for The Renegade3/7 c12 John
Great chapter
Great chapter
3/6 c31 Rubberization
I was originally going to comment around the first lime removal about how I thought it was bullshit that you paywalled any explicit content. I'm glad ffn's app is so bad it sent my comment to the void. This was a really good story, and later authors notes had you stating you put them out for free in your discord. While I wish you'd crosspost on ao3 instead, it's a reasonable tradeoff.
Konan and Naruto are a lovely couple, and you write a good rendition of them. I had to suspend my disbelief at the start because the prison scenario felt flimsy at best as an excuse for Naruto to go rogue. Maybe if you had twisted that intro to show them torturing him more, maybe? Regardless, after that, it picks up and never really loses momentum until the epilogue, which felt a little rushed. But maybe that's because I didn't want the journey to end so soon. A well fleshed out fic like this usually spans into the 300k and up word count, so it was surprising.
Overall, it's a very solid story with a rough start but extremely good middle to end. 10/10 just because the meat and potatoes of it were perfect, and you even completed it. Good fic.
I was originally going to comment around the first lime removal about how I thought it was bullshit that you paywalled any explicit content. I'm glad ffn's app is so bad it sent my comment to the void. This was a really good story, and later authors notes had you stating you put them out for free in your discord. While I wish you'd crosspost on ao3 instead, it's a reasonable tradeoff.
Konan and Naruto are a lovely couple, and you write a good rendition of them. I had to suspend my disbelief at the start because the prison scenario felt flimsy at best as an excuse for Naruto to go rogue. Maybe if you had twisted that intro to show them torturing him more, maybe? Regardless, after that, it picks up and never really loses momentum until the epilogue, which felt a little rushed. But maybe that's because I didn't want the journey to end so soon. A well fleshed out fic like this usually spans into the 300k and up word count, so it was surprising.
Overall, it's a very solid story with a rough start but extremely good middle to end. 10/10 just because the meat and potatoes of it were perfect, and you even completed it. Good fic.
1/29 c31 Guest
Thx for such a nice story, dommy mommy konan W
Thx for such a nice story, dommy mommy konan W
1/26 c2 Sololerrerrerse
Nice, I always wanted to see that shitty plan bite their ass, I really didn’t like how Naruto just forgave them
Nice, I always wanted to see that shitty plan bite their ass, I really didn’t like how Naruto just forgave them
1/24 c31 Tejon
Loved it! No padding, no needless retellig of cannon things, no filler-movie bullshit. Truly a great story. I usually try to give feedback but honestly it's one of the best op-naruto fics i have read. Thank you.
Loved it! No padding, no needless retellig of cannon things, no filler-movie bullshit. Truly a great story. I usually try to give feedback but honestly it's one of the best op-naruto fics i have read. Thank you.
1/15 c2 
2D72
He wouldn't really be a missing nin.
If they'd told him the mission beforehand? yeah.
As it is, all the talk of konoha discarding him is true.
2D72He wouldn't really be a missing nin.
If they'd told him the mission beforehand? yeah.
As it is, all the talk of konoha discarding him is true.
12/19/2024 c31 12Lokolow
This is the first story in years that I've read to the end... and it was complete!
Congratulations on a job well done, it was a good read and although I read the story in just under 6 hours, it was the right length for the plot developed.
The development was simple, but in a good way. You got straight to the point and didn't get lost in complex ideas.
Naruto abandons Leaf after Blood Prison, allies with Amekagure, Konoha's failed attempt to capture him, Obito's death, Attack of the great hidden villages and finally the end with Kabuto becoming the definitive antagonist.
Honestly, what caught me the most about this story was the Naruto/Konan relationship, which is little explored mainly because Konan is forgotten by the fandom (Kishimoto's fault for killing her in the anime without need in my opinion, she had enormous potential for development alongside of the protagonist, whether as a friend/mentor or even a love interest, although the latter was unlikely in the original work).
Anyway, a good read and I hope you are proud of what you produced.
12LokolowThis is the first story in years that I've read to the end... and it was complete!
Congratulations on a job well done, it was a good read and although I read the story in just under 6 hours, it was the right length for the plot developed.
The development was simple, but in a good way. You got straight to the point and didn't get lost in complex ideas.
Naruto abandons Leaf after Blood Prison, allies with Amekagure, Konoha's failed attempt to capture him, Obito's death, Attack of the great hidden villages and finally the end with Kabuto becoming the definitive antagonist.
Honestly, what caught me the most about this story was the Naruto/Konan relationship, which is little explored mainly because Konan is forgotten by the fandom (Kishimoto's fault for killing her in the anime without need in my opinion, she had enormous potential for development alongside of the protagonist, whether as a friend/mentor or even a love interest, although the latter was unlikely in the original work).
Anyway, a good read and I hope you are proud of what you produced.
11/23/2024 c31 Razma2468
Man what a great story, konan deserved so much more from the anime. Thanks for the story!
Man what a great story, konan deserved so much more from the anime. Thanks for the story!
11/11/2024 c20 Guest
This fanfic is pretty good
This fanfic is pretty good
10/31/2024 c31 HyperionATLAS
wow, god damn this was pretty fucking good wish there was more somehow but it's complete in a really good way
wow, god damn this was pretty fucking good wish there was more somehow but it's complete in a really good way
10/24/2024 c31 25Logicalillogical
For years, I always wanted to read a fic where the blood prison movie plot backfires on Konoha spectacularly.
I have to say, this fic is easily the best I've read that tackles that idea.
Thank you for the good reading experience.
25LogicalillogicalFor years, I always wanted to read a fic where the blood prison movie plot backfires on Konoha spectacularly.
I have to say, this fic is easily the best I've read that tackles that idea.
Thank you for the good reading experience.