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Someone on Reddit mentioned Storio (storioai dot com)—finally tried it. It lets you import stories and turn them into visual branching narratives. Just thought I’d share in case others might like it too.
Someone on Reddit mentioned Storio (storioai dot com)—finally tried it. It lets you import stories and turn them into visual branching narratives. Just thought I’d share in case others might like it too.
4/23 c27 
3coldblue2015
Thanks for updating!
...wow, you updated "Coir Buaidh', but also "Game of Kingdoms" and "A New Player in the Force: The Reforged Path".
Spring time is a busy time, so I understand and know you do not usually update all three of these stories on the same day.
Domhnall MacLeod:
So far I am liking what I am reading with the Greek Free States and the Egyptian Vacation/Coordination of Connections. I do like Lord Artcus Black idea of Sirius and Regulas part the trip, but mostly as a Culture Shock and Discipline vacation to help Sirius to become more motivated. Honestly, I do not feel bad that Dom called Sirius something close to a Brother, because he might be manipulative and yet he could see Sirius as one few LIVING people to call as a Brother. It great to read the Spartan Training to stick to the Ancient Traditions of Warriors and also to use different Magical Foci with Gauntlets and introduce Celestial Bronze. It great that Martial Arts/Training and Exercise is important and Dom will use Greek/Spartan training exercises with his already establish exercise routine. Egypt is important in "Harry Potter" with the Lore, but I love the idea of Dom encounter with High Beings/Deities as form of Contract to push his magical skills further with their Blessings. Especially if Bast, Mut, and Bes being Egyptian Deities closely associated with Cats or in Xenocrates case a Raijuu.
Greek Free States:
Huh...Geriode Siskokas is 100 years old, but has several children in their Teen years...So Wizard and Witch fertility could work differently and have children later in life. It also brings into question if Wizards and Witches live longer and with Greeks they sadly have Herpo the Foul as someone who created Hocraux. I would not be surprised if Greek Wizards/Witches have affinity for longevity on some level. Akadima is interesting idea for the Greece Free States version of Hogswarts and even their government, but they are much more Militant and less Showy/Fancy like the British Ministry and Hogswarts try to give of Fantasy/Wonder. Also, it seems like a Military style of Enlistment of all ages and gender, but those who don't serve do not get to become representatives in Congress, let alone the Senate or the Political Powers/Influence. It interesting that Celestial Bronze and their Gauntlets/Hand base Foci's allow them to wield Melee Weapons as last resort. It seems we are just introduce to Sparta and the Military discipline, but I bet more Greece Free States have focus on Philosophy, Art, Arithmancy and Deviation.
Egypt:
Again, Eqypt is important to "Harry Potter" and even House Black trace their Bloodline back to Egypt...So I am not going to be surprise if Lord Arctcus Black has some connections or roots with the Egyptian Nobility and Priests. Still...It seems that Lord Arctcus was bothered by Priest or Achorist Aman-Ra of Thebes interest. Again, Sirius and Regulas were called Arctcus children, so Wizards and Witches have children LATER in life and their fertility last longer...Still it seems that certain Wizards and Witches can DETECT how powerful Dom can become and being bonded with Magical Familiar like Xenocrates is another sign in certain Cultures that is a Blessing or Curse...So we will have to wait and read.
Sirius Black:
I guess this is way to establish a form of connection/bond that not negative. Honestly I can read Sirius not causing too much trouble in Hogswarts with Dom around and knowing Dom goes to the Greek Free States for training in Sparta, but also understand that Dom has different upbringing compared to Sirius...I mean, Sirius has to know that Dom immediate Family was killed and that caused some trauma...Still, I do see Sirius causing trouble/pranks in Hogswarts with James Potter influence and Peter Pettigrew, with Remus Lupin telling them not to do it...If Sirius goes after Severus Snape and Snape is sponsored/protected by Dom, I can see conflict. Mostly with James Potter and Domhnall MacLeod, given James did not like Serevus base on him existing and being close to Lily Evans...So Sirius might be troubling situation given that he knows Dom can fight and he also knows Dom talented Magic based on being able to adapt/try new Magical Foci like in the Greek Free States and who knows what will happen in Egypt.
