for Fate: I Will Eventually Become the Hero of Justice5/4/2023 c114 rharper909
I'm going to be honest I'm so lost now I don't know what's going on. I stopped reading after the Mc was talking shit to rider and saber. is it still in fate stay night because like I said this lost me
I'm going to be honest I'm so lost now I don't know what's going on. I stopped reading after the Mc was talking shit to rider and saber. is it still in fate stay night because like I said this lost me
5/3/2023 c4 The One Who Reads Too Much
...really? EMIYA gets summoned by the SI!Shirou, but instead of EMIYA fulfilling his own wish of killing Shirou while he has the perfect chance to do it, he dismisses himself and, through the power of bullshit, accidently fuses all of his power, sword knowledge and magical training into Shirou? I was thinking that maybe, just maybe, you would be having SI!Shirou be in control of the Assassin and then participate in the 3rd Murder Death Kill, but this is just too silly.
...really? EMIYA gets summoned by the SI!Shirou, but instead of EMIYA fulfilling his own wish of killing Shirou while he has the perfect chance to do it, he dismisses himself and, through the power of bullshit, accidently fuses all of his power, sword knowledge and magical training into Shirou? I was thinking that maybe, just maybe, you would be having SI!Shirou be in control of the Assassin and then participate in the 3rd Murder Death Kill, but this is just too silly.
5/3/2023 c3 The One Who Reads Too Much
Okay, the MC gaining the favorable attention of Gilgamesh, mister "the entire population of Earth is unworthy to even have me think about them", just from existing is ridiculous.
Okay, the MC gaining the favorable attention of Gilgamesh, mister "the entire population of Earth is unworthy to even have me think about them", just from existing is ridiculous.
5/3/2023 c2 The One Who Reads Too Much
Honestly, the attitudes of the parents got old really fast and is putting a huge negative on the enjoyment of the story, even if I'm relatively sure they won't be in the story for long. In fact, if they do get written out of the story quickly, it makes it even more of a waste that they were written that way in the first place.
Honestly, the attitudes of the parents got old really fast and is putting a huge negative on the enjoyment of the story, even if I'm relatively sure they won't be in the story for long. In fact, if they do get written out of the story quickly, it makes it even more of a waste that they were written that way in the first place.
5/3/2023 c1 The One Who Reads Too Much
Kind of ruins the "For Want of a Nail" aspect of only changing one part of the main story and seeing the effects from that, but I will say the entire plan being ruined so early is kind of funny.
Kind of ruins the "For Want of a Nail" aspect of only changing one part of the main story and seeing the effects from that, but I will say the entire plan being ruined so early is kind of funny.
5/1/2023 c111 Guest
I think that this time Vampiric Forest wasn't created by White Princess with Einnashe's corpse, but by "the long way to home"!Shirou. Because Arcueid remembered a name of the mister you-don't-remember-me.
And I think that Saber tried to fix practice, not theory...
I think that this time Vampiric Forest wasn't created by White Princess with Einnashe's corpse, but by "the long way to home"!Shirou. Because Arcueid remembered a name of the mister you-don't-remember-me.
And I think that Saber tried to fix practice, not theory...
5/3/2023 c113 
1Echonic
I was wondering what the direction was with the new development of being isekaid and all, but this chapter was so well thought out and original that I'm actually amazed. Guess this is why I love this fanfic.
1EchonicI was wondering what the direction was with the new development of being isekaid and all, but this chapter was so well thought out and original that I'm actually amazed. Guess this is why I love this fanfic.
4/28/2023 c108 Alter the 3rd
wow. so this is the reason that many times saber call him Guinevere in the grail war? looks like she was correct all along
wow. so this is the reason that many times saber call him Guinevere in the grail war? looks like she was correct all along