for Harry's Trek 28/26/2023 c7 pincho
And for those who've never been on a ship; Never piss off the person who controls the hot water
And for those who've never been on a ship; Never piss off the person who controls the hot water
8/16/2023 c9 Duchess67
This means "Aunty Q" did something, doesn't it? So TWO of Harry's children have been stolen from him. How the heck is this okay?
This means "Aunty Q" did something, doesn't it? So TWO of Harry's children have been stolen from him. How the heck is this okay?
8/2/2023 c19 Osmodious
Fun story…took several turns I totally did not expect. Some nifty ideas, and great ‘scenes’. Thanks for posting!
Fun story…took several turns I totally did not expect. Some nifty ideas, and great ‘scenes’. Thanks for posting!
7/31/2023 c1 erozoth
tldr: I do not recommend if you don't like it if you feel the MC is getting shit on for plot.
It started good, first novel was fine, nothing amazing, nothing bad.
Personally, this novel went downhill bad at chapter 9 and just kept getting worse.
A lot of the decision the MC did felt more for the sake of plot, not baring on his personality and not matching his previous actions and normal way he does things.
Then it gets even worse, he became a plot tool for drama, previous plot lines are ignored and just keep going like it is not related.
The plot gets dragged for many chapters with other menial unimportant plot lines just to drag the drama of the situation waiting for him to find out...
Anyway, if you don't like a novel where the MC is very fluid and forced to change to create plot, you don't like when the MC starts to act stupid (author ofcourse has "good reasons), gets basically easily used, manipulated, controlled to an extent the don't read.
If it all ends well, as was already indicated by Q, it is either the MC bowing down or plain plot manipulation to make everyone sing koombaya.
tldr: I do not recommend if you don't like it if you feel the MC is getting shit on for plot.
It started good, first novel was fine, nothing amazing, nothing bad.
Personally, this novel went downhill bad at chapter 9 and just kept getting worse.
A lot of the decision the MC did felt more for the sake of plot, not baring on his personality and not matching his previous actions and normal way he does things.
Then it gets even worse, he became a plot tool for drama, previous plot lines are ignored and just keep going like it is not related.
The plot gets dragged for many chapters with other menial unimportant plot lines just to drag the drama of the situation waiting for him to find out...
Anyway, if you don't like a novel where the MC is very fluid and forced to change to create plot, you don't like when the MC starts to act stupid (author ofcourse has "good reasons), gets basically easily used, manipulated, controlled to an extent the don't read.
If it all ends well, as was already indicated by Q, it is either the MC bowing down or plain plot manipulation to make everyone sing koombaya.
7/31/2023 c9 erozoth
Wow, this chapter was terrible from the stand point of the MC. He has children, two, that he doesn't know. As a man and father... pathetic showing. The reason? Does not matter, unless it was really some complicated plot to hide it from him. Sure, he will find out.
But really, you made the MC look so bad, stupid, easily used. He just left a woman because she was too involved in her own life for things, then he gets too involved in his own life to notice two children? You can somehow ignore the first but not the second.
The MC is the readers, to an extent, or at the very least the main focus, who we read about, if you look down on him it's not good, its worse when it was forced, not fitting his usual personality, just to arrange some plot line.
Anyway, this went down hill quickly in my books.
Wow, this chapter was terrible from the stand point of the MC. He has children, two, that he doesn't know. As a man and father... pathetic showing. The reason? Does not matter, unless it was really some complicated plot to hide it from him. Sure, he will find out.
But really, you made the MC look so bad, stupid, easily used. He just left a woman because she was too involved in her own life for things, then he gets too involved in his own life to notice two children? You can somehow ignore the first but not the second.
The MC is the readers, to an extent, or at the very least the main focus, who we read about, if you look down on him it's not good, its worse when it was forced, not fitting his usual personality, just to arrange some plot line.
Anyway, this went down hill quickly in my books.
7/31/2023 c8 erozoth
This entire chapter was supposed to be character growth, yet again, like the last 5. Very NOT Star Trek, and more drama for drama's sake. It was actually "Will he stick it in?" Is he that stupid? Yes, he is.
Getting with a servant? Not a problem, once she is not a servant any more. This is basically riding the plot armor hoping she is not more loyal to her house than the guy she just met.
He already knows many are interested in his blood, the sisters... I know he asked and I hope he only made it seems like he is confused but actually knew exactly what is happening because if really doesn't know, really got her pregnant, really is not aware of what will happen after everything that happened with the clone, the warnings he got... just drop the novel, this degree of MC manipulation is plain bad, its not a story anymore.
I went a bit off, mainly because we are not told what he thinks, now just to make more drama, unlike most of the time where we this is almost SI and we know everything about him.
It might not happen, but it doesn't mean the chapter is good if it all turns out good:
1. Either he knows whats going and we are not told for drama
or
2. His intelligence got nerfed so it happens.
This entire chapter was supposed to be character growth, yet again, like the last 5. Very NOT Star Trek, and more drama for drama's sake. It was actually "Will he stick it in?" Is he that stupid? Yes, he is.
