for Back, Black, and Ready to Snack11/29/2024 c81 
1bleachorange
I think I was reeled back in a little bit with the dialing back of the god storyline. I still would have liked what the story was initially shaping up to be more, but this is better than it was in my last commentary
1bleachorangeI think I was reeled back in a little bit with the dialing back of the god storyline. I still would have liked what the story was initially shaping up to be more, but this is better than it was in my last commentary
11/29/2024 c73 bleachorange
I feel like a lot of effort was put into this chapter, and it was just a bunch of mumbo jumbo. Im sorry to the author, but i completely dislike how youre going about writing this plot point. Its overly long, and quite cliche.
I feel like a lot of effort was put into this chapter, and it was just a bunch of mumbo jumbo. Im sorry to the author, but i completely dislike how youre going about writing this plot point. Its overly long, and quite cliche.
11/28/2024 c68 bleachorange
At this point I am just coasting on the remnants of this storyline. I was quite enjoying just harry dealing with his trauma and learning to live again. Then weird god shit happened, and now we have necromancy and whatnot. I havent bothered reading about greg past the first couple interludes as it really just doesnt interest me at all. More power to those it does interest, but dont count me among that number. Im mostly just whingeing the story I thought this was about has completely turned into something else entirely and its a damn shame.
At this point I am just coasting on the remnants of this storyline. I was quite enjoying just harry dealing with his trauma and learning to live again. Then weird god shit happened, and now we have necromancy and whatnot. I havent bothered reading about greg past the first couple interludes as it really just doesnt interest me at all. More power to those it does interest, but dont count me among that number. Im mostly just whingeing the story I thought this was about has completely turned into something else entirely and its a damn shame.
11/28/2024 c62 bleachorange
Its already obvious that the 3rd bargain cant break until the repercussions of hydrus being harry are on the table. No need to play games about it.
Its already obvious that the 3rd bargain cant break until the repercussions of hydrus being harry are on the table. No need to play games about it.
11/21/2024 c20 Anton Vlasov
Сюжет хороший минут только то что прошлое сюда запихнули поттера, он больше раздражает.
Сюжет хороший минут только то что прошлое сюда запихнули поттера, он больше раздражает.
11/21/2024 c15 Anton Vlasov
15 глава отвратная мне не нудно читать прошлое поттера он бесполезно для мня.
15 глава отвратная мне не нудно читать прошлое поттера он бесполезно для мня.
11/10/2024 c39 Guest
The phoenix tempering dumbledore's darker impulses for so long he doesn't realize it anymore is pretty neat as an idea.
The phoenix tempering dumbledore's darker impulses for so long he doesn't realize it anymore is pretty neat as an idea.
11/9/2024 c36 Guest
The rambling, sidequests and other events popping off make the fic feel like more of a story happening in a world than a world crafted just to tell the story. It's better that way.
The rambling, sidequests and other events popping off make the fic feel like more of a story happening in a world than a world crafted just to tell the story. It's better that way.
10/25/2024 c41 11Kwon An Na
I don't normally review until the end. But OH MY EFFING GOD. This story is bloody brilliant. I love the twists and the turns and the tops turveys. Incredible...
11Kwon An NaI don't normally review until the end. But OH MY EFFING GOD. This story is bloody brilliant. I love the twists and the turns and the tops turveys. Incredible...
9/19/2024 c31 Guest
What is the point in asking for reviews if you're not going to take the response on board? You just seem to want an echo chamber with everyone patting you on the back for doing a good job. Anything critical you ignore and say 'nah, Idgaf about that, next'. Selective hearing is not a good thing, especially if you want to improve as a writer. If you want to improve and want reviews, then you should also be willing to put your ego aside and actually read and think about what people are saying in response to your work. I'm not saying you should conform your story to meet other people's wishes, but ignoring any criticism you don't like is dumb and arrogant.
What is the point in asking for reviews if you're not going to take the response on board? You just seem to want an echo chamber with everyone patting you on the back for doing a good job. Anything critical you ignore and say 'nah, Idgaf about that, next'. Selective hearing is not a good thing, especially if you want to improve as a writer. If you want to improve and want reviews, then you should also be willing to put your ego aside and actually read and think about what people are saying in response to your work. I'm not saying you should conform your story to meet other people's wishes, but ignoring any criticism you don't like is dumb and arrogant.