for Destiny's Foil
201/12 c1 dastewie2012
The power of a long range weapon is large. Just think about a punch being a dot that you can aim, doable but harder, but now you get a whole line to attack.
The power of a long range weapon is large. Just think about a punch being a dot that you can aim, doable but harder, but now you get a whole line to attack.
11/19/2024 c14 Agent Frank
I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this, especially what you're going to do in the immediate future.
I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this, especially what you're going to do in the immediate future.
11/19/2024 c13 Agent Frank
I think you have a really good balance with the MC's character at the moment. He's angry and impulsive but he's not edgy and he clearly treats the people around him right.
I think you have a really good balance with the MC's character at the moment. He's angry and impulsive but he's not edgy and he clearly treats the people around him right.
11/19/2024 c10 Agent Frank
I'm really enjoying the story so far; the pace hasn't bothered me. This is really important set up that will set up his motivation and goals for the rest of the story.
Regarding the random question, I definitely like your current top 5.
1. Shanks - Best Haki user alive and best portrayal so far.
2. Dragon - Monkey D in his prime a powerful DF
3. Mihawk - Clearly relative to Shanks, Zoro's goal. Same tier as the two above him and the only reason he's not higher is portrayal.
4. Akainu - Fleet Admiral, one of the final opponents, most destructive DF, ODA loves him so I think he's gotten significantly stronger. Really good candidate for Conq Haki so he could be as high as 2.
5. Luffy - I think he's stronger than BB until BB gets his third DF. Conq Haki, elite Observation, elite armament and a Legendary DF. Also, when he's motivated, we know he can push his stamina (his only real weakness) ever further.
I'm really enjoying the story so far; the pace hasn't bothered me. This is really important set up that will set up his motivation and goals for the rest of the story.
Regarding the random question, I definitely like your current top 5.
1. Shanks - Best Haki user alive and best portrayal so far.
2. Dragon - Monkey D in his prime a powerful DF
3. Mihawk - Clearly relative to Shanks, Zoro's goal. Same tier as the two above him and the only reason he's not higher is portrayal.
4. Akainu - Fleet Admiral, one of the final opponents, most destructive DF, ODA loves him so I think he's gotten significantly stronger. Really good candidate for Conq Haki so he could be as high as 2.
5. Luffy - I think he's stronger than BB until BB gets his third DF. Conq Haki, elite Observation, elite armament and a Legendary DF. Also, when he's motivated, we know he can push his stamina (his only real weakness) ever further.
11/19/2024 c1 Agent Frank
Excellent start to the story, I can instantly tell you have a really good understanding of the One piece world.
Excellent start to the story, I can instantly tell you have a really good understanding of the One piece world.
9/15/2024 c4 guilhermehsqueiroz007
I don't see why Henry throwed the thought aways instead of pursuing further specially when it comes to regi, weird but okay i guess.
I don't see why Henry throwed the thought aways instead of pursuing further specially when it comes to regi, weird but okay i guess.
9/15/2024 c3 guilhermehsqueiroz007
I don't read a lot of of op fics but one thing that i don't like about that is them turning everything into a joke and aways killing potential serious or tense scenes, another thing is autors that just don't know what to do with their characters and fics in general that is aways annoying.
what i like about one piece fic are the ones that notice that while the word is absolutely stupid and takes itself half seriously, the characters that live in there absolutely do, autors that can pull the kind of vibe of something stupid happening characters taking ot seriously and still being absolutely funny
I don't read a lot of of op fics but one thing that i don't like about that is them turning everything into a joke and aways killing potential serious or tense scenes, another thing is autors that just don't know what to do with their characters and fics in general that is aways annoying.
what i like about one piece fic are the ones that notice that while the word is absolutely stupid and takes itself half seriously, the characters that live in there absolutely do, autors that can pull the kind of vibe of something stupid happening characters taking ot seriously and still being absolutely funny
9/15/2024 c2 guilhermehsqueiroz007
Ohhh that's great info to know, another thing i have to mention is that the banther is hilarious and you are really good in making it not get too boring with nothing happening
Ohhh that's great info to know, another thing i have to mention is that the banther is hilarious and you are really good in making it not get too boring with nothing happening