
10/31/2023 c1 Cool Guest
Well putting aside the core reinterpretations such as Harry actually having some hope of attending Hogwarts this isn't too bad.
I would say it would be a good outline for an original plot inspired by Casscade rather than a sequel, in the original story Harry couldn't spend much beyond 15 minutes without a live sacrifice to think and act for himself to some extent, and regular sacrifices would straighten the monster within him too much without a doubt.
That among other implied details from Casscade story wouldn't result in this plot development, but if you look at it's own independent worth there are ways in which this plot could coherently take place.
I like the way the word count was minimized by telling instead of showing for the most part.
Well putting aside the core reinterpretations such as Harry actually having some hope of attending Hogwarts this isn't too bad.
I would say it would be a good outline for an original plot inspired by Casscade rather than a sequel, in the original story Harry couldn't spend much beyond 15 minutes without a live sacrifice to think and act for himself to some extent, and regular sacrifices would straighten the monster within him too much without a doubt.
That among other implied details from Casscade story wouldn't result in this plot development, but if you look at it's own independent worth there are ways in which this plot could coherently take place.
I like the way the word count was minimized by telling instead of showing for the most part.