for Darker Than Gray5/4 c5 MatteusN
Hermione is my favorite HP character so whenever I come across fics bashing her It's a bit disappointing, but oh well. Also, this Harry of yours isn't quite... working. 5 chapters in and I got zero connection with him. His interactions with people around him feel fake, and unnatural. Ron and Hermione are the usual 2D cartoonish characters you see in fics that partake in bashing. Overall, this fic is not bad necessarily but needs a bit more work fleshing out characters and their interactions.
Hermione is my favorite HP character so whenever I come across fics bashing her It's a bit disappointing, but oh well. Also, this Harry of yours isn't quite... working. 5 chapters in and I got zero connection with him. His interactions with people around him feel fake, and unnatural. Ron and Hermione are the usual 2D cartoonish characters you see in fics that partake in bashing. Overall, this fic is not bad necessarily but needs a bit more work fleshing out characters and their interactions.
4/23 c28 
17griffin blackwood
I wonder how this changes things overall since marlene was killed alingside her fanily during the first war
17griffin blackwoodI wonder how this changes things overall since marlene was killed alingside her fanily during the first war
4/22 c28 6Yaw6113
I can’t wait for next chapter. Thank you very much. I really appreciate it and enjoyed it a lot
6Yaw6113I can’t wait for next chapter. Thank you very much. I really appreciate it and enjoyed it a lot
4/22 c28 4Antex-The Legendary Zoroark
Well now! Unexpected but a still very unique twist here! So in a way, when we presumed Daphne had said Cyrus was never her father, it was meant in more ways than just: “my father used and abused us, so he could never be a true father.” But instead, she meant it in a more literal way as well after hearing the truth from the faux “father”, that Sirius Black is her true father! Dang! This was just wow! I hope to see more very soon and I’m looking forward to what will occur next! Loved how the prim and proper Daphne was practically reduced to a picture perfect representation of a girl trying to impress someone she liked like one of those teenage schoolgirl crushes! Lol. Cute and adorable! I also enjoyed how she confided with her mother when it came to her little conflict with Susan Bones and how Marlene was portrayed. Well done overall!
Until next chapter!
4Antex-The Legendary ZoroarkWell now! Unexpected but a still very unique twist here! So in a way, when we presumed Daphne had said Cyrus was never her father, it was meant in more ways than just: “my father used and abused us, so he could never be a true father.” But instead, she meant it in a more literal way as well after hearing the truth from the faux “father”, that Sirius Black is her true father! Dang! This was just wow! I hope to see more very soon and I’m looking forward to what will occur next! Loved how the prim and proper Daphne was practically reduced to a picture perfect representation of a girl trying to impress someone she liked like one of those teenage schoolgirl crushes! Lol. Cute and adorable! I also enjoyed how she confided with her mother when it came to her little conflict with Susan Bones and how Marlene was portrayed. Well done overall!
Until next chapter!
4/22 c1 Jack.Dasiy
A compelling journey that blends heart , conflict, and creativity this story captures the spirit of its characters while delivering a fresh and engaging twist on the original universe.
A compelling journey that blends heart , conflict, and creativity this story captures the spirit of its characters while delivering a fresh and engaging twist on the original universe.
12/26/2024 c6 WithinTheMadness
It's good to know HG survives Halloween.
It's maddening that she's being kicked out of the story. Only a handful of chapters in and I can tell she'd be an excellent nut for HP to crack. Tbh, this was the perfect opportunity for both to be in Ravenclaw. Unfortunate. I hope she succeeds elsewhere.
It's good to know HG survives Halloween.
It's maddening that she's being kicked out of the story. Only a handful of chapters in and I can tell she'd be an excellent nut for HP to crack. Tbh, this was the perfect opportunity for both to be in Ravenclaw. Unfortunate. I hope she succeeds elsewhere.
11/29/2024 c27 4Antex-The Legendary Zoroark
Yeah! You go Dobby! You’re free and can stick it to the Malfoy’s with the great Harry Potter, sir!
4Antex-The Legendary ZoroarkYeah! You go Dobby! You’re free and can stick it to the Malfoy’s with the great Harry Potter, sir!