for Fate: I Will Eventually Become the Hero of Justice2/9/2023 c25 Guest
This fic would be so much better if he just killed off Sakura.
This fic would be so much better if he just killed off Sakura.
2/10/2023 c38 Gaebold
BeetleRUs - Yea, this is a bit frustrating, I want to read more but I don't have money lol. Still, I don't think greedy is the right word for it. Most story here updated once a week and some even once a month. Meanwhile this story was updated daily. If we stop reading for a month, that would be more than 50k words worth of story, and it was free lol. So calling it greedy would be a bit too far I think.
BeetleRUs - Yea, this is a bit frustrating, I want to read more but I don't have money lol. Still, I don't think greedy is the right word for it. Most story here updated once a week and some even once a month. Meanwhile this story was updated daily. If we stop reading for a month, that would be more than 50k words worth of story, and it was free lol. So calling it greedy would be a bit too far I think.
2/10/2023 c38 BeetleRUs
Your putting more than half behind patreon, that is really greedy. The second highest was 20 chapters.
Your putting more than half behind patreon, that is really greedy. The second highest was 20 chapters.
2/9/2023 c20 TrumpasaurusRex
“His right hand was paralyzed due to an overloaded magic circuit, while his left hand was fractured and suffering from muscle spasms due to blocking Spartacus's attack.“
I hope he permanently loses both arms and even his legs and he gets blinded. Then, he will be forced to think over how stupid he was for the rest of his meaningless life.
“His right hand was paralyzed due to an overloaded magic circuit, while his left hand was fractured and suffering from muscle spasms due to blocking Spartacus's attack.“
I hope he permanently loses both arms and even his legs and he gets blinded. Then, he will be forced to think over how stupid he was for the rest of his meaningless life.
2/9/2023 c14 TrumpasaurusRex
"I must be insane to risk my life to save a girl I barely know, who I've only been acquainted with for a couple of weeks," Shirou cursed himself for his irrational behavior.
Yes, you are. And it doesn’t fit the character at all. He wrote out 20 rules for surviving the world of Fate. He was adamant about escaping the city and not even involving himself in magicians’ business, but now he’s going to, as a 6 year old, go after someone else when he has no power or training?
Beyond idiotic.
"I must be insane to risk my life to save a girl I barely know, who I've only been acquainted with for a couple of weeks," Shirou cursed himself for his irrational behavior.
Yes, you are. And it doesn’t fit the character at all. He wrote out 20 rules for surviving the world of Fate. He was adamant about escaping the city and not even involving himself in magicians’ business, but now he’s going to, as a 6 year old, go after someone else when he has no power or training?
Beyond idiotic.
2/9/2023 c12 TrumpasaurusRex
You’ve only known that girl for 2 weeks. How can you turn into a siscon for someone you’re not only NOT related to but you’ve only known for 2 weeks?
Pathetic.
You’ve only known that girl for 2 weeks. How can you turn into a siscon for someone you’re not only NOT related to but you’ve only known for 2 weeks?
Pathetic.
2/9/2023 c11 TrumpasaurusRex
The incessant references to Gilgamesh spying on Shiro is annoying. Gilgamesh considers them all beneath his motive. They’re mongrels to him. He wouldn’t stalking a six year old boy for 10 chapters of this story.
The incessant references to Gilgamesh spying on Shiro is annoying. Gilgamesh considers them all beneath his motive. They’re mongrels to him. He wouldn’t stalking a six year old boy for 10 chapters of this story.
2/9/2023 c10 TrumpasaurusRex
"I'm sorry, Mrs. Tohsaka, but I must speak frankly. I cannot in good conscience hand over Sakura to a mother who abandoned her in Shinto and showed no concern or interest in her for 15 days," Mrs. Fujimaru said gravely.
I’m, sorry Mr. author, but if I must speak frankly…that’s not how the law works. One call to the police and the custody situation would be resolved. This whole scene is beyond retarded. They’ve only had her for two weeks. There’s no way in hell they would fight over giving her back.
"I'm sorry, Mrs. Tohsaka, but I must speak frankly. I cannot in good conscience hand over Sakura to a mother who abandoned her in Shinto and showed no concern or interest in her for 15 days," Mrs. Fujimaru said gravely.
I’m, sorry Mr. author, but if I must speak frankly…that’s not how the law works. One call to the police and the custody situation would be resolved. This whole scene is beyond retarded. They’ve only had her for two weeks. There’s no way in hell they would fight over giving her back.
2/9/2023 c5 TrumpasaurusRex
I find Sakura and his parents incredibly annoying.
I find myself praying for the Fuyuki fire to hurry up and kill the parents and severe this stupid relationship with his adopted sister. That whole relationship is incredibly forced anyway.
There’s no way in hell they would have been able to adopt her in the first place. Social services would have investigated and found her real parents.
I find Sakura and his parents incredibly annoying.
I find myself praying for the Fuyuki fire to hurry up and kill the parents and severe this stupid relationship with his adopted sister. That whole relationship is incredibly forced anyway.
There’s no way in hell they would have been able to adopt her in the first place. Social services would have investigated and found her real parents.
2/9/2023 c4 
1Thyrokio
From the summary, I wasn't expecting this development. This is actually pretty original.
1ThyrokioFrom the summary, I wasn't expecting this development. This is actually pretty original.
2/9/2023 c3 Thyrokio
The way this is written reminds me of translated asian web novels. It's a unique tone that is rare in fanfics. It's kind of refreshing. Shirou's POV is kind of amusing.
The way this is written reminds me of translated asian web novels. It's a unique tone that is rare in fanfics. It's kind of refreshing. Shirou's POV is kind of amusing.
2/8/2023 c36 Mistersnx
I got no way to say this. But your going to need to kill the Magus Killer. Fuck the plot
I got no way to say this. But your going to need to kill the Magus Killer. Fuck the plot