for DIES RWBY Also sprach Zarathustra(oldwriting practice)6/25/2023 c1 Unknown
Well… talk about a waste of time and "effort"… if this story can ever be called that. Horrible grasp of grammar followed by rushed storytelling, not to mention the questionable choice of characters. Why the fuck would you pick Ruby of all people to fulfill such a role? It seems like you just making this story up and out from your ass as you go. AND you don’t even take the time to correct any mistakes you’ve made. Overall, this POS seems more like it was sloppily written by someone who’s still in elementary school.
Well… talk about a waste of time and "effort"… if this story can ever be called that. Horrible grasp of grammar followed by rushed storytelling, not to mention the questionable choice of characters. Why the fuck would you pick Ruby of all people to fulfill such a role? It seems like you just making this story up and out from your ass as you go. AND you don’t even take the time to correct any mistakes you’ve made. Overall, this POS seems more like it was sloppily written by someone who’s still in elementary school.
1/24/2023 c2 HatsuneRin
I love that
Chi chi chi,
Chi na hoshii
Guilochinu ni
So so no wo
No me mono o wo
Guillochinu no kawaki o iie su to nu
Hoshii ni no wa chi, chi, chi
Funfact i know from memory so yea
Love it
I love that
Chi chi chi,
Chi na hoshii
Guilochinu ni
So so no wo
No me mono o wo
Guillochinu no kawaki o iie su to nu
Hoshii ni no wa chi, chi, chi
Funfact i know from memory so yea
Love it
1/24/2023 c9 Zarathustra ubermensch
This is going to he quite rough because these plots won't naturally merge together unless I have some lee way which is going to be a bit of a problem
This is going to he quite rough because these plots won't naturally merge together unless I have some lee way which is going to be a bit of a problem
1/24/2023 c1 123ABIR123
Bad grammar aside this story has potential, looking forward to future chapters. By the way you should get a beta reader.
Bad grammar aside this story has potential, looking forward to future chapters. By the way you should get a beta reader.
1/13/2023 c3 Zarathustra ubermensch
yes also the next few chapters are going to take bit I have to transcribe episode 3 of rwby and then alter events and then make team placements for jaune ugh I'm going probably use Beatrice lol
yes also the next few chapters are going to take bit I have to transcribe episode 3 of rwby and then alter events and then make team placements for jaune ugh I'm going probably use Beatrice lol
1/13/2023 c3 
7marseldagistani
So... we can expect Pyrrha to be the immortal goddes of death and destruction?
7marseldagistaniSo... we can expect Pyrrha to be the immortal goddes of death and destruction?
1/13/2023 c1 1SneakyDevil
Yo! The reason nah one wahll read dahs stary ahs because aht ahs a absolute traahnwreck of absolute what da fuckery a' I is so deep nonsense. What it is, like, Mama! You is a utter ahllahterate moron who has never read words on a page before. What it is, Mama! I pahty ya foo' for ya spawn shall truly be cursed.
1SneakyDevilYo! The reason nah one wahll read dahs stary ahs because aht ahs a absolute traahnwreck of absolute what da fuckery a' I is so deep nonsense. What it is, like, Mama! You is a utter ahllahterate moron who has never read words on a page before. What it is, Mama! I pahty ya foo' for ya spawn shall truly be cursed.
1/10/2023 c1 Zarathustra ubermensch
I got tired of dies irae visual novel and bad anime adaptation being ignored I will have it no longer
I got tired of dies irae visual novel and bad anime adaptation being ignored I will have it no longer