for Namikaze Rook2/9 c2 
3Zeckromizder
Honestly? I expected for Naryto to become the rookof Fem. Sirzech or the rook for Serafall. Hell, even Grafia having a peerage wouldn't be that weird... What is weird is Sona getting him (Even in his weakened state and by using a mutation piece). The story is still good, just weird since Naruto would probably be more acepting of those three first since he has had more time to connect with them, and (as you stated) were already his girlfriends.
3ZeckromizderHonestly? I expected for Naryto to become the rookof Fem. Sirzech or the rook for Serafall. Hell, even Grafia having a peerage wouldn't be that weird... What is weird is Sona getting him (Even in his weakened state and by using a mutation piece). The story is still good, just weird since Naruto would probably be more acepting of those three first since he has had more time to connect with them, and (as you stated) were already his girlfriends.
1/18 c5 Borello
good work
good work
1/17 c5 Guest
nice showing from naruto, wonder what the reactions to his shown abilities will be both from the devils watching and possibly from the other factions who will no doubt get a hold of the information of not the footage
nice showing from naruto, wonder what the reactions to his shown abilities will be both from the devils watching and possibly from the other factions who will no doubt get a hold of the information of not the footage
1/18 c5 80YeagerMeister31
Well, that was an interesting fight I see Naruto never fought the Bomb Queen, I look forward to more.
80YeagerMeister31Well, that was an interesting fight I see Naruto never fought the Bomb Queen, I look forward to more.
1/18 c3 lillianna.thastoli
im noticing some continuity issues, like naruto talking about showing only sona and rias the biju, but they already saw them after naruto was turned? also talking to akeno bout issei being a devil and akeno talking about telling him tonight, but he was already told when naruto explained his origin to both peerages? is this intentional or possibly from seperate edits/writing sessions? i just thought you should know so you can make sure your work is as good as possible
im noticing some continuity issues, like naruto talking about showing only sona and rias the biju, but they already saw them after naruto was turned? also talking to akeno bout issei being a devil and akeno talking about telling him tonight, but he was already told when naruto explained his origin to both peerages? is this intentional or possibly from seperate edits/writing sessions? i just thought you should know so you can make sure your work is as good as possible
1/17 c5 2Dragonkeeper10
Riser getting his shit kicked in is always great to see. Let the bird be broken as no one touches Naruto's precious people.
2Dragonkeeper10Riser getting his shit kicked in is always great to see. Let the bird be broken as no one touches Naruto's precious people.