for Night City Legends8/28/2024 c23 Mr.Heller
Naruto doesn't heal because of Kurama, he greatly boosts the healing when Naruto actively uses Biju chakra, but otherwise Naruto heals because he's an Uzumaki. Remember how Karin was skewered by those tree branches, and just walked it off like nothing? Well, Naruto can do that too, all Uzumaki can, healing people by chakra transference too, he does all that in manga. Only things special about Karin are the chains like Kushina, and the sensory stuff. He's about as sturdy as Wolverine, not as immortal as Deadpool, but pretty damn close.
Naruto doesn't heal because of Kurama, he greatly boosts the healing when Naruto actively uses Biju chakra, but otherwise Naruto heals because he's an Uzumaki. Remember how Karin was skewered by those tree branches, and just walked it off like nothing? Well, Naruto can do that too, all Uzumaki can, healing people by chakra transference too, he does all that in manga. Only things special about Karin are the chains like Kushina, and the sensory stuff. He's about as sturdy as Wolverine, not as immortal as Deadpool, but pretty damn close.
8/27/2024 c17 Mr.Heller
About cyberpsychosis - the only difference between it an a normal psychosis is the cause. Maelstrom isn't "on the edge", a lot of them are actual cyberpsychos, but like Adam Smasher, they're are 'High Functioning' cyberpsychos - that's a direct quote from Cyberpunk franchise creator about Smasher - Adam Smasher was born a psychopath, so he's special in a way that becoming a cyberpsycho didn't change anything for him. People like Maine and David are all around normal dudes, so they couldn't handle it.
About cyberpsychosis - the only difference between it an a normal psychosis is the cause. Maelstrom isn't "on the edge", a lot of them are actual cyberpsychos, but like Adam Smasher, they're are 'High Functioning' cyberpsychos - that's a direct quote from Cyberpunk franchise creator about Smasher - Adam Smasher was born a psychopath, so he's special in a way that becoming a cyberpsycho didn't change anything for him. People like Maine and David are all around normal dudes, so they couldn't handle it.
8/27/2024 c25 mamex
Doing a hell of a job with this story, with how alot of people are confused with kurama not being in this story is not a problem for me, honestly i would understand if it remains that way. Naruto at this moment in the story is already a force to be reckoned with in night city, it wouldnt make sense to make him more overpowered then he already is. Looking forward for the next chapter, especially if naruto will come out to his friends about where he actually comes from.
Doing a hell of a job with this story, with how alot of people are confused with kurama not being in this story is not a problem for me, honestly i would understand if it remains that way. Naruto at this moment in the story is already a force to be reckoned with in night city, it wouldnt make sense to make him more overpowered then he already is. Looking forward for the next chapter, especially if naruto will come out to his friends about where he actually comes from.
8/26/2024 c1 Mr.Heller
Narutos lifeforce, stamina and regenerative power aren't tied to chakra or Kurama, but to his biology.
Even without chakra he's more a demigod than a simple human. And Rasengans are yellow.
Narutos lifeforce, stamina and regenerative power aren't tied to chakra or Kurama, but to his biology.
Even without chakra he's more a demigod than a simple human. And Rasengans are yellow.
8/26/2024 c2 Lawbringer
Oh I'm LOVING the start of this and can't wait to binge what you've written so far!
Oh I'm LOVING the start of this and can't wait to binge what you've written so far!
8/22/2024 c24 Antianti12
One of my favorite story's, although this chapter was probably my least favorites so far way to many flashbacks.
One of my favorite story's, although this chapter was probably my least favorites so far way to many flashbacks.
