for A Colorful Life5/17 c40 Silverwingzz
Well the pokedex only list pokemon at their average size, more than likely ones not from the wild. Its often why wild animals are usually larger than domesticated ones.
Well the pokedex only list pokemon at their average size, more than likely ones not from the wild. Its often why wild animals are usually larger than domesticated ones.
5/10 c42 DefNotASerialKiller
This feels like the end of a decent story for me.
Not going to bother reading the rest of the chapter, his decision with Cherish was the nail in the coffin.
It is a shame, a rather like the other stories.
Best of luck, author.
This feels like the end of a decent story for me.
Not going to bother reading the rest of the chapter, his decision with Cherish was the nail in the coffin.
It is a shame, a rather like the other stories.
Best of luck, author.
5/10 c42 InfinityMask
Lol! That was something I didn’t expect. TBH I think the same as him. Let’s see if this would change her for the better.
Maybe he would make menagerie school of reform villain? Hahahaha.
That actually good point on Sabrina and Steven… hahaha.
Aww panpan worried. Haha.
Lol! That was something I didn’t expect. TBH I think the same as him. Let’s see if this would change her for the better.
Maybe he would make menagerie school of reform villain? Hahahaha.
That actually good point on Sabrina and Steven… hahaha.
Aww panpan worried. Haha.
5/9 c42 
1GideonBlackthorn
excellentif shortchapter. i like this approach to cherie, but ive always been a sucker for hurt and injured animals. i hope that it works out for her, but i can already tell its gonne be like halter breaking a colt. sometines you just need to hook them up to an old corn cob jackass and let that ornery old bastard out petty and out asshole that asshole horse. and im guessing that our antagonist has enough obstinance to ge the job done
1GideonBlackthornexcellentif shortchapter. i like this approach to cherie, but ive always been a sucker for hurt and injured animals. i hope that it works out for her, but i can already tell its gonne be like halter breaking a colt. sometines you just need to hook them up to an old corn cob jackass and let that ornery old bastard out petty and out asshole that asshole horse. and im guessing that our antagonist has enough obstinance to ge the job done
5/9 c42 AngelFaux
Cherish is rotten to her core.
This is the bitch that thought deliberately joining the 9 to turn into her pets is a good choice.
I'm hoping she remains a rotten piece of crap Blake has to put down
Just because she's a woman her crimes are being excused? Fabled Webs ? So daddy's a piece of crap. So what? She's still a sociopathic mind controlling rapist and murderer herself!
I really hope she remains a piece of shit. Especially since she already used her powers to condition the people in the orphanage even before she thought to use them as hostages.
What makes her so special? So different? Aisha was able to wrangle the rest of those brats into semi-functioning people after making Heartbreaker kill himself.
Cherish? She joined the 9 of her own free will when given the chance! Tell us. What makes her so special ? Why are her crimes getting glossed over and ovelooked and excused!
She literally spent weeks conditioning the people of the orphanage with her power when she arrived
Cherish is rotten to her core.
This is the bitch that thought deliberately joining the 9 to turn into her pets is a good choice.
I'm hoping she remains a rotten piece of crap Blake has to put down
Just because she's a woman her crimes are being excused? Fabled Webs ? So daddy's a piece of crap. So what? She's still a sociopathic mind controlling rapist and murderer herself!
I really hope she remains a piece of shit. Especially since she already used her powers to condition the people in the orphanage even before she thought to use them as hostages.
What makes her so special? So different? Aisha was able to wrangle the rest of those brats into semi-functioning people after making Heartbreaker kill himself.
Cherish? She joined the 9 of her own free will when given the chance! Tell us. What makes her so special ? Why are her crimes getting glossed over and ovelooked and excused!
She literally spent weeks conditioning the people of the orphanage with her power when she arrived
5/7 c41 Guest
Dang, I was cheering for Cherie in this fic...
Dang, I was cheering for Cherie in this fic...
5/9 c42 ImmortalDuck
Thanks for the chapter, gonna be honest disappointed in him choosing to give cheri aura, like i get it but still don't like it
Thanks for the chapter, gonna be honest disappointed in him choosing to give cheri aura, like i get it but still don't like it
5/9 c42 Aleucard
I am kinda worried about a Valefor situation where her power forces a workaround and the dam breaks in dangerous ways, but Victini is a Legend for a damn reason. Probably the only good option Blake has though.
I am kinda worried about a Valefor situation where her power forces a workaround and the dam breaks in dangerous ways, but Victini is a Legend for a damn reason. Probably the only good option Blake has though.
5/9 c42 Tony McNucklz
hope it didn't seem overly flamed, but double standards like this aren't signs of moral superiority, the opposite really, and certainly there's nothing admirable about it.
hope it didn't seem overly flamed, but double standards like this aren't signs of moral superiority, the opposite really, and certainly there's nothing admirable about it.
5/9 c42 Tony McNucklz
So he's to cowardly to make a decisive choice 'because sad backstory of a weak female'. Full on comically stupid second chance syndrome where he doesn't care about justice for all the people the scum has hurt because her sob story somehow negates responsibility for her decisions, and she deserves the chance to hurt more people because he doesn't have the spine to decisively protect the people he claims to care about. He'd rather risk children's lives than put down a malicious sociopath with unimaginablly cruel victims behind her, none of whom can expect justice from him, because the weak female deserves a second chance we all know he wouldn't give to an ugly fat rat faced man, and blake has the moral right to deny justice to the countless victims she has made. And of course despite being every bit as cruel as her siblings and just not wanting to revel in her cruelty under her fathers aegis, the boys deserve death where she doesn't because apparently being cruel and having a penis deserves death, but having internal plumbing makes her a redeemable victim, despite having the same sob story of being raised to be what they are by dear old daddy that she does. But the boys aren't going to get his second chance despite never getting close to unleashing their cruelty on the people he cares about, and the only thing you've highlighted as the meaningful difference between them is their gender.
It's explicitly clear the children around him wouldn't be her first victims, but those other children and the people who loved them don't deserve justice 'because female has sob story'. Because THAT makes sense.
So he's to cowardly to make a decisive choice 'because sad backstory of a weak female'. Full on comically stupid second chance syndrome where he doesn't care about justice for all the people the scum has hurt because her sob story somehow negates responsibility for her decisions, and she deserves the chance to hurt more people because he doesn't have the spine to decisively protect the people he claims to care about. He'd rather risk children's lives than put down a malicious sociopath with unimaginablly cruel victims behind her, none of whom can expect justice from him, because the weak female deserves a second chance we all know he wouldn't give to an ugly fat rat faced man, and blake has the moral right to deny justice to the countless victims she has made. And of course despite being every bit as cruel as her siblings and just not wanting to revel in her cruelty under her fathers aegis, the boys deserve death where she doesn't because apparently being cruel and having a penis deserves death, but having internal plumbing makes her a redeemable victim, despite having the same sob story of being raised to be what they are by dear old daddy that she does. But the boys aren't going to get his second chance despite never getting close to unleashing their cruelty on the people he cares about, and the only thing you've highlighted as the meaningful difference between them is their gender.
It's explicitly clear the children around him wouldn't be her first victims, but those other children and the people who loved them don't deserve justice 'because female has sob story'. Because THAT makes sense.
5/9 c42 HalfmoonSilver80
Ha! I just read the comments and I was not the only one not liking this!
Ha! Teach her how to feel and such. freaking idiota.
Ha! I just read the comments and I was not the only one not liking this!
Ha! Teach her how to feel and such. freaking idiota.