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1ShadowRose8055
This was a true masterclass. You displayed Khan’s militaristic knowledge on Guerilla warfare brilliantly! Having him sow chaos amongst enemey ranks and truly creating a hopeless situation that ended with them betraying each other. This was a PTSD inducing nightmare! And it was brilliant!
1ShadowRose8055This was a true masterclass. You displayed Khan’s militaristic knowledge on Guerilla warfare brilliantly! Having him sow chaos amongst enemey ranks and truly creating a hopeless situation that ended with them betraying each other. This was a PTSD inducing nightmare! And it was brilliant!
4/10 c30 Apple424
Im glad that nessa didn’t die im glad u edited this chapter i hope we get to see them more.
Im glad that nessa didn’t die im glad u edited this chapter i hope we get to see them more.
4/7 c20 ShadowRose8055
Your writing is absolutely insane. It feels like im watching peak Game of Thrones moments.
The honk at the end? Diabolical.
Your writing is absolutely insane. It feels like im watching peak Game of Thrones moments.
The honk at the end? Diabolical.
4/6 c32 Guest
Nah, you're tweaking william. If anyone uses a fictional story as "justification" to hurt others then they were ALWAYS going to be a threat. That's what separates maniacs from sane people. We can differentiate reality from fiction. If you actually think about doing the things the MC does, in real life, then get help. It's not that deep.
Nah, you're tweaking william. If anyone uses a fictional story as "justification" to hurt others then they were ALWAYS going to be a threat. That's what separates maniacs from sane people. We can differentiate reality from fiction. If you actually think about doing the things the MC does, in real life, then get help. It's not that deep.
4/2 c32 R4nd0
Will be sad to see the Kyoshi Warriors go, keep up the good work!
Will be sad to see the Kyoshi Warriors go, keep up the good work!
3/31 c1 williamsmail2564
Kinda crazy to be called soft for complaining about too rape in a piece of fanfic . Try to explain your POV to your parents or co-workers Dylan 863. Message to the author everyone has different views. Im not trying to diminish your craft but my previous comment was for those who may have needed to see it. Somethings can be perceived in glamorous a way in fiction and give others justification to act in outrageous ways in reality. Much luck with your story just always be aware of your impact on others whether intentional or not. Existence is an calm body of water everything that creates ripples is an variable .
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Kinda crazy to be called soft for complaining about too rape in a piece of fanfic . Try to explain your POV to your parents or co-workers Dylan 863. Message to the author everyone has different views. Im not trying to diminish your craft but my previous comment was for those who may have needed to see it. Somethings can be perceived in glamorous a way in fiction and give others justification to act in outrageous ways in reality. Much luck with your story just always be aware of your impact on others whether intentional or not. Existence is an calm body of water everything that creates ripples is an variable .
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3/28 c32 AstridHeartfilia
I do want to wait as long as it takes you to post a new chapter even if it takes you half a year per chapter we love you
I do want to wait as long as it takes you to post a new chapter even if it takes you half a year per chapter we love you
3/27 c1 Dylan863
Absolutely tremendous story. I just wish the author would stop softening and cutting back on everything related to rape. this is a fake story, let the fake people suffer.
Absolutely tremendous story. I just wish the author would stop softening and cutting back on everything related to rape. this is a fake story, let the fake people suffer.
3/27 c1 williamsmail2564
So does this author fantasize vicariously of rape in all his stories, if so I don’t think i can support that. Literature is an window to the soul. You can either influence or be influenced by it. Beware of the type of media you consume out boredom and curiosity. You never know what seeds of depravity linger then fester into action.
So does this author fantasize vicariously of rape in all his stories, if so I don’t think i can support that. Literature is an window to the soul. You can either influence or be influenced by it. Beware of the type of media you consume out boredom and curiosity. You never know what seeds of depravity linger then fester into action.
3/27 c24 8acquiringwriter
god.. for every part that is a good story theres another part thats just crack fic. Anya and Yor are uniquely aggravating characters. Also, having every girl want to drop their pants immediately gets old fast. Suki needs to take a chill pill lol.
8acquiringwritergod.. for every part that is a good story theres another part thats just crack fic. Anya and Yor are uniquely aggravating characters. Also, having every girl want to drop their pants immediately gets old fast. Suki needs to take a chill pill lol.
3/24 c32 leper
Fredgard being based as always lmao
Fredgard being based as always lmao