for Fate: I Will Eventually Become the Hero of Justice
112/24/2023 c274 Khavros
im curious if morgan ever got arcuied to mystic eye her before they left or not.
im curious if morgan ever got arcuied to mystic eye her before they left or not.
12/24/2023 c274 The Final Faux
Ah yes, beat me over the head a few more times with this "Shirou Guinevere" nonsense, why don't you? It's still incredibly stupid, and I don't care what level of justification the author reaches for; it's not going to become any less stupid. If all of that worthless trash was excised, this would be an amazing fic so far. But noooo! Gotta keep mentioning that nonsense! Ugh... At least the REAL Guinevere was interesting. Being a fairy and custodian of Excalibur, she played a semi-important role.
However, on a side note, I will gripe that so many conflicts arose in this arc out of nowhere, such as the "Little Ice Age", Vortigern, and Crimson Moon, compared to what the actual King Arthur went through. The "Little Ice Age" would have killed everyone without future knowledge, Vortigern was too OP and would have killed everyone without Shirou's own OP skills and future knowledge, and both Crimson Moon and Attila should already be dead by ~800 CE (the approximate era of King Arthur). But hey, stories are driven by conflict, and Shirou was too OP for anything less than some serious heavy hitters as adversaries. Now I'm curious of how things will pan out now that he's back in the present (OR IS HE?).
Ah yes, beat me over the head a few more times with this "Shirou Guinevere" nonsense, why don't you? It's still incredibly stupid, and I don't care what level of justification the author reaches for; it's not going to become any less stupid. If all of that worthless trash was excised, this would be an amazing fic so far. But noooo! Gotta keep mentioning that nonsense! Ugh... At least the REAL Guinevere was interesting. Being a fairy and custodian of Excalibur, she played a semi-important role.
However, on a side note, I will gripe that so many conflicts arose in this arc out of nowhere, such as the "Little Ice Age", Vortigern, and Crimson Moon, compared to what the actual King Arthur went through. The "Little Ice Age" would have killed everyone without future knowledge, Vortigern was too OP and would have killed everyone without Shirou's own OP skills and future knowledge, and both Crimson Moon and Attila should already be dead by ~800 CE (the approximate era of King Arthur). But hey, stories are driven by conflict, and Shirou was too OP for anything less than some serious heavy hitters as adversaries. Now I'm curious of how things will pan out now that he's back in the present (OR IS HE?).
12/21/2023 c107 Khavros
yep... 1-106 is fuyuki 4th war arc... and 107-272 is camelot arc. excited about whats next... is he going to pop back up and immediately be in the 5th war? will it be him or will he like be summoned as the EK? kinda excited for whats next yet disappointed to be caught up lol... anyways thanks again
yep... 1-106 is fuyuki 4th war arc... and 107-272 is camelot arc. excited about whats next... is he going to pop back up and immediately be in the 5th war? will it be him or will he like be summoned as the EK? kinda excited for whats next yet disappointed to be caught up lol... anyways thanks again
12/21/2023 c272 Khavros
finally got caught up. thankfully it looks like we are close to going back to 2004 lol. tbh the entire camelot arc threw my expectations of a typical fate fanfic. i actually think you should have alluded to it more in the beginning and in the story description since the majority of this fic occurs in camelot vs. fuyuki... yet i can understand not wanting to spoil it. i think the main disappointment that i had was due to how you changed writing styles between the 4th war and camelot... like we went from detailed action and dialogues to outlined retrospective style worldbuilding... its definitely good and from a perspective of splitting those arcs into separate 'books' they both work but together it just feels jarring that the writing style changes so much. anyways im excited to see how Shirous departure goes and what happens ith Morgan... while shes kinda evil im hoping that she gets her own happiness in the end... like half the time shes fuming about stuff i just want shirou to embrace her and kiss her forehead and tell her everything is alright and she needs to let go of her hatred/darkness... like why does Morgan even want to be Queen beyond some perceived inferiority to Artoria. anyways thanks foe the engaging read... readers could maybe use a refreshed stat block for him showing all his skills that improved...
lastly i wonder how a future interaction between Shirou and Gil would go... like i hear gil sometimes in Shirous kingly speeches. anyways good job again... looking forward to more. thanks
finally got caught up. thankfully it looks like we are close to going back to 2004 lol. tbh the entire camelot arc threw my expectations of a typical fate fanfic. i actually think you should have alluded to it more in the beginning and in the story description since the majority of this fic occurs in camelot vs. fuyuki... yet i can understand not wanting to spoil it. i think the main disappointment that i had was due to how you changed writing styles between the 4th war and camelot... like we went from detailed action and dialogues to outlined retrospective style worldbuilding... its definitely good and from a perspective of splitting those arcs into separate 'books' they both work but together it just feels jarring that the writing style changes so much. anyways im excited to see how Shirous departure goes and what happens ith Morgan... while shes kinda evil im hoping that she gets her own happiness in the end... like half the time shes fuming about stuff i just want shirou to embrace her and kiss her forehead and tell her everything is alright and she needs to let go of her hatred/darkness... like why does Morgan even want to be Queen beyond some perceived inferiority to Artoria. anyways thanks foe the engaging read... readers could maybe use a refreshed stat block for him showing all his skills that improved...
lastly i wonder how a future interaction between Shirou and Gil would go... like i hear gil sometimes in Shirous kingly speeches. anyways good job again... looking forward to more. thanks
12/15/2023 c269 kirigallak
Sorry, I'm coming from Patreon and I wanted to ask how it worked, since the $5 and $10 plans say that the first unlocks 40 chapters and the second unlocks 80, so my question is, is it 40 chapters after your update in fanfiction or is it 40 chapters after the ones unlocked on the Patreon? Because if it's the second one, it wouldn't be a good idea for me to pay for the first ones and it would be better for me to only pay for the $20 one in one go.
Sorry, I'm coming from Patreon and I wanted to ask how it worked, since the $5 and $10 plans say that the first unlocks 40 chapters and the second unlocks 80, so my question is, is it 40 chapters after your update in fanfiction or is it 40 chapters after the ones unlocked on the Patreon? Because if it's the second one, it wouldn't be a good idea for me to pay for the first ones and it would be better for me to only pay for the $20 one in one go.
12/12/2023 c5 AcePendrake
Woah got a live update while reading...lucky me
Woah got a live update while reading...lucky me