Questions
1) Can we expect Egypt for Dom to encounter Higher Beings/Deities of the Eqyptian Pantheon, which would be disturbing and amazing given Dom could gain blessings/curses from Deities of various cultures?
2) Will Dom visit LongHau Dynasty or Magical China, given it traces it foots a far back or further than Egypt?
3) Is it possible that Dom is giving off powerful Magic to those who can Detect or Sense the potential in Dom?
4) When will Dom encounter Slytherin Death Eaters? Would it be his 3rd years and realize Voldemort getting closer to making his move for the First Wizard War in United Kingdom?
5) Is it possible we will have Dom interact with Regulas Black a bit before he goes back to his 2nd Year in Hogswarts?
6) Does Dom have reputation outside of Slytherin or Slytherin rivals that spread gossip/rumors?
Suggestions
1) I mean, I hope for other Pantheons, but Egypt is a good place for Dom to stumble upon the awe/horror of Higher Beings or Deities. Kind of would be interesting if Dom get blessing from one Deity but is cursed by its rival/enemy Deity. It just makes Dom wonder if Magic really is genetic and now transcends into a Spiritual Connections with Deities as a Source/Power-boost of Magic for Wizards and Witches.
2)...Part of me wants Dom to study Magic in China along with learning some Martial Arts. It just would be interesting that if Dom has to go to Japan to the Shogun, he makes a side-trip to China and has unexpected/interesting experience. Also, I wonder if China has different Magical Foci like Egyptian and Free Greek States wizards and witches. It just would show Dom is man who can adapt and learn from other Cultures/Magic.
3) I figure more powerful/controlled Wizards and Witches can sense Dom potential, which rare and kind of like a Torch/Bone-Fire amongst Candles. That Dom magic makes him stick out and also that Dom is not there yet to HIDE his Magical Radiation/Energy he gives off at the moment.
4) I feel like 2nd Year would be good, but I can wait for 3rd Year with Dom being scouted for Recruitment or even use as target for potential Death Eater recruits in Slytherin. Mostly, I see Dom measuring this encounter and know he has one year after finishing Hogswarts before the Marauders, Lily and Snape graduate before the First Wizard World in the UK starts...So that gives him alert that that Voldemort making his moves.
5) That would not be too bad. Kind of like Dom gets a measure of Regulas and is actually the few or only person who understands Regulas Black as person. That Regulas betrayed Voldemort and died, but never got the credit for discovering the Horcrux and that he respect Kreacher the House Elf. It just would be great to read your interpretation of Regulas Black his interaction with Domhnall MacLeod.
6) I can see rumors/gossip being a major thing in Hogswarts and not just during Harry Potter time in Hogswarts...Mostly, I see Dom enemies spread word outside of their House to damage Dom reputation or perhaps we know Dom is called a Progressive within Slytherin House given his wellness to teach/educate Muggleborns on Wizard/Witch culture/customs. Something interesting that gives Dom infamy and fame at the same time.
Keep up the good work, stay safe, and stay healthy!
3coldblue2015Thanks for updating!
...wow, you updated "Coir Buaidh', but also "Game of Kingdoms" and "A New Player in the Force: The Reforged Path".
Spring time is a busy time, so I understand and know you do not usually update all three of these stories on the same day.
Domhnall MacLeod:
So far I am liking what I am reading with the Greek Free States and the Egyptian Vacation/Coordination of Connections. I do like Lord Artcus Black idea of Sirius and Regulas part the trip, but mostly as a Culture Shock and Discipline vacation to help Sirius to become more motivated. Honestly, I do not feel bad that Dom called Sirius something close to a Brother, because he might be manipulative and yet he could see Sirius as one few LIVING people to call as a Brother. It great to read the Spartan Training to stick to the Ancient Traditions of Warriors and also to use different Magical Foci with Gauntlets and introduce Celestial Bronze. It great that Martial Arts/Training and Exercise is important and Dom will use Greek/Spartan training exercises with his already establish exercise routine. Egypt is important in "Harry Potter" with the Lore, but I love the idea of Dom encounter with High Beings/Deities as form of Contract to push his magical skills further with their Blessings. Especially if Bast, Mut, and Bes being Egyptian Deities closely associated with Cats or in Xenocrates case a Raijuu.
