
1/20/2023 c18 Dash6217
Author Imay think o dropping this your SI is pathetic at least. Like he has rule breaker and doesn't think to take it and use it against Berserker. This is almost garbage tier he has no plans and is annoying I rather have the true Shirou back as your little OOC is a weak spineless idiot.
Author Imay think o dropping this your SI is pathetic at least. Like he has rule breaker and doesn't think to take it and use it against Berserker. This is almost garbage tier he has no plans and is annoying I rather have the true Shirou back as your little OOC is a weak spineless idiot.
1/19/2023 c14 jwmf
this shirou version is the most coward and useles ever created. Get one spineless Jap protagonist and fuse with one patetic SI who dont even have the will to do something and you have this disgusting abomination that is you Shirou.
this shirou version is the most coward and useles ever created. Get one spineless Jap protagonist and fuse with one patetic SI who dont even have the will to do something and you have this disgusting abomination that is you Shirou.
1/18/2023 c5
4Druss the Legend
Honest opinion, reading up to this chapter, it feels like I'm reading a light novel. Majority of the content is Shirou's thought or some kind of exposition. I'm a Shirou Stan and, yet, I haven't quite connected with your personification of Shirou. I guess it's his attitude that's throwing me off. And, though I know he's a child, the sense of helplessness is... Disgusting. And then there is Gilgamesh's description of his soul. Garbage.
What exactly am I supposed to look forward to with your MC?

Honest opinion, reading up to this chapter, it feels like I'm reading a light novel. Majority of the content is Shirou's thought or some kind of exposition. I'm a Shirou Stan and, yet, I haven't quite connected with your personification of Shirou. I guess it's his attitude that's throwing me off. And, though I know he's a child, the sense of helplessness is... Disgusting. And then there is Gilgamesh's description of his soul. Garbage.
What exactly am I supposed to look forward to with your MC?
1/18/2023 c16 Fertas
There are some downsides, but I'm interested in what happens next. Although I doubt that in the current state, the protagonist would be able to defeat the canonical Zouken.
There are some downsides, but I'm interested in what happens next. Although I doubt that in the current state, the protagonist would be able to defeat the canonical Zouken.
1/15/2023 c14 Guest
AU, events happen that didn’t happen in original, plus a couple naive OC characters, SI/Shirou who wants a normal peaceful life, ergo he is already freaking out. Little angst and unstable mind, irritating sometimes. A lot of intrinsic monologuing. Question though: Why and more importantly how, Caster? Plus the author states that he has functioning 27 magic circuits from birth which is definitely not canon, AU, writer writes what they want. Also nothing about turning nerves into circuits in this. MC is very passive so no action or preemptive preparation. Illogical moments as well, such as elimination target in front of them but eliminate themselves instead by choice? Decent read but irritates.
AU, events happen that didn’t happen in original, plus a couple naive OC characters, SI/Shirou who wants a normal peaceful life, ergo he is already freaking out. Little angst and unstable mind, irritating sometimes. A lot of intrinsic monologuing. Question though: Why and more importantly how, Caster? Plus the author states that he has functioning 27 magic circuits from birth which is definitely not canon, AU, writer writes what they want. Also nothing about turning nerves into circuits in this. MC is very passive so no action or preemptive preparation. Illogical moments as well, such as elimination target in front of them but eliminate themselves instead by choice? Decent read but irritates.
1/17/2023 c7 Uvuvwevwevwe Onyetenyevwe Ugwe
Yeah like this. Sakura is still a child and Shirou as SI that know canon doesnt want to save her from insect rape because he only want to save his own hide. What kind of human being abandon a child to such thing. Use your common sense, even though this is just a story, you know personality of author from their work and from there you know how their mind ticks.
Yeah like this. Sakura is still a child and Shirou as SI that know canon doesnt want to save her from insect rape because he only want to save his own hide. What kind of human being abandon a child to such thing. Use your common sense, even though this is just a story, you know personality of author from their work and from there you know how their mind ticks.
1/17/2023 c1 Uvuvwevwevwe Onyetenyevwe Ugwe
This shitty chinese fics should not be translated. It is waste of your time. Apparently SI shirou are indecisive, wishy washy, and wimpy. He know canon but dont want to work with or against it. Why then create SI if there are purpose. And then he cant convince his parent by using or by showing magecraft. What an idiot. Need bleach to delete this travesty. I am outta here
This shitty chinese fics should not be translated. It is waste of your time. Apparently SI shirou are indecisive, wishy washy, and wimpy. He know canon but dont want to work with or against it. Why then create SI if there are purpose. And then he cant convince his parent by using or by showing magecraft. What an idiot. Need bleach to delete this travesty. I am outta here
1/16/2023 c15 Freedom41
This fic should seriously have more views and reviews, one of the best I have read in fate/stay night.
This fic should seriously have more views and reviews, one of the best I have read in fate/stay night.
1/16/2023 c14
2GravityTonttu
Everything the Insert/Shirou has been doing has been so unsatisfying.
He apparently became a caster demiservant which was badly explained, but has basically only used hypnosis so far. Servants even with bad stats are really strong. You showed that Shirou is stronger than his mother, which is good though, its the kind of thing I want to see.
The Tattoo Shop scene was really confusing to read, and unnecessary.
And his reaction to decide to rescue Sakura only a while after Gilgamesh's warning kinda makes him seem like an asshole for not immediately deciding to rescue her.
Self Insert stories are satisfying to read because the protagonist knows things and acts on them, but this shirou has not done almost anything yet.
If the intention is for Shirou to become stronger and more decisive in the future, I would hope that it would happen sooner.

Everything the Insert/Shirou has been doing has been so unsatisfying.
He apparently became a caster demiservant which was badly explained, but has basically only used hypnosis so far. Servants even with bad stats are really strong. You showed that Shirou is stronger than his mother, which is good though, its the kind of thing I want to see.
The Tattoo Shop scene was really confusing to read, and unnecessary.
And his reaction to decide to rescue Sakura only a while after Gilgamesh's warning kinda makes him seem like an asshole for not immediately deciding to rescue her.
Self Insert stories are satisfying to read because the protagonist knows things and acts on them, but this shirou has not done almost anything yet.
If the intention is for Shirou to become stronger and more decisive in the future, I would hope that it would happen sooner.
1/13/2023 c1 Guest
Ah very nice, I recognize this Chinese fic already. Kudos to you if you want to try and translate all of it to English for viewing purposes. Good luck with that?
Ah very nice, I recognize this Chinese fic already. Kudos to you if you want to try and translate all of it to English for viewing purposes. Good luck with that?