Getting with a servant? Not a problem, once she is not a servant any more. This is basically riding the plot armor hoping she is not more loyal to her house than the guy she just met.
He already knows many are interested in his blood, the sisters... I know he asked and I hope he only made it seems like he is confused but actually knew exactly what is happening because if really doesn't know, really got her pregnant, really is not aware of what will happen after everything that happened with the clone, the warnings he got... just drop the novel, this degree of MC manipulation is plain bad, its not a story anymore.
I went a bit off, mainly because we are not told what he thinks, now just to make more drama, unlike most of the time where we this is almost SI and we know everything about him.
It might not happen, but it doesn't mean the chapter is good if it all turns out good:
1. Either he knows whats going and we are not told for drama
or
2. His intelligence got nerfed so it happens.
7/31/2023 c6 erozoth
Harry is the only one that didn't see it coming and was stupid enough to leave the enterprise, forget fans, even in that world serving on the E is basically the end goal of many. But it is obvious this was done by author to get other "Adventure" happen, this entire chapter was just build up for that to start, seriously the Q told him it wont last, he said he knows it won't last but suddenly he had selective thinking. An entire chapter, I say it like this because it wasn't even dram since it was so obvious, I was half expecting him to find her with someone else but I guess that is to "R" for the novel.
Harry is the only one that didn't see it coming and was stupid enough to leave the enterprise, forget fans, even in that world serving on the E is basically the end goal of many. But it is obvious this was done by author to get other "Adventure" happen, this entire chapter was just build up for that to start, seriously the Q told him it wont last, he said he knows it won't last but suddenly he had selective thinking. An entire chapter, I say it like this because it wasn't even dram since it was so obvious, I was half expecting him to find her with someone else but I guess that is to "R" for the novel.
7/31/2023 c5 erozoth
This decision seems more forced from the author for "growth", from a story stand point it feels like killing the plot line so it is obvious something will happen, something not good. Either before even leaving or during the stay on the planet... I mean, there is no other choice, otherwise the story is over. The story of 9-5 Harry.
This decision seems more forced from the author for "growth", from a story stand point it feels like killing the plot line so it is obvious something will happen, something not good. Either before even leaving or during the stay on the planet... I mean, there is no other choice, otherwise the story is over. The story of 9-5 Harry.
6/30/2023 c19 bookwormtx
Thanks I found this story on a whim and got really involved in it it was a great story thank you very much
Thanks I found this story on a whim and got really involved in it it was a great story thank you very much
6/26/2023 c12 
2Specky Clarke
I think you are wrong in your assumption regarding 'Aquamenti'. Water is 2 molecules of Hydrogen and 1 molecule of Oxygen, it is therefore probable that the spell recombines the molecues to produce water, not conjured. This is a very good story though.
2Specky ClarkeI think you are wrong in your assumption regarding 'Aquamenti'. Water is 2 molecules of Hydrogen and 1 molecule of Oxygen, it is therefore probable that the spell recombines the molecues to produce water, not conjured. This is a very good story though.
6/14/2023 c19 8gabzep
Great story! I was really disappointed in Zhade not sticking it out with Harry. Tho I’m glad he had Lerri in the end, her character hadn’t be developed as good as Zhade.
8gabzepGreat story! I was really disappointed in Zhade not sticking it out with Harry. Tho I’m glad he had Lerri in the end, her character hadn’t be developed as good as Zhade.
6/12/2023 c19 22Shinobi Gatana
... Good story. Now my ridiculous request: Can you do an AU of it where Harry ends up with Paige. I don't know why I got so invested in her, but that one hurt a bit... I won't write more here as I don't want to ruin it for people like me who reads some of the reviews here and there, but that would be really cool. Maybe a five or six chapter story that diverges when Paige departs her post. Anyway, whether you opt to give that a go or not: Thanks for the hard work. I enjoyed it.
22Shinobi Gatana... Good story. Now my ridiculous request: Can you do an AU of it where Harry ends up with Paige. I don't know why I got so invested in her, but that one hurt a bit... I won't write more here as I don't want to ruin it for people like me who reads some of the reviews here and there, but that would be really cool. Maybe a five or six chapter story that diverges when Paige departs her post. Anyway, whether you opt to give that a go or not: Thanks for the hard work. I enjoyed it.
6/12/2023 c19 22stargatesg1fan1
That was a very enjoyable story. I loved the fact that Harry was with multiple ladies and was immortal. I also loved the power level he achieved in the end. I really enjoyed your take on a Harry Potter Star Trek crossover. Thank you for writing that and sharing it with us.
22stargatesg1fan1That was a very enjoyable story. I loved the fact that Harry was with multiple ladies and was immortal. I also loved the power level he achieved in the end. I really enjoyed your take on a Harry Potter Star Trek crossover. Thank you for writing that and sharing it with us.