
1/18 c8 Guest
En este cap Hiashi debería vencer muy facil a los ninjas del sonido
En este cap Hiashi debería vencer muy facil a los ninjas del sonido
4/2/2024 c17
62Stormshadow13
I love your Naruto stories and I’m glad that I got to read this sasuke and Hanabi story. It was fun getting to read about another character.

I love your Naruto stories and I’m glad that I got to read this sasuke and Hanabi story. It was fun getting to read about another character.
5/31/2023 c17
1setokayba2n
Was Tayuya not in the fight in Rain? I think she was not mentioned, not to say that leaving aside Kakashi and Naruto and Sasuke and Jiraiya, the others did not seem to do too much

Was Tayuya not in the fight in Rain? I think she was not mentioned, not to say that leaving aside Kakashi and Naruto and Sasuke and Jiraiya, the others did not seem to do too much
4/28/2023 c13 Leone
Thank you for updating the story, I am glad to know that you will write it to the end, it is very interesting, also just ignore the aggressive or negative comments, surely they must be fans of some couple or just hate Sasuke's character, after all, this page it exists to publish any story and about any character. Too bad some are so ignorant to understand that. I will wait for the next chapter. Good luck.
Thank you for updating the story, I am glad to know that you will write it to the end, it is very interesting, also just ignore the aggressive or negative comments, surely they must be fans of some couple or just hate Sasuke's character, after all, this page it exists to publish any story and about any character. Too bad some are so ignorant to understand that. I will wait for the next chapter. Good luck.
4/19/2023 c10 sonusiraj975
i like the pairing and story and your only story available with this pairing on fanfiction so pls upload
i like the pairing and story and your only story available with this pairing on fanfiction so pls upload
3/6/2023 c4 Kane barton
And there it is so they both have curse marks now hm wonder how the hyguga clan will handle this my guess not good
And there it is so they both have curse marks now hm wonder how the hyguga clan will handle this my guess not good
3/4/2023 c3 Kane barton
Nice chapter good training and nice to see hanabi helping Sasuke with preparing for the chuning exams and so much for happy thoughts from Sasuke it was nice while it lasted and looks like some trouble for Sasuke and hanabi ahead
Nice chapter good training and nice to see hanabi helping Sasuke with preparing for the chuning exams and so much for happy thoughts from Sasuke it was nice while it lasted and looks like some trouble for Sasuke and hanabi ahead
3/5/2023 c3 Senbonzakura K
Really cool I hope you have Sasuke copy some fire or lightning Justus during the chunnin exam. Btw I like how he treats Hanabi like an actual friend.
Really cool I hope you have Sasuke copy some fire or lightning Justus during the chunnin exam. Btw I like how he treats Hanabi like an actual friend.
2/26/2023 c2 Kane barton
Great chapter liked the training Sasuke and hanabi did seems like Sasuke's thoughts are more positive since he met hanabi it's a nice change of pace hanabi on the other hand seems to be going in a darker direction not that I blame her seeing the lack of someone who actually cares in her family and yes I'm including Hinata in that really your too scared to actually talk to your little sister and asking how or why she's feeling so angry grow a spine at this point if Sasuke does leave the village hanabi would probably go with him without hesitation
Great chapter liked the training Sasuke and hanabi did seems like Sasuke's thoughts are more positive since he met hanabi it's a nice change of pace hanabi on the other hand seems to be going in a darker direction not that I blame her seeing the lack of someone who actually cares in her family and yes I'm including Hinata in that really your too scared to actually talk to your little sister and asking how or why she's feeling so angry grow a spine at this point if Sasuke does leave the village hanabi would probably go with him without hesitation
2/27/2023 c2 Iskandar Hero
This is cool, and I really hope that when Hanabi becomes a teenager she will have a more similar appearance to Hanabi in Boruto.
This is cool, and I really hope that when Hanabi becomes a teenager she will have a more similar appearance to Hanabi in Boruto.
2/26/2023 c2 Danish78
Thanks for the update. Interesting training/teaching but I do wonder how effective it'll be since neither of them can fully maximize them without the other's dojutsu. Speaking of which doesn't Sasuke only gain/remember having sharingan only after the Wave arc?
Good to see Hanabi matching up against someone other than Hinata and winning the match w/o using Gentle Fist. Sasuke not hesitating with killing enemies is a huge deviation from canon since even under Orochimaru he only incapacitated foes.
GLHF with your writing and stay safe.
Thanks for the update. Interesting training/teaching but I do wonder how effective it'll be since neither of them can fully maximize them without the other's dojutsu. Speaking of which doesn't Sasuke only gain/remember having sharingan only after the Wave arc?
Good to see Hanabi matching up against someone other than Hinata and winning the match w/o using Gentle Fist. Sasuke not hesitating with killing enemies is a huge deviation from canon since even under Orochimaru he only incapacitated foes.
GLHF with your writing and stay safe.
2/21/2023 c1 Kane barton
Hey great always like the idea of Sasuke and hanabi interacting can't wait to see how this continues
Hey great always like the idea of Sasuke and hanabi interacting can't wait to see how this continues
2/21/2023 c1 Danish78
Thanks for the read. It's good and although there have been Sasuke stories with Hanabi in a mentor/student relationship their underlying bond was always about strength/skill and not their shared common family background/problems.
It's also interesting that you chose to start with genin Sasuke instead of Taka/Hebi or post war. Wondering if Hanabi's friendship is enough to keep Sasuke in Konoha.
GLHF with your writing and stay safe.
Thanks for the read. It's good and although there have been Sasuke stories with Hanabi in a mentor/student relationship their underlying bond was always about strength/skill and not their shared common family background/problems.
It's also interesting that you chose to start with genin Sasuke instead of Taka/Hebi or post war. Wondering if Hanabi's friendship is enough to keep Sasuke in Konoha.
GLHF with your writing and stay safe.