for Fate: I Will Eventually Become the Hero of Justice11/24/2023 c64 
4Druss the Legend
credit where it is due. you weave a masterful story. your characterization of Gil is really good. his motivation to act the way he has is really genius. and Shirou, his character growth is almost tangible.
I look forward to how the story unfolds once the 4th Grail War concludes.
that said, and I'm not implying that you did anything wrong, I had hoped that Shirou would have made an appearance in the Feast of Kings. I wanted to see him piss off Gil and Saber by discussing the merits of Caster Gil and Kid Gil and Lancer Artoria. it would have been funny and you could have flexed your meta knowledge. the fact that neither Saber and not Gil are candidates for Grand Servant position.
well, there are many opportunities for you to do that.
I look forward to it.
until next time
ciao!
4Druss the Legendcredit where it is due. you weave a masterful story. your characterization of Gil is really good. his motivation to act the way he has is really genius. and Shirou, his character growth is almost tangible.
I look forward to how the story unfolds once the 4th Grail War concludes.
that said, and I'm not implying that you did anything wrong, I had hoped that Shirou would have made an appearance in the Feast of Kings. I wanted to see him piss off Gil and Saber by discussing the merits of Caster Gil and Kid Gil and Lancer Artoria. it would have been funny and you could have flexed your meta knowledge. the fact that neither Saber and not Gil are candidates for Grand Servant position.
well, there are many opportunities for you to do that.
I look forward to it.
until next time
ciao!
11/20/2023 c245 Sagittipotenta
MC gets drug raped, I'ma head out... cant say it's much of a loss since the story reminds me of those CN web novels that are purely designed to be dragged out for money
MC gets drug raped, I'ma head out... cant say it's much of a loss since the story reminds me of those CN web novels that are purely designed to be dragged out for money
11/14/2023 c248 16Writey the Writer
Man, SIhiro is gaslighting Altrouge so hard right now. Also, to ErwinvonBeckendorf, the character tags might seem misleading, but the freaking summary says Self Insert Shirou.
16Writey the WriterMan, SIhiro is gaslighting Altrouge so hard right now. Also, to ErwinvonBeckendorf, the character tags might seem misleading, but the freaking summary says Self Insert Shirou.
11/14/2023 c1 ErwinvonBeckendorf
If you make shirou OC then add the OC character tag so I can filter you
If you make shirou OC then add the OC character tag so I can filter you
11/2/2023 c16 allblushingmalemcarecucks
Easiest way to tell if a fanfiction is a Chinese translation is by how many times the same information shows up, it's like they think their own population is so stupid you have to say the same things several times for it to stick.
Then there are certain words that only translators use from the dictionary that no normal person would use.
Easiest way to tell if a fanfiction is a Chinese translation is by how many times the same information shows up, it's like they think their own population is so stupid you have to say the same things several times for it to stick.
Then there are certain words that only translators use from the dictionary that no normal person would use.