
5h c43 Guest
Ahh so jorm is gonna be the new silver snake? since it was destroyed and all that
Ahh so jorm is gonna be the new silver snake? since it was destroyed and all that
3/11 c43 Guest
Poor Loki learned she had a son only to not be able to interact with him and watch him die. It’s sad.
Poor Loki learned she had a son only to not be able to interact with him and watch him die. It’s sad.
3/8 c43 Shirou000
Dude i feel so bad for loki and i cant wait for the next chapter loki being furious and mama hephatues being angry worried.
Dude i feel so bad for loki and i cant wait for the next chapter loki being furious and mama hephatues being angry worried.
3/5 c43 cybresamurai
Yeah, Loki is going to be pissed, im pretty sure that Loki at least should have gotten visions of Jorm’s life and hell potentially Selphs and maybe even Hela as well if similar to Surya and Indra she got a more intensive vision.
Anyway Jorm showing up gives me hope that Raikou/Ushi Gozen may show up as well later on.
Yeah, Loki is going to be pissed, im pretty sure that Loki at least should have gotten visions of Jorm’s life and hell potentially Selphs and maybe even Hela as well if similar to Surya and Indra she got a more intensive vision.
Anyway Jorm showing up gives me hope that Raikou/Ushi Gozen may show up as well later on.
3/5 c41 codeninja676
Fuuuuuuck, you cant just make ne care then leave us in a cliffhanger! WRYYYYYYYYYYYY!
Fuuuuuuck, you cant just make ne care then leave us in a cliffhanger! WRYYYYYYYYYYYY!
3/5 c43 CodeViper
Like surya with Karna, Jorm death and sad reaction to seeing Loki would haunt Loki long after.
Like surya with Karna, Jorm death and sad reaction to seeing Loki would haunt Loki long after.
3/5 c43 Guest
Please do Fate Stay Cooking & Fate: Legend next!
Please do Fate Stay Cooking & Fate: Legend next!
3/4 c43 DDJ
To start with I like all your stories but do not feel I can give good feed back on things to do better even if this is overall favorite of your stories.
So just to get the thought out of my head, as I expect you already have planes that my thoughts are not likely to affect what you want to do, I would have Shirou tell Loki is that what he did made a temporary body that Jormungandr was able to use from wherever he is and that there was no feedback to the original but he has no way of finding or summoning him in a long term fashion.
This has the amazing point of being mostly true as the body was temporary from the start Jormungandr's true form would be unaffected with the only point that might be something of a lie is that he was using it, as if acted as a normal but short servant summoning then it created a copy of him instead of a remote controlled body :) and you get a not majorly pissed off loki
To start with I like all your stories but do not feel I can give good feed back on things to do better even if this is overall favorite of your stories.
So just to get the thought out of my head, as I expect you already have planes that my thoughts are not likely to affect what you want to do, I would have Shirou tell Loki is that what he did made a temporary body that Jormungandr was able to use from wherever he is and that there was no feedback to the original but he has no way of finding or summoning him in a long term fashion.
This has the amazing point of being mostly true as the body was temporary from the start Jormungandr's true form would be unaffected with the only point that might be something of a lie is that he was using it, as if acted as a normal but short servant summoning then it created a copy of him instead of a remote controlled body :) and you get a not majorly pissed off loki
3/4 c43 Nasulover
At this point can they really keep up the facade of “having lost their memories” with the Gods. The alternate timeline thing is really gonna throw every one of from Danmachi for a loop
At this point can they really keep up the facade of “having lost their memories” with the Gods. The alternate timeline thing is really gonna throw every one of from Danmachi for a loop