for The Renegade4/28 c15 Guest
Good story but why does it keep saying four sted his father does he hate him or is his father Someone else in the story
Good story but why does it keep saying four sted his father does he hate him or is his father Someone else in the story
4/26 c31 GoldenGuard227
Very well written fic, highly enjoyable.
Love how organic Naruto and Konan were in their friendship and love. Always a joy to read them being together.
Well done, and congrats on the completion!
Very well written fic, highly enjoyable.
Love how organic Naruto and Konan were in their friendship and love. Always a joy to read them being together.
Well done, and congrats on the completion!
4/7 c4 DaHaze
I mean tsunade kept her and the kage alive vs madara and can probably punch the floor and destory 1/8 of the village or use her summon but ill accept it I guess
I mean tsunade kept her and the kage alive vs madara and can probably punch the floor and destory 1/8 of the village or use her summon but ill accept it I guess
3/7 c12 John
Great chapter
Great chapter
3/6 c31 Rubberization
I was originally going to comment around the first lime removal about how I thought it was bullshit that you paywalled any explicit content. I'm glad ffn's app is so bad it sent my comment to the void. This was a really good story, and later authors notes had you stating you put them out for free in your discord. While I wish you'd crosspost on ao3 instead, it's a reasonable tradeoff.
Konan and Naruto are a lovely couple, and you write a good rendition of them. I had to suspend my disbelief at the start because the prison scenario felt flimsy at best as an excuse for Naruto to go rogue. Maybe if you had twisted that intro to show them torturing him more, maybe? Regardless, after that, it picks up and never really loses momentum until the epilogue, which felt a little rushed. But maybe that's because I didn't want the journey to end so soon. A well fleshed out fic like this usually spans into the 300k and up word count, so it was surprising.
Overall, it's a very solid story with a rough start but extremely good middle to end. 10/10 just because the meat and potatoes of it were perfect, and you even completed it. Good fic.
I was originally going to comment around the first lime removal about how I thought it was bullshit that you paywalled any explicit content. I'm glad ffn's app is so bad it sent my comment to the void. This was a really good story, and later authors notes had you stating you put them out for free in your discord. While I wish you'd crosspost on ao3 instead, it's a reasonable tradeoff.
Konan and Naruto are a lovely couple, and you write a good rendition of them. I had to suspend my disbelief at the start because the prison scenario felt flimsy at best as an excuse for Naruto to go rogue. Maybe if you had twisted that intro to show them torturing him more, maybe? Regardless, after that, it picks up and never really loses momentum until the epilogue, which felt a little rushed. But maybe that's because I didn't want the journey to end so soon. A well fleshed out fic like this usually spans into the 300k and up word count, so it was surprising.
Overall, it's a very solid story with a rough start but extremely good middle to end. 10/10 just because the meat and potatoes of it were perfect, and you even completed it. Good fic.
1/29 c31 Guest
Thx for such a nice story, dommy mommy konan W
Thx for such a nice story, dommy mommy konan W
1/26 c2 Sololerrerrerse
Nice, I always wanted to see that shitty plan bite their ass, I really didn’t like how Naruto just forgave them
Nice, I always wanted to see that shitty plan bite their ass, I really didn’t like how Naruto just forgave them
1/24 c31 Tejon
Loved it! No padding, no needless retellig of cannon things, no filler-movie bullshit. Truly a great story. I usually try to give feedback but honestly it's one of the best op-naruto fics i have read. Thank you.
Loved it! No padding, no needless retellig of cannon things, no filler-movie bullshit. Truly a great story. I usually try to give feedback but honestly it's one of the best op-naruto fics i have read. Thank you.
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