8/21/2024 c25 
3pheonix of shadow
This is a seriously preem story choom. I'm really in love with the xover. Definitely one of the best. Great work choom
3pheonix of shadowThis is a seriously preem story choom. I'm really in love with the xover. Definitely one of the best. Great work choom
8/2/2024 c22 TheGoodDoctor13
Pretty great story I'm ngl. Naruto is super nerfed but still strong compared to most everything in cyberpunk here but it works really well for the story. It does the whole "op character" trope pretty well and the story itself is great too. Solid 9/10 from what I've read so far (end of act 1)
Pretty great story I'm ngl. Naruto is super nerfed but still strong compared to most everything in cyberpunk here but it works really well for the story. It does the whole "op character" trope pretty well and the story itself is great too. Solid 9/10 from what I've read so far (end of act 1)
7/31/2024 c25 12JensenDaniels32
So he got nailed in the back of the head at the end...please don't have Naruto pass out like a pussy for that. Anyway, awesome chapter!
12JensenDaniels32So he got nailed in the back of the head at the end...please don't have Naruto pass out like a pussy for that. Anyway, awesome chapter!
7/31/2024 c25 bryce.bussiness
litterally the best birthday gift ever, cheers and cant wait to see Dee come to age and how Gloria will react when she finds out. my guess, Naruto lets it slip after jackie trys to sneak a jab at him
litterally the best birthday gift ever, cheers and cant wait to see Dee come to age and how Gloria will react when she finds out. my guess, Naruto lets it slip after jackie trys to sneak a jab at him
7/28/2024 c25 Guest
Great chapter glad to see you still writing keep up the good work!
Great chapter glad to see you still writing keep up the good work!
7/28/2024 c25 Shadow
Awesome work as always, loved it!
Awesome work as always, loved it!
7/29/2024 c25 JAATWH4
I love this story. It is well structured, and although I haven't watched Cyberpunk or played the game, everything seems to fit in. Awesome story! Keep up the great work.
I love this story. It is well structured, and although I haven't watched Cyberpunk or played the game, everything seems to fit in. Awesome story! Keep up the great work.
7/29/2024 c25 Porrochimaru
Im gonna try to express how i felt reading this chapter, i found the last one super confusing and i see this as an improvement. Thank you for making it more chronological and less flashbacks it helps me a lot understanding the order of events. Well i found this chapter wayyy easier to follow than the last one and an improvement in that sense. Still a couple of random scenes with random characters that didnt need to be there for me personally (i mostly read over them not getting who they were or why thry were introduced) . I think Naruto is being pretty irresponsible putting David in a gig without at least Gloria knowing... i understand his logic of "im gonna let him do an easy gig with my supervision rather than be reckless on his own/ i did way more dangerous shit when i was younger" but still considering david is not an orphan (then it might make more sense) and he could have spoken to gloria about this once she wakes... i think its irresponsible considering she is a) his mother b) narutos significant other c)in a coma
I dont know... i often feel narutos girlfriends arent considered as more than sluts naruto is fucking and i dont enjoy that at all. He should consider her more.
Also didnt like the weird ignoring davids lack of consent from xochi... i know its meant to be comedic but he very clearly was voicing that he didnt want to continue. Had the genders been reversed that would have been seen as fucked up. Also naruto himself almost forcing david to engage in this, he luckily wanted to but what if he didnt?
Naruto being able to learn flying raijin felt too convenient and random. Even with the flashbacj explaining about the seal (and flashbacks imo shouldnt be used to add a new power out of nowhere). How did he learn tobiramas/minatos jutsu? Wirh no one teaching him it or no info on how it worked...naruto isnt that smart imo he is a great shinobi but essentially recreating the second hokages jutsu out of nowhere.. also you need to watch out overpowering naruto even more than he is. It could potentially become a plothole that he doesnt just use flying raijin all the time now. He is already so overpowered. It could have been interesting for david to get himself out of the situation somehow... but ill accept it like ok now naruto has flying raijin hopefully it doesnt get ignored later.
Im really really wanting more kurama and also more V in this story... donr know how but i think it would be cool. Considering V is the mc of CP2077 and jackies friend
I dont think naruto would care that much about ponponshit being his ringtone he probably would just be like wtf lmao but it was funny
I wonder why meredith gave him corpo immunity that is interesting to find out...
