for Night City Legends3/9/2023 c1 dekuton
also please by all thats holy...no harems. its just...not neccessary in my opinion
also please by all thats holy...no harems. its just...not neccessary in my opinion
3/4/2023 c1 Guest
Nice start
Hope for a harem pairing and that Naruto prevents David from ever becoming a edge runner
Be curious to if he can take over 6th street and reform them to be what they where before
Nice start
Hope for a harem pairing and that Naruto prevents David from ever becoming a edge runner
Be curious to if he can take over 6th street and reform them to be what they where before
3/3/2023 c1 Guest
Judging by your username you're probably drunk while writing this or you're just a moron.
Judging by your username you're probably drunk while writing this or you're just a moron.
3/4/2023 c1 
8The1whoknox
Well, well. This is a good surprise. Keep it up. I like that you didn't make Naruto op.
8The1whoknoxWell, well. This is a good surprise. Keep it up. I like that you didn't make Naruto op.
3/4/2023 c1 iiNeo
I can't quite frankly ever believe someone can say a story is shit because of memory lost that is introduced the first chapter. That's like saying a story is shit because it has romance even though it already made it clear first chapter. Anywho I think it's a good start so far. Keep up the good work
I can't quite frankly ever believe someone can say a story is shit because of memory lost that is introduced the first chapter. That's like saying a story is shit because it has romance even though it already made it clear first chapter. Anywho I think it's a good start so far. Keep up the good work
3/4/2023 c1 eniox27
Memory loss is a viable cliche to force a character to adapt to a alien world or concept. If his arms missing in this one it would be easy to chrome up starting there .
Memory loss is a viable cliche to force a character to adapt to a alien world or concept. If his arms missing in this one it would be easy to chrome up starting there .
3/4/2023 c1 Otsutsuki no Yami
Sorry, but I am not a fan of memory loss stories. This is Naruto from the Fourth Shinobi war and from young he has always been a fighter. Memories loss doesn't equal in losing practical skills. His body would remember fighting styles and what you did was just really poor. Besides that, his base strength alone would have brained his opponents, especially with memory loss then he would have easily smashes them because wouldn't have restrained himself.
Besides that when being hit, it would barely affect him. Why? Is because Naruto's body is incredible dense and he has been smashed through mountains etc. I mean, Tsunade hit harder and he just shrugged that off with a smile. So in my opinion you nerfed him hard. Another reason I don't like stories like these.
I wish you luck, but it take too much time for me to read just for a miniscule chance of Naruto regaining his memories.
Sorry, but I am not a fan of memory loss stories. This is Naruto from the Fourth Shinobi war and from young he has always been a fighter. Memories loss doesn't equal in losing practical skills. His body would remember fighting styles and what you did was just really poor. Besides that, his base strength alone would have brained his opponents, especially with memory loss then he would have easily smashes them because wouldn't have restrained himself.
Besides that when being hit, it would barely affect him. Why? Is because Naruto's body is incredible dense and he has been smashed through mountains etc. I mean, Tsunade hit harder and he just shrugged that off with a smile. So in my opinion you nerfed him hard. Another reason I don't like stories like these.
I wish you luck, but it take too much time for me to read just for a miniscule chance of Naruto regaining his memories.
3/4/2023 c1 28TheChamp123
Always happy to have more Naruto/Cyberpunk crossover and especially when they’re written well, first chapter has got me super interested for more, curious if Naruto will fully chrome out or keep it minimal.
I hope you keep Gloria alive but if you got to follow cannon it is what it is. Curious about the pairing also.
Keep up the brilliant work man.
28TheChamp123Always happy to have more Naruto/Cyberpunk crossover and especially when they’re written well, first chapter has got me super interested for more, curious if Naruto will fully chrome out or keep it minimal.
I hope you keep Gloria alive but if you got to follow cannon it is what it is. Curious about the pairing also.
Keep up the brilliant work man.