for Fate: I Will Eventually Become the Hero of Justice10/10/2023 c12 
4DaDragon562
Honestly the fact he's in the grail war and has magecraft but is doing nothing to even practice using his awakened magic circuits is pretty ridiculous
4DaDragon562Honestly the fact he's in the grail war and has magecraft but is doing nothing to even practice using his awakened magic circuits is pretty ridiculous
10/10/2023 c8 DaDragon562
Honestly MC is a bit of a moron
Who the fuck cares about getting wealthy when you live in the typemoon verse where you literally are the equivalent of an ant when compared to the moonlit world's residents
if anybody from the moonlit world encounters him, he's dead. If he's anywhere near them, he dies as collateral. Heck, Mercury obliterates the Earth in like 50 or less years let alone all the vampires/ghouls out there.
Honestly MC is a bit of a moron
Who the fuck cares about getting wealthy when you live in the typemoon verse where you literally are the equivalent of an ant when compared to the moonlit world's residents
if anybody from the moonlit world encounters him, he's dead. If he's anywhere near them, he dies as collateral. Heck, Mercury obliterates the Earth in like 50 or less years let alone all the vampires/ghouls out there.
10/10/2023 c4 DaDragon562
Surprised he summoned himself, in canon he only did so because he had Tohsaka's jewel which had a strong tie to himself. Given he is not even the original soul, its weird he summons Emiya but hey if it gives him shortcuts to his skills later in life I'm cool with it
Surprised he summoned himself, in canon he only did so because he had Tohsaka's jewel which had a strong tie to himself. Given he is not even the original soul, its weird he summons Emiya but hey if it gives him shortcuts to his skills later in life I'm cool with it
10/8/2023 c1 pilitaangomas
For those who don't understand things well, this is a translation, you heard me. Translation, the guy who is translating it can't change anything about the story, he can't do anything, he's just translating a story from its original language into English, so that people who don't speak the language can easily enjoy it. Please stop throwing hate at a person who can't do anything other than translate and better go read the original story, which is complete and if you don't understand the original language, eat it because even if you use the translator there are some names and places which remain in their original language, making it almost impossible to understand them if you don't know the language.
For those who don't understand things well, this is a translation, you heard me. Translation, the guy who is translating it can't change anything about the story, he can't do anything, he's just translating a story from its original language into English, so that people who don't speak the language can easily enjoy it. Please stop throwing hate at a person who can't do anything other than translate and better go read the original story, which is complete and if you don't understand the original language, eat it because even if you use the translator there are some names and places which remain in their original language, making it almost impossible to understand them if you don't know the language.
9/29/2023 c1 Guest
Mana Cinder: You do realize that this is a translation right?
Mana Cinder: You do realize that this is a translation right?
10/1/2023 c219 LoneBearKun
I m droppin in there to tell tou story is amazing, so much work and effort, i love it ! Keep up the good work
Et don’t worry about the hater here
I m droppin in there to tell tou story is amazing, so much work and effort, i love it ! Keep up the good work
Et don’t worry about the hater here
9/28/2023 c64 Mana's Cinder
This is so very lame and boring. You seem to have a loose grasp on canon and just rip it up to use pieces of it haphazardly without really understanding the consequences and the fall out of anything that's happening.
This is trash writing.
This is so very lame and boring. You seem to have a loose grasp on canon and just rip it up to use pieces of it haphazardly without really understanding the consequences and the fall out of anything that's happening.
This is trash writing.
9/28/2023 c31 Mana's Cinder
Tokiomi needs to hurry up and die. Such an annoying cuck. He just threw a full tantrum like a child. While demanding a literal child should die, although I guess technically doesn't know that Shirou is Shirou and isn't just Shirou's Servant. But he also made it pretty clear that he's totally cool with Shirou dying previously, so fuck that loser either way.
Tokiomi needs to hurry up and die. Such an annoying cuck. He just threw a full tantrum like a child. While demanding a literal child should die, although I guess technically doesn't know that Shirou is Shirou and isn't just Shirou's Servant. But he also made it pretty clear that he's totally cool with Shirou dying previously, so fuck that loser either way.
9/28/2023 c26 Mana's Cinder
This whole modern knowledge thing just, so far, sounds like he's going to try being a shitty version of Kiritsugu. That's pretty boring. Kiritsugu was also pretty boring except for he went extra hard with it and blew shit up just to get his target. Shirou can't do that. Even if he did, it would still be a boring Kiritsugu ripoff.
This whole modern knowledge thing just, so far, sounds like he's going to try being a shitty version of Kiritsugu. That's pretty boring. Kiritsugu was also pretty boring except for he went extra hard with it and blew shit up just to get his target. Shirou can't do that. Even if he did, it would still be a boring Kiritsugu ripoff.
9/28/2023 c22 Mana's Cinder
This chapter was pretty stupid. Talk about a heavy-handed way to yeet Sakura out of the story for now and force Shirou to be in a really dumb position.
This chapter was pretty stupid. Talk about a heavy-handed way to yeet Sakura out of the story for now and force Shirou to be in a really dumb position.
9/28/2023 c21 Mana's Cinder
All the excessive honorifics are really getting to me. It's been a while since I've read Japanese-based stuff. In most of the Korean and Chinese shit I read, the honorifics are excluded or just not used so... ridiculously randomly. He called her at least three different honorifics or titles in this chapter.
Makes me miss a xianxia protagonist just calling everyone Senior Brother or Senior Sister. At least you get used to that shit.
Also, the Gilgamesh bullshit continues to just be annoying and not really as mysterious or cool as I think you intend it to be.
All the excessive honorifics are really getting to me. It's been a while since I've read Japanese-based stuff. In most of the Korean and Chinese shit I read, the honorifics are excluded or just not used so... ridiculously randomly. He called her at least three different honorifics or titles in this chapter.
Makes me miss a xianxia protagonist just calling everyone Senior Brother or Senior Sister. At least you get used to that shit.
Also, the Gilgamesh bullshit continues to just be annoying and not really as mysterious or cool as I think you intend it to be.