Greek Free States:
Huh...Geriode Siskokas is 100 years old, but has several children in their Teen years...So Wizard and Witch fertility could work differently and have children later in life. It also brings into question if Wizards and Witches live longer and with Greeks they sadly have Herpo the Foul as someone who created Hocraux. I would not be surprised if Greek Wizards/Witches have affinity for longevity on some level. Akadima is interesting idea for the Greece Free States version of Hogswarts and even their government, but they are much more Militant and less Showy/Fancy like the British Ministry and Hogswarts try to give of Fantasy/Wonder. Also, it seems like a Military style of Enlistment of all ages and gender, but those who don't serve do not get to become representatives in Congress, let alone the Senate or the Political Powers/Influence. It interesting that Celestial Bronze and their Gauntlets/Hand base Foci's allow them to wield Melee Weapons as last resort. It seems we are just introduce to Sparta and the Military discipline, but I bet more Greece Free States have focus on Philosophy, Art, Arithmancy and Deviation.
Egypt:
Again, Eqypt is important to "Harry Potter" and even House Black trace their Bloodline back to Egypt...So I am not going to be surprise if Lord Arctcus Black has some connections or roots with the Egyptian Nobility and Priests. Still...It seems that Lord Arctcus was bothered by Priest or Achorist Aman-Ra of Thebes interest. Again, Sirius and Regulas were called Arctcus children, so Wizards and Witches have children LATER in life and their fertility last longer...Still it seems that certain Wizards and Witches can DETECT how powerful Dom can become and being bonded with Magical Familiar like Xenocrates is another sign in certain Cultures that is a Blessing or Curse...So we will have to wait and read.
Sirius Black:
I guess this is way to establish a form of connection/bond that not negative. Honestly I can read Sirius not causing too much trouble in Hogswarts with Dom around and knowing Dom goes to the Greek Free States for training in Sparta, but also understand that Dom has different upbringing compared to Sirius...I mean, Sirius has to know that Dom immediate Family was killed and that caused some trauma...Still, I do see Sirius causing trouble/pranks in Hogswarts with James Potter influence and Peter Pettigrew, with Remus Lupin telling them not to do it...If Sirius goes after Severus Snape and Snape is sponsored/protected by Dom, I can see conflict. Mostly with James Potter and Domhnall MacLeod, given James did not like Serevus base on him existing and being close to Lily Evans...So Sirius might be troubling situation given that he knows Dom can fight and he also knows Dom talented Magic based on being able to adapt/try new Magical Foci like in the Greek Free States and who knows what will happen in Egypt.
Questions
1) Can we expect Egypt for Dom to encounter Higher Beings/Deities of the Eqyptian Pantheon, which would be disturbing and amazing given Dom could gain blessings/curses from Deities of various cultures?
2) Will Dom visit LongHau Dynasty or Magical China, given it traces it foots a far back or further than Egypt?
3) Is it possible that Dom is giving off powerful Magic to those who can Detect or Sense the potential in Dom?
4) When will Dom encounter Slytherin Death Eaters? Would it be his 3rd years and realize Voldemort getting closer to making his move for the First Wizard War in United Kingdom?
5) Is it possible we will have Dom interact with Regulas Black a bit before he goes back to his 2nd Year in Hogswarts?
6) Does Dom have reputation outside of Slytherin or Slytherin rivals that spread gossip/rumors?
Suggestions
1) I mean, I hope for other Pantheons, but Egypt is a good place for Dom to stumble upon the awe/horror of Higher Beings or Deities. Kind of would be interesting if Dom get blessing from one Deity but is cursed by its rival/enemy Deity. It just makes Dom wonder if Magic really is genetic and now transcends into a Spiritual Connections with Deities as a Source/Power-boost of Magic for Wizards and Witches.
2)...Part of me wants Dom to study Magic in China along with learning some Martial Arts. It just would be interesting that if Dom has to go to Japan to the Shogun, he makes a side-trip to China and has unexpected/interesting experience. Also, I wonder if China has different Magical Foci like Egyptian and Free Greek States wizards and witches. It just would show Dom is man who can adapt and learn from other Cultures/Magic.
