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That’s funny . I flirted with Stowe too at first , not knowing he was gay either but with Female Eivor instead of Male Eivor . Erke getting angry and then laughing at Stowe telling him about Eivor flirting with him is cute . How he can be protective of him and understanding at the same time .

Nicely Written . Like how you focused more on the two’s relationship during the event of Lunden Arc and Eivor’s reaction at the end was Pure Gold . His anger at Stowe telling Erke about the flirting and a bemused Tarben looking on was a nice touch too . Love how you referenced the “Lunden” invite just like in the game’s letter in the game too . Overall a good story