for Pokémon: The Sinnoh Champion Cup9/24/2024 c4 
70OPFan37
This was a nice surprise to see after a while.
Honestly, this is a good chapter of both establishing characters and setting up intrigue for the roles others will play and how the relationships between characters can develop.
Don't worry too much about grammar, being a nice read is what truly matters. Good luck with things!
70OPFan37This was a nice surprise to see after a while.
Honestly, this is a good chapter of both establishing characters and setting up intrigue for the roles others will play and how the relationships between characters can develop.
Don't worry too much about grammar, being a nice read is what truly matters. Good luck with things!
9/1/2024 c4 Ma3Mc3Mu3
Can you describe what Cynthia looks like 20 years later? When do we see Flint after his retirement?
Can you describe what Cynthia looks like 20 years later? When do we see Flint after his retirement?
8/27/2024 c3 2SilverMark16
GIRL!
There is nothing incorrect about your grammar! Either case, I want to see more of these characters, aight? Get to it! And also...
MORE CYNTHIA PLEASE :))))) ::CarelessWhispersIntensifies:: OHHHHH CYNTHIA! OHHHHHH CYNTHIA! YEAAHHH MOMMY CYNTHIA :D
Anyway, Cynthia is best character already and she hasn't even showed up yet :D
2SilverMark16GIRL!
There is nothing incorrect about your grammar! Either case, I want to see more of these characters, aight? Get to it! And also...
MORE CYNTHIA PLEASE :))))) ::CarelessWhispersIntensifies:: OHHHHH CYNTHIA! OHHHHHH CYNTHIA! YEAAHHH MOMMY CYNTHIA :D
Anyway, Cynthia is best character already and she hasn't even showed up yet :D
8/27/2024 c1 SilverMark16
Sweet! Can't wait to submit!
Also, extra points for including my girl, Cynthia!
Ohhhhhh Cynthia. ::CARELESSWHISPERSINTENSIFIES:: OHHHHHH CYNTHIA! YEAAAAH BABY! :D :D :D
Sweet! Can't wait to submit!
Also, extra points for including my girl, Cynthia!
Ohhhhhh Cynthia. ::CARELESSWHISPERSINTENSIFIES:: OHHHHHH CYNTHIA! YEAAAAH BABY! :D :D :D
6/9/2023 c3 fxplscomeback
Farla bb lets not get all worked up over a pokemon SYOC. Sempi is actually doing something that brings positivity to people. Shes built a community full of love and what have you done? "oh woe is me i must destroy writers confidence waaaaaa"
smd bb xxxxx
Farla bb lets not get all worked up over a pokemon SYOC. Sempi is actually doing something that brings positivity to people. Shes built a community full of love and what have you done? "oh woe is me i must destroy writers confidence waaaaaa"
smd bb xxxxx
4/4/2023 c3 4Epifanio Therion
Here we are! The reveal of the cast for this wonderful story of adventure! I am very excited to see what role each of these folks would play as a whole during this story~ And I am very happy to see that Aditi and Kane were accepted for this story as they were quite fun to write their app! I'm very excited to see what they would do or push the plot for the whole story! Good luck Sempi!
4Epifanio TherionHere we are! The reveal of the cast for this wonderful story of adventure! I am very excited to see what role each of these folks would play as a whole during this story~ And I am very happy to see that Aditi and Kane were accepted for this story as they were quite fun to write their app! I'm very excited to see what they would do or push the plot for the whole story! Good luck Sempi!
2/1/2023 c3 KiraYamato827
I have a quick question: what will happen to all of the Gym Challenger OCs? There are about 5 Challengers (6 if you count Zia), so will there be more available slots, or will only 2 OCs be accepted?
I have a quick question: what will happen to all of the Gym Challenger OCs? There are about 5 Challengers (6 if you count Zia), so will there be more available slots, or will only 2 OCs be accepted?
1/14/2023 c2 5Other Senpai
Farla: Now my sister is many things but none of them are a bad writer, she may not have a bachelors degree in English but she has produced 2 successful SYOC’s that she consistently updates and has created a community wherein she is constantly active and available.
SYOC’s do tend to die out quickly yes, but she has the resume to back up the fact that she isn’t one of those writers. She also clearly states in the chapter that this story won’t be updated until of one her others story’s are complete .
And finally, the grammar police. You might actually have a point in you’re argument if you were right, but you’re not. Play a Pokémon game or read the manga and you’ll clearly see Sempi uses the proper grammar when it comes to referring to Pokémon.
Reviews are meant to offer criticism of course, but when you assume things about my sister that she’s a bad writer or won’t finish what she started, then imma have to say some words.
Let’s not have it happen again xoxoxo
5Other SenpaiFarla: Now my sister is many things but none of them are a bad writer, she may not have a bachelors degree in English but she has produced 2 successful SYOC’s that she consistently updates and has created a community wherein she is constantly active and available.
SYOC’s do tend to die out quickly yes, but she has the resume to back up the fact that she isn’t one of those writers. She also clearly states in the chapter that this story won’t be updated until of one her others story’s are complete .
And finally, the grammar police. You might actually have a point in you’re argument if you were right, but you’re not. Play a Pokémon game or read the manga and you’ll clearly see Sempi uses the proper grammar when it comes to referring to Pokémon.
Reviews are meant to offer criticism of course, but when you assume things about my sister that she’s a bad writer or won’t finish what she started, then imma have to say some words.
Let’s not have it happen again xoxoxo
1/14/2023 c2 SureJahn
OMG, I Love PokeMon So Much, I Love Ash’s Pikachu, I Love SYOCS! I Think That This Will Be Awesome!
OMG, I Love PokeMon So Much, I Love Ash’s Pikachu, I Love SYOCS! I Think That This Will Be Awesome!
1/14/2023 c1 178Farla
You know, I'd explain that SYOC stories don't work well in practice, and are pretty much certain to end up burning out midway in for a lot of reasons, but you appear to have a bunch of these already, none of which you finished, so I feel like you should be familiar with the terrible pitfalls and how none of the supposed benefits will actually materialize.
[Dawn's Empoleon ]
["Yes, mom?" ]
You wouldn’t capitalize animal or mouse or dragon, so you shouldn’t capitalize words like pokemon or pikachu or charizard. The only time you should capitalize it is if you’re using it as the pokemon’s name, ie, Ash’s pikachu is called Pikachu. This is because you only capitalize when it’s a proper noun, which are the names of places or things. Similar reasoning should be applied to any other words you’re thinking of capitalizing, like trainer or professor or gym - and when you're using it in place of her name, like above, it should be written Mom.
178FarlaYou know, I'd explain that SYOC stories don't work well in practice, and are pretty much certain to end up burning out midway in for a lot of reasons, but you appear to have a bunch of these already, none of which you finished, so I feel like you should be familiar with the terrible pitfalls and how none of the supposed benefits will actually materialize.
[Dawn's Empoleon ]
["Yes, mom?" ]
You wouldn’t capitalize animal or mouse or dragon, so you shouldn’t capitalize words like pokemon or pikachu or charizard. The only time you should capitalize it is if you’re using it as the pokemon’s name, ie, Ash’s pikachu is called Pikachu. This is because you only capitalize when it’s a proper noun, which are the names of places or things. Similar reasoning should be applied to any other words you’re thinking of capitalizing, like trainer or professor or gym - and when you're using it in place of her name, like above, it should be written Mom.