3) I figure more powerful/controlled Wizards and Witches can sense Dom potential, which rare and kind of like a Torch/Bone-Fire amongst Candles. That Dom magic makes him stick out and also that Dom is not there yet to HIDE his Magical Radiation/Energy he gives off at the moment.
4) I feel like 2nd Year would be good, but I can wait for 3rd Year with Dom being scouted for Recruitment or even use as target for potential Death Eater recruits in Slytherin. Mostly, I see Dom measuring this encounter and know he has one year after finishing Hogswarts before the Marauders, Lily and Snape graduate before the First Wizard World in the UK starts...So that gives him alert that that Voldemort making his moves.
5) That would not be too bad. Kind of like Dom gets a measure of Regulas and is actually the few or only person who understands Regulas Black as person. That Regulas betrayed Voldemort and died, but never got the credit for discovering the Horcrux and that he respect Kreacher the House Elf. It just would be great to read your interpretation of Regulas Black his interaction with Domhnall MacLeod.
6) I can see rumors/gossip being a major thing in Hogswarts and not just during Harry Potter time in Hogswarts...Mostly, I see Dom enemies spread word outside of their House to damage Dom reputation or perhaps we know Dom is called a Progressive within Slytherin House given his wellness to teach/educate Muggleborns on Wizard/Witch culture/customs. Something interesting that gives Dom infamy and fame at the same time.
Keep up the good work, stay safe, and stay healthy!
4/22 c27 cameron1812
Love the time in Greece and what he is trying to do with Sirius. The Egyptian arc promises! Thank you:)
Love the time in Greece and what he is trying to do with Sirius. The Egyptian arc promises! Thank you:)
4/22 c27 Maverick123214685
I wonder if the infinite has anything to do with the realm of shadows, or the language of the fleshcrafting book
I wonder if the infinite has anything to do with the realm of shadows, or the language of the fleshcrafting book
4/12 c6 LongSongSilver
oh boy, cultivator type ranking of potential. and now Hogwarts only takes students of above a certain level? oof.
cant say I enjoy that aspect of the story, but it is what it is.
oh boy, cultivator type ranking of potential. and now Hogwarts only takes students of above a certain level? oof.
cant say I enjoy that aspect of the story, but it is what it is.
3/27 c24 3TheRambler107
Slight error middle to the top, you said crave the second array when i think you meant carve!
3TheRambler107Slight error middle to the top, you said crave the second array when i think you meant carve!
3/26 c2 tsougrhs.59
Hahahha nice adult
Can not even conteol his emotion cause some kids talk shit about him
Hahahhaa he supposed to be a adult with plans to conteol the world
But he ia crying left and right
Hahahhaha trash
Hahahha nice adult
Can not even conteol his emotion cause some kids talk shit about him
Hahahhaa he supposed to be a adult with plans to conteol the world
But he ia crying left and right
Hahahhaha trash
3/26 c2 tsougrhs.59
Hahah he said he grow with a military father so he was ok
And he is a fucking adult
But he act lik old kid and cry about how others tlak to him
Ohh poor mad little boy
Damn trash Mc
Hahah he said he grow with a military father so he was ok
And he is a fucking adult
But he act lik old kid and cry about how others tlak to him
Ohh poor mad little boy
Damn trash Mc
3/26 c26 3coldblue2015
Thanks for updating!
Domhnall MacLeod develop of a Mind Palace:
It not a bad idea. I think The Sinister Man who wrote "Harry Potter and the Prince of Slytherine" did a chapter recently with Lily Potter own Mind Palace taking inspiration from Tolkien "Lord of the Rings" by creating Moria as her representation and even having Smaug from "The Hobbit" as her defense against Legilimency/Intruders in her mind...Now a Death Star from "Star Wars" is okay potential. I love "Alien/Predators" with actual Aliens and Predators attacking Legilimens. I think if you are going for a Death Star, Dom should make it a intense Maze/Labyrinth to redirect Legilumens with False Memories or into Aliens and Predators to attack them. I don't know about Lasers/Turrets, but that is your call.