I also have a question regarding language. This actually caught my attention in prior chapters but i kept forgetting to ask. Does naruto speak japanese? He uses gloria chan and other japanese expressions and obviously konoha is very japanese culture heavy. Is the headcannon that both english and japanese are used in elemental nations? Sorr if this seems like something that doesnt need explaining but im bilingual and im sorry but i think it does lol. Like if naruto is japanese speaker how does he speak english and if he is an english speaker why does he use japanese phrases? I am explaining it away by saying naruto world speak both...
I think you say sweatdropped too much i find it odd as another person mentioned but i dont mind if you keep using it it isnr thar big a deal
Overall i do prefer this chapter way more than the one before but i still dont get the act 1 act 2 structure thing like what is separating these acts.
Sorry if any of this was clear already explained or i am missing something...
Im gonna try to express how i felt reading this chapter, i found the last one super confusing and i see this as an improvement. Thank you for making it more chronological and less flashbacks it helps me a lot understanding the order of events. Well i found this chapter wayyy easier to follow than the last one and an improvement in that sense. Still a couple of random scenes with random characters that didnt need to be there for me personally (i mostly read over them not getting who they were or why thry were introduced) . I think Naruto is being pretty irresponsible putting David in a gig without at least Gloria knowing... i understand his logic of "im gonna let him do an easy gig with my supervision rather than be reckless on his own/ i did way more dangerous shit when i was younger" but still considering david is not an orphan (then it might make more sense) and he could have spoken to gloria about this once she wakes... i think its irresponsible considering she is a) his mother b) narutos significant other c)in a coma
I dont know... i often feel narutos girlfriends arent considered as more than sluts naruto is fucking and i dont enjoy that at all. He should consider her more.
Also didnt like the weird ignoring davids lack of consent from xochi... i know its meant to be comedic but he very clearly was voicing that he didnt want to continue. Had the genders been reversed that would have been seen as fucked up. Also naruto himself almost forcing david to engage in this, he luckily wanted to but what if he didnt?
Naruto being able to learn flying raijin felt too convenient and random. Even with the flashbacj explaining about the seal (and flashbacks imo shouldnt be used to add a new power out of nowhere). How did he learn tobiramas/minatos jutsu? Wirh no one teaching him it or no info on how it worked...naruto isnt that smart imo he is a great shinobi but essentially recreating the second hokages jutsu out of nowhere.. also you need to watch out overpowering naruto even more than he is. It could potentially become a plothole that he doesnt just use flying raijin all the time now. He is already so overpowered. It could have been interesting for david to get himself out of the situation somehow... but ill accept it like ok now naruto has flying raijin hopefully it doesnt get ignored later.
Im really really wanting more kurama and also more V in this story... donr know how but i think it would be cool. Considering V is the mc of CP2077 and jackies friend
I dont think naruto would care that much about ponponshit being his ringtone he probably would just be like wtf lmao but it was funny
I wonder why meredith gave him corpo immunity that is interesting to find out...
I also have a question regarding language. This actually caught my attention in prior chapters but i kept forgetting to ask. Does naruto speak japanese? He uses gloria chan and other japanese expressions and obviously konoha is very japanese culture heavy. Is the headcannon that both english and japanese are used in elemental nations? Sorr if this seems like something that doesnt need explaining but im bilingual and im sorry but i think it does lol. Like if naruto is japanese speaker how does he speak english and if he is an english speaker why does he use japanese phrases? I am explaining it away by saying naruto world speak both...
I think you say sweatdropped too much i find it odd as another person mentioned but i dont mind if you keep using it it isnr thar big a deal
Overall i do prefer this chapter way more than the one before but i still dont get the act 1 act 2 structure thing like what is separating these acts.
Sorry if any of this was clear already explained or i am missing something...