4/2/2011 c1 Writer
Try writing it like this

~At the mall~

"But Jay you must know something!" Amber was getting worried, she knew Bray was somewhere. "Amber I wish I did, but Ram keeps me in the dark." "Then ask that weasel of a brother you have." Dee still had a grudge with Ved. "Hey! You are talking about my boyfriend!" Cloe piped up, but as usual no one listened. "We shouldn't trust the Technos, or Jay, we don't know who he works for." Lex was also worried about Ti-San, but he would never let it show. "Shut it Lex, Jay is helping us, remember?" It was up to Trudy to defend Jay. "But Lex is right, don't get me wrong, I trust Jay, but we can't trust anyone else." Amber sighed. "Yeah..." Dee was going to finish but Salene cut her off. "But Ebony..." Salene thought she couldn't be all bad. "is a traitor." Pride never liked Ebony. "Pride, she is trying to find some of the captives." Trudy pleaded that they trust her friend. "Dead or alive?" Lex knew Ebony all too well. "Lex!" Amber didn't want to hear anyone say that Bray could be dead. "Well we can't give up!" Salene stated. "We weren't planning on it." Mumbled Cloe.