Dom new Flesh Carving Rune Array:
I like it! Honestly getting a Tattoo body/sleeve for Dom right now...So it was painful and has some pro's, but also con's. Dom body being enhanced from his Sensory Organs to his Muscles are getting a Boost, perhaps Super Human. The most important is Speed, Reflexes and Reaction; all of which are useful for Wand movement for Dueling or even Fencing...The fact Dom wants to use Duel Wield both his Public Wand and his Chief/Lord Wand is something interesting and new...It rather interesting that Charms that attack Sensory Organs and even Muggle weapons like Flash-Bombs and Smoke Grenades can hinder/weaken Dom, which is something he is aware. Kadic was worried for Dom given he was bed-ridden for 2 days.
Dom interaction with Sirius Black, Regulas Black, Lily Evans, Severus Snape, and James Potter:
Most likely somethings will happen like Cannon...I honestly think Lily will be in Gryfinndor still, but it would be great for Dom to show the contrast that not ALL Slytherine are Death Eaters/Traditionalist. The fact Sirius is going to be in Gryfinndor. I just do not see Sirius changing right now, but perhaps as adult/graduate of Hogswarts we see Sirius and Dom become actual friends. Regulas is someone that Dom should Mentor in his 4th year and I kind of hope Regulas path of mastery is with Transfiguration with Dom helping Regulas become a Animagus. Severus will be easy friend with Dom in Slytherine and honestly the only issues Dom will have is Lucius Malfoy tries to recruit Severus to Lord Voldemort cause. Although, I see Dom watching out for Severus when James Potter and Sirius Black try bullying him during Hogswarts...James Potter will be mix, because Dom is not going to be bullied by James Potter when he acting like spoiled brat and knows how to fight back with words, wands, Fencing, and perhaps even School Yard fight...Mr. Weasely and Malfoy got in a fist fight before Hagrid separated them.
Dom going with Lord Arctucus Black along with Sirius and Regulas to a trip/gathering of Egyptian and Greek Free States:
Most likely this is to expand how OTHER Wizard Societies/Countries use Magic...Not like with just Wands, but Wandless Magic. Perhaps Staves or Runes or Chants or Deity Worship/Blessing. We do not know. I figure Arctucus is further mentoring Domnhall to make allies OUTSIDE of the United Kingdom and something he hope's Sirius or Regulas learns to do. It rather interesting to read what Allies or Enemies Dom could find...Especially with Summer Solstice Massacre about near half-a-decade ago. So Dom's possible enemies could strike at him their or reveal a Trail of Clues for Dom to find those who Murderer his Family and other Scottish/Highland Clans.
The Red Caps near Dunscaith Forest and other unknown Magical Creatures:
I personally, do not want Dom to kill ALL the Magical Creatures in his Ancestral Family Forest. For now Red Caps are fine given they are not all gone. More like Dom and Xeno flexing their power and checking the Food-Chain so to speak in this Environment. Most likely, there are more DANGEROUS and larger creatures in the Forest...Something powerful and dangerous. I do not know if it XX, XXX or XXXX-Magical Creature; but I hope Dom ask his Ancestral Portraits/Gandparents about the Eco-system of his Forest around Dunscaith and if their a reason such as gathering natural resources for Potions, Herbology, and Rituals.
Questions
1) Will Dom neutral/third party Faction unite the Highland Clan's to his side, if it reveal Voldemort and Dumbledore side has members responsible to the Summer Solstice Massacre?
2) Is Aife Mac Uidhir mentoring Dom in Shadow Magic going to show some interesting uses in Wizard Duels or means of Escape/Ambush enemies?
3) Can we expect Aife Mac Uidhir to be the first candidate for a Political Marriage that Dom will have to consider in the future?
4) Is the larger Magical creatures in Dunscaith Castle forest a Balor of the Evil Eye, Ellen Trechend the 3-Headed Monster, or a Failinis the supernatural Hound?
5) Even if Dom does not know Martial Arts, if he got into a Fist-Fight with his classmates would the NEW Flesh Rune Array amply his ability to defeat them in a fight?
6) Are we going to have different POV's other than Domhnall MacLeod?
Suggestions
1) That could be something. Not only all the Half-Bloods, but also the Highland Clans backing Dom if it shown proof that Voldemort AND Dumbledore have members responsible for the Summe Solstice Massacre. It would be interesting and show no clear cut of Good and Evil, but alliances and barging to survive...Something that would piss off the Highland Clans.
