’d get thru it and come to the end it would end with a Hydrus/Ginny pairing. But him confessing everything to Dumbledor in an emotional breakdown just kind ended things for me. Best I can tell Harry returned to a Voldimort free world so since their was nothing to fight he wanted to slowly turn the more conservative half of the wizarding world into dumbledor ideologs so they can all worship and kiss his feet together. Wished for something similar but on a more nutral ideological rout but i did enjoy for the most part of what i read. Thanks for the content. Really wish he would have leaned more black rout in this. Not evil but not muggle loving ether
11/29/2024 c81 1bleachorange
I think I was reeled back in a little bit with the dialing back of the god storyline. I still would have liked what the story was initially shaping up to be more, but this is better than it was in my last commentary
1bleachorangeI think I was reeled back in a little bit with the dialing back of the god storyline. I still would have liked what the story was initially shaping up to be more, but this is better than it was in my last commentary
11/29/2024 c73 bleachorange
I feel like a lot of effort was put into this chapter, and it was just a bunch of mumbo jumbo. Im sorry to the author, but i completely dislike how youre going about writing this plot point. Its overly long, and quite cliche.
I feel like a lot of effort was put into this chapter, and it was just a bunch of mumbo jumbo. Im sorry to the author, but i completely dislike how youre going about writing this plot point. Its overly long, and quite cliche.
11/28/2024 c68 bleachorange
At this point I am just coasting on the remnants of this storyline. I was quite enjoying just harry dealing with his trauma and learning to live again. Then weird god shit happened, and now we have necromancy and whatnot. I havent bothered reading about greg past the first couple interludes as it really just doesnt interest me at all. More power to those it does interest, but dont count me among that number. Im mostly just whingeing the story I thought this was about has completely turned into something else entirely and its a damn shame.
At this point I am just coasting on the remnants of this storyline. I was quite enjoying just harry dealing with his trauma and learning to live again. Then weird god shit happened, and now we have necromancy and whatnot. I havent bothered reading about greg past the first couple interludes as it really just doesnt interest me at all. More power to those it does interest, but dont count me among that number. Im mostly just whingeing the story I thought this was about has completely turned into something else entirely and its a damn shame.
11/28/2024 c62 bleachorange
Its already obvious that the 3rd bargain cant break until the repercussions of hydrus being harry are on the table. No need to play games about it.
Its already obvious that the 3rd bargain cant break until the repercussions of hydrus being harry are on the table. No need to play games about it.
11/21/2024 c20 Anton Vlasov
Сюжет хороший минут только то что прошлое сюда запихнули поттера, он больше раздражает.
Сюжет хороший минут только то что прошлое сюда запихнули поттера, он больше раздражает.
11/21/2024 c15 Anton Vlasov
15 глава отвратная мне не нудно читать прошлое поттера он бесполезно для мня.
15 глава отвратная мне не нудно читать прошлое поттера он бесполезно для мня.
11/10/2024 c39 Guest
The phoenix tempering dumbledore's darker impulses for so long he doesn't realize it anymore is pretty neat as an idea.
The phoenix tempering dumbledore's darker impulses for so long he doesn't realize it anymore is pretty neat as an idea.
11/9/2024 c36 Guest
The rambling, sidequests and other events popping off make the fic feel like more of a story happening in a world than a world crafted just to tell the story. It's better that way.
The rambling, sidequests and other events popping off make the fic feel like more of a story happening in a world than a world crafted just to tell the story. It's better that way.
10/25/2024 c41 11Kwon An Na
I don't normally review until the end. But OH MY EFFING GOD. This story is bloody brilliant. I love the twists and the turns and the tops turveys. Incredible...
11Kwon An NaI don't normally review until the end. But OH MY EFFING GOD. This story is bloody brilliant. I love the twists and the turns and the tops turveys. Incredible...