for DC Maelstrom: Omni Travels5/15 c9 Damien Evermere
honestly even Hal is a jackass although a lot less than Gardber and Stewart. The only good lanterns in Earth are Kyle Rayner and Alan Scott. Kyle is treated really badly by the guardians of Oa and Alan Scott is not paet of the corps.
honestly even Hal is a jackass although a lot less than Gardber and Stewart. The only good lanterns in Earth are Kyle Rayner and Alan Scott. Kyle is treated really badly by the guardians of Oa and Alan Scott is not paet of the corps.
4/16 c19 Omega
Gran capítulo espero el próximo capitulo
Gran capítulo espero el próximo capitulo
4/8 c19 Guest
Have you tried a Naruto and Devil may cray crossover, yet it be interesting to think about it
Have you tried a Naruto and Devil may cray crossover, yet it be interesting to think about it
4/8 c19 JarredCarney
Huh at so your humanizing Sasuke a bit is he going to be like tomura shigaraki who sees his league as family and friends ?
Huh at so your humanizing Sasuke a bit is he going to be like tomura shigaraki who sees his league as family and friends ?
4/5 c19 Guest
At first I thought you were doing "The Mask" with Jim Carrey but now I'm wondering are you doing Atraus from God of War
At first I thought you were doing "The Mask" with Jim Carrey but now I'm wondering are you doing Atraus from God of War
4/5 c19 Guest02957
Awesome chapter! I love how you had Gwen call Static, Gear, Hotstreak, Megan, Blue Beetle, Supergirl, and the Teen Titans to save Naruto and the Justice League. I also love how you had Naruto unlock Rath and defeated Hro. I personally enjoyed Naruto's reaction to his parents adopting Ace, who was named Himawari. Will Naruto unlock Kushina's powers in the future? Will Ben get powers from the Mask of Loki? These are just suggestions since this is your story and you can write it however you want.
Anyway, awesome chapter and keep up the great work!
Awesome chapter! I love how you had Gwen call Static, Gear, Hotstreak, Megan, Blue Beetle, Supergirl, and the Teen Titans to save Naruto and the Justice League. I also love how you had Naruto unlock Rath and defeated Hro. I personally enjoyed Naruto's reaction to his parents adopting Ace, who was named Himawari. Will Naruto unlock Kushina's powers in the future? Will Ben get powers from the Mask of Loki? These are just suggestions since this is your story and you can write it however you want.
Anyway, awesome chapter and keep up the great work!
4/5 c19 Mr. E Guest
Holy xxxx Ben’s father has the infamous Mask of Loki from the film “The Mask”
Epic Story.
Holy xxxx Ben’s father has the infamous Mask of Loki from the film “The Mask”
Epic Story.
4/5 c19 Djinn
Great new chapter.
Great new chapter.
4/6 c18 Apedreitor
nice way to have Naruto captured, he with the Omnitrix and the master control could end the invasion way too easy and good way to introduce Albedo will you have it as an enemy?
by the way while the chapter at least the plot was ok the spelling was quite bad, I hope that improve on the next chapters, when you take your time your spelling and grammar are quite good and makes your works more enjoyable
nice way to have Naruto captured, he with the Omnitrix and the master control could end the invasion way too easy and good way to introduce Albedo will you have it as an enemy?
by the way while the chapter at least the plot was ok the spelling was quite bad, I hope that improve on the next chapters, when you take your time your spelling and grammar are quite good and makes your works more enjoyable
4/5 c19 thedarkhawk94
Great chapter love that ben will get the mask i hope you make his masked form bald way to many stories give the wearers of the mask hair when they should have a big green bald head
Great chapter love that ben will get the mask i hope you make his masked form bald way to many stories give the wearers of the mask hair when they should have a big green bald head
4/5 c19 
14Power of Magic
Oh man, don't tell me that Ben is gonna get the powers of The Mask (cause if so, that'll make things really crazy). I wonder if Sasuke will ask Albedo to make an Omnitrix for him to use against Naruto and which of the young meta humans they'll free from Cadmus to join them. Yea, Himawari is a much better name for Naruto's new little sister then Ace and it'll be interesting if Naruto and the other young heroes will become honorary members of the Justice League or if they'll be part time members
14Power of MagicOh man, don't tell me that Ben is gonna get the powers of The Mask (cause if so, that'll make things really crazy). I wonder if Sasuke will ask Albedo to make an Omnitrix for him to use against Naruto and which of the young meta humans they'll free from Cadmus to join them. Yea, Himawari is a much better name for Naruto's new little sister then Ace and it'll be interesting if Naruto and the other young heroes will become honorary members of the Justice League or if they'll be part time members