for A Fake Familiar Reborn3/14 c31 Bell Cranel
One very strange "Guest" needs to shut up and just accept other people's opinions, because in normal societies there is free will. Although it is obvious that he does not like it when people just share their ideas and only the Author will decide to use them if he wants!
One very strange "Guest" needs to shut up and just accept other people's opinions, because in normal societies there is free will. Although it is obvious that he does not like it when people just share their ideas and only the Author will decide to use them if he wants!
3/15 c1 daffazahran12
great chapter can hope to see the next one, i think ill be fun to ad caster Gilgamesh into the roster seem kinda chaotic thou
great chapter can hope to see the next one, i think ill be fun to ad caster Gilgamesh into the roster seem kinda chaotic thou
3/15 c6 AnAddictedReader
Ajuka leaving a key to his labs, and thus logically, unsecured? I know you're trying to build some conflict for your fic but that's just taking the easy path.
Ajuka leaving a key to his labs, and thus logically, unsecured? I know you're trying to build some conflict for your fic but that's just taking the easy path.
3/12 c31 Guest
To the Danmachi fanboy with ideas. Shut up.
To the Danmachi fanboy with ideas. Shut up.
3/10 c31 Guest
It is obvious to me that is that you have certainly made an effort in doing your homework on Emiya personality. Other authors just fit him into a certain category. You have to be in one of the top three authors who writes stories so good that it makes me and other fans hungry for more.
It is obvious to me that is that you have certainly made an effort in doing your homework on Emiya personality. Other authors just fit him into a certain category. You have to be in one of the top three authors who writes stories so good that it makes me and other fans hungry for more.
53/4 c31 Bell Cranel
I advise the so-called "Guest" to shut up and tolerate my opinion as well as the opinions of other people!
I advise the so-called "Guest" to shut up and tolerate my opinion as well as the opinions of other people!
3/3 c31 Guest
Penemue must be the new Master of Semiramis,please
Penemue must be the new Master of Semiramis,please
3/3 c31 E
Neat. I think Rider and Emiya have good chemistry, much better than Rias and Emiya to be sure. I know the latter is the main pairing, but I only tolerate it. Not gonna be mad if it continues or anything, lol. I just wanted to mention that I think Rider is a more interesting partner in general.
Outside of that, this story has continued to be interesting, as expected.
I await more, as always.
Neat. I think Rider and Emiya have good chemistry, much better than Rias and Emiya to be sure. I know the latter is the main pairing, but I only tolerate it. Not gonna be mad if it continues or anything, lol. I just wanted to mention that I think Rider is a more interesting partner in general.
Outside of that, this story has continued to be interesting, as expected.
I await more, as always.
3/4 c13 The Timeline
Yeah Gilgamesh is arrogant but he deserve it he is the one who ended the time of the gods and the strongest with every weapon and sacred phantasm ever in his vault
Yeah Gilgamesh is arrogant but he deserve it he is the one who ended the time of the gods and the strongest with every weapon and sacred phantasm ever in his vault
3/4 c29 The Timeline
Damn the app is still having bug for me i only see until this chapter when there is 31
Damn the app is still having bug for me i only see until this chapter when there is 31
3/4 c31 evilstatistic19
Good chapter. I'm looking forward to the next one. If you want/need to buff Emiya in the future, you could have him class change into an alter-ego class servant, fusing him with his alter self and Muramasa, for instance. Considering some of the more powerful divine entities towards the end of DxD, you could have him fuse with Susanoo and Höðr like the alien god did, so Emiya remains relevant without being too overpowered.
Good chapter. I'm looking forward to the next one. If you want/need to buff Emiya in the future, you could have him class change into an alter-ego class servant, fusing him with his alter self and Muramasa, for instance. Considering some of the more powerful divine entities towards the end of DxD, you could have him fuse with Susanoo and Höðr like the alien god did, so Emiya remains relevant without being too overpowered.
3/2 c31 Guest123
To be fair, Altria was born with the concept of the red dragon. In her interlude, she mentions that her mother became pregnant with the concept of the red dragon, which is why Altria has the essence of that dragon.
To be fair, Altria was born with the concept of the red dragon. In her interlude, she mentions that her mother became pregnant with the concept of the red dragon, which is why Altria has the essence of that dragon.