
4/25 c12 VoidShards
Its so good, I need more
Its so good, I need more
4/24 c12 Varium
This was a really good chapter, I like the looks into the underground's culture and wildlife. I'm glad this story was updated again.
This was a really good chapter, I like the looks into the underground's culture and wildlife. I'm glad this story was updated again.
12/4/2024 c11 Guest
Dear Author please bring back this story
Dear Author please bring back this story
8/14/2024 c10 Guest
I love this fic!
I love this fic!
8/15/2024 c10 Jevil77
Hello there butterflies, see you flapping your wings today.
So Blake is now part of the Underground community, eh?
At least now with her, we can get more than a glimpse into the culture and social culture of the tribals. Can’t wait for that.
And our good boy causing people to panic about him just vining and exploring the world is great.
Do hope we see more conversations of people in the world as I really wanna know what their lives are like compared to canon, especially the Hunters/Huntresses with the more frequent breaches made connecting the surface and underground. Whether it’s about the tribals or the monster, it would be nice.
Anyways, looking forward to seeing the next chapter author!
Hello there butterflies, see you flapping your wings today.
So Blake is now part of the Underground community, eh?
At least now with her, we can get more than a glimpse into the culture and social culture of the tribals. Can’t wait for that.
And our good boy causing people to panic about him just vining and exploring the world is great.
Do hope we see more conversations of people in the world as I really wanna know what their lives are like compared to canon, especially the Hunters/Huntresses with the more frequent breaches made connecting the surface and underground. Whether it’s about the tribals or the monster, it would be nice.
Anyways, looking forward to seeing the next chapter author!
8/14/2024 c10 Antex-The Legendary Zoroark
Nice. I enjoyed this! It was most excellent. The tribe’s mentality about living in the moment kinda reminded me a bit of Qui-Gon Jinn’s motto of doing so.
Nice. I enjoyed this! It was most excellent. The tribe’s mentality about living in the moment kinda reminded me a bit of Qui-Gon Jinn’s motto of doing so.
8/14/2024 c10 Laurel.A.A.A
Hombre, sería genial ver a black desarrollar algunos poderes locos... osea mira todo el contexto, una niña de la profecía; la unión entre dos mundos.
Tengo una idea bastante loca en la que ella "despierta" los poderes de otros monstruos de evolved, como el espectro o kraken...
sería interesante de ver creo yo, mas con el tema del aura que no se ha explorado. se podría tocar esos dos temas de una.
por un lado otros monstruos de evolved, y por el otro como interactua el aura con la sangre del monstruo.
Hombre, sería genial ver a black desarrollar algunos poderes locos... osea mira todo el contexto, una niña de la profecía; la unión entre dos mundos.
Tengo una idea bastante loca en la que ella "despierta" los poderes de otros monstruos de evolved, como el espectro o kraken...
sería interesante de ver creo yo, mas con el tema del aura que no se ha explorado. se podría tocar esos dos temas de una.
por un lado otros monstruos de evolved, y por el otro como interactua el aura con la sangre del monstruo.
8/14/2024 c9 PGroudon
can you guys read chapter 10? It's been an hour, and i could see it has been updated, but i can't.
both on mobile and the website.
can you guys read chapter 10? It's been an hour, and i could see it has been updated, but i can't.
both on mobile and the website.
8/4/2024 c9 Antex-The Legendary Zoroark
Hey no worries big guy! I’d be PO’ed if someone was copying my own kind’s voice when I was the last of my own kind. Makes sense he’d lash out in anger.
Hey no worries big guy! I’d be PO’ed if someone was copying my own kind’s voice when I was the last of my own kind. Makes sense he’d lash out in anger.
7/24/2024 c8 Guest
Why are the reviewers for this newest chapter be thinking of Ruby and Pyrrha as the child in the aforementioned plane crash is confusing to me. The current time frame in this chapter makes that guess impossible, given its five generations apart from the OTL.
Why are the reviewers for this newest chapter be thinking of Ruby and Pyrrha as the child in the aforementioned plane crash is confusing to me. The current time frame in this chapter makes that guess impossible, given its five generations apart from the OTL.