2) I remember reading the Shadow Binds/Chains and Travel in Shadows...But is there more? I hope Aife shown Dom more or even Dom uses his own Theory to create something new/practical. Shadow Magic just seems cool and versatility.
3)...That could be another possibility for Dom to deal with Aife. She comes from a Clan of Antiquity and hidden. Similar to Ollivanders Family. I just see it interesting and perhaps a struggle for Dom to turn Aife down or...he might accept the Political Marriage proposal.
4) Any of these creatures could be Apex predators in Dunscaith Forest. Pick your creature or use Multiple Creatures that are dangerous and legendary in their own right. Something Dom has to deal with or learn to live with those Creatures.
5) I figure, yes, Dom would beat up someone in a Fist-Fight. Honestly, I do not know how that would look in Hogswarts, but the Weasley Twins and Harry Potter beating up Draco Malfoy cannot be a isolated incident. I figure Dom might get jumped/ambushed, but Dom being stronger now could put up a much better fight...Kind of adds to his reputation as a good student, athlete, and...can put up a fight.
6) That is something to consider. I really hope that we get important or know characters of "Harry Potter" on Domnhall MacLeod. What his impact or importance? How Dom is seen as alley to some, but a enemy to others. From anther character POV, not Dom. With Dom POV, it pretty good to read and I just want more character POV's of your story outside of Dom.
Keep up the good work, stay safe, and stay healthy!
3coldblue2015Thanks for updating!
Domhnall MacLeod develop of a Mind Palace:
It not a bad idea. I think The Sinister Man who wrote "Harry Potter and the Prince of Slytherine" did a chapter recently with Lily Potter own Mind Palace taking inspiration from Tolkien "Lord of the Rings" by creating Moria as her representation and even having Smaug from "The Hobbit" as her defense against Legilimency/Intruders in her mind...Now a Death Star from "Star Wars" is okay potential. I love "Alien/Predators" with actual Aliens and Predators attacking Legilimens. I think if you are going for a Death Star, Dom should make it a intense Maze/Labyrinth to redirect Legilumens with False Memories or into Aliens and Predators to attack them. I don't know about Lasers/Turrets, but that is your call.
Dom new Flesh Carving Rune Array:
I like it! Honestly getting a Tattoo body/sleeve for Dom right now...So it was painful and has some pro's, but also con's. Dom body being enhanced from his Sensory Organs to his Muscles are getting a Boost, perhaps Super Human. The most important is Speed, Reflexes and Reaction; all of which are useful for Wand movement for Dueling or even Fencing...The fact Dom wants to use Duel Wield both his Public Wand and his Chief/Lord Wand is something interesting and new...It rather interesting that Charms that attack Sensory Organs and even Muggle weapons like Flash-Bombs and Smoke Grenades can hinder/weaken Dom, which is something he is aware. Kadic was worried for Dom given he was bed-ridden for 2 days.
Dom interaction with Sirius Black, Regulas Black, Lily Evans, Severus Snape, and James Potter:
Most likely somethings will happen like Cannon...I honestly think Lily will be in Gryfinndor still, but it would be great for Dom to show the contrast that not ALL Slytherine are Death Eaters/Traditionalist. The fact Sirius is going to be in Gryfinndor. I just do not see Sirius changing right now, but perhaps as adult/graduate of Hogswarts we see Sirius and Dom become actual friends. Regulas is someone that Dom should Mentor in his 4th year and I kind of hope Regulas path of mastery is with Transfiguration with Dom helping Regulas become a Animagus. Severus will be easy friend with Dom in Slytherine and honestly the only issues Dom will have is Lucius Malfoy tries to recruit Severus to Lord Voldemort cause. Although, I see Dom watching out for Severus when James Potter and Sirius Black try bullying him during Hogswarts...James Potter will be mix, because Dom is not going to be bullied by James Potter when he acting like spoiled brat and knows how to fight back with words, wands, Fencing, and perhaps even School Yard fight...Mr. Weasely and Malfoy got in a fist fight before Hagrid separated them.
Dom going with Lord Arctucus Black along with Sirius and Regulas to a trip/gathering of Egyptian and Greek Free States:
Most likely this is to expand how OTHER Wizard Societies/Countries use Magic...Not like with just Wands, but Wandless Magic. Perhaps Staves or Runes or Chants or Deity Worship/Blessing. We do not know. I figure Arctucus is further mentoring Domnhall to make allies OUTSIDE of the United Kingdom and something he hope's Sirius or Regulas learns to do. It rather interesting to read what Allies or Enemies Dom could find...Especially with Summer Solstice Massacre about near half-a-decade ago. So Dom's possible enemies could strike at him their or reveal a Trail of Clues for Dom to find those who Murderer his Family and other Scottish/Highland Clans.
The Red Caps near Dunscaith Forest and other unknown Magical Creatures:
I personally, do not want Dom to kill ALL the Magical Creatures in his Ancestral Family Forest. For now Red Caps are fine given they are not all gone. More like Dom and Xeno flexing their power and checking the Food-Chain so to speak in this Environment. Most likely, there are more DANGEROUS and larger creatures in the Forest...Something powerful and dangerous. I do not know if it XX, XXX or XXXX-Magical Creature; but I hope Dom ask his Ancestral Portraits/Gandparents about the Eco-system of his Forest around Dunscaith and if their a reason such as gathering natural resources for Potions, Herbology, and Rituals.
Questions
1) Will Dom neutral/third party Faction unite the Highland Clan's to his side, if it reveal Voldemort and Dumbledore side has members responsible to the Summer Solstice Massacre?
2) Is Aife Mac Uidhir mentoring Dom in Shadow Magic going to show some interesting uses in Wizard Duels or means of Escape/Ambush enemies?
3) Can we expect Aife Mac Uidhir to be the first candidate for a Political Marriage that Dom will have to consider in the future?
4) Is the larger Magical creatures in Dunscaith Castle forest a Balor of the Evil Eye, Ellen Trechend the 3-Headed Monster, or a Failinis the supernatural Hound?
5) Even if Dom does not know Martial Arts, if he got into a Fist-Fight with his classmates would the NEW Flesh Rune Array amply his ability to defeat them in a fight?
6) Are we going to have different POV's other than Domhnall MacLeod?
Suggestions
1) That could be something. Not only all the Half-Bloods, but also the Highland Clans backing Dom if it shown proof that Voldemort AND Dumbledore have members responsible for the Summe Solstice Massacre. It would be interesting and show no clear cut of Good and Evil, but alliances and barging to survive...Something that would piss off the Highland Clans.
2) I remember reading the Shadow Binds/Chains and Travel in Shadows...But is there more? I hope Aife shown Dom more or even Dom uses his own Theory to create something new/practical. Shadow Magic just seems cool and versatility.
3)...That could be another possibility for Dom to deal with Aife. She comes from a Clan of Antiquity and hidden. Similar to Ollivanders Family. I just see it interesting and perhaps a struggle for Dom to turn Aife down or...he might accept the Political Marriage proposal.
4) Any of these creatures could be Apex predators in Dunscaith Forest. Pick your creature or use Multiple Creatures that are dangerous and legendary in their own right. Something Dom has to deal with or learn to live with those Creatures.
5) I figure, yes, Dom would beat up someone in a Fist-Fight. Honestly, I do not know how that would look in Hogswarts, but the Weasley Twins and Harry Potter beating up Draco Malfoy cannot be a isolated incident. I figure Dom might get jumped/ambushed, but Dom being stronger now could put up a much better fight...Kind of adds to his reputation as a good student, athlete, and...can put up a fight.
6) That is something to consider. I really hope that we get important or know characters of "Harry Potter" on Domnhall MacLeod. What his impact or importance? How Dom is seen as alley to some, but a enemy to others. From anther character POV, not Dom. With Dom POV, it pretty good to read and I just want more character POV's of your story outside of Dom.
Keep up the good work, stay safe, and stay healthy!
3/26 c26 5Monkey D. Conan
Slowly but surely he continues to grow. Excellent work as always! Can’t wait for more!
5Monkey D. ConanSlowly but surely he continues to grow. Excellent work as always! Can’t wait for more!