for Shrouded Destiny5/1 c11 Church21
How was Lyanna only a year older then Arya at Herenhall? She was 16 at the time. Did you age Arya up from 9 which shes supposed to br to 15 which is the same age as Jon and Robb
How was Lyanna only a year older then Arya at Herenhall? She was 16 at the time. Did you age Arya up from 9 which shes supposed to br to 15 which is the same age as Jon and Robb
4/30 c98 Guest
I enjoyed it. Binge read it. I enjoyed it.
I enjoyed it. Binge read it. I enjoyed it.
4/25 c86 ymrgf
"Hearsay is hardly a reliable source of knowledge." Eddard Stark shook his head, but she could swear there was a glint of amusement in his eyes. "I found Lady Ashara as pretty as anyone not blind, but she was merely a stranger from a faraway land to me. And the Sword of the Morning didn't fall by my hand either, but I never told that story, and everyone assumed otherwise. I'm more surprised you don't know that Ashara Dayne had a stillborn girl."
you repeated this paragraphs twice, just a minor edit
"Hearsay is hardly a reliable source of knowledge." Eddard Stark shook his head, but she could swear there was a glint of amusement in his eyes. "I found Lady Ashara as pretty as anyone not blind, but she was merely a stranger from a faraway land to me. And the Sword of the Morning didn't fall by my hand either, but I never told that story, and everyone assumed otherwise. I'm more surprised you don't know that Ashara Dayne had a stillborn girl."
you repeated this paragraphs twice, just a minor edit
4/10 c98 Guest
This has been one of the absolute best fanfictions, I've ever had the pleasure of reading. My only regret is reading through it as quickly as I did, for I have reached the end.
It does a great job at keeping both action and plots believable (or as believable as possible for a world filled with magic and incredible beings).
The story progresses at a reasonable pace without seemingly sacrificing depth or characters development.
Masterful.
This has been one of the absolute best fanfictions, I've ever had the pleasure of reading. My only regret is reading through it as quickly as I did, for I have reached the end.
It does a great job at keeping both action and plots believable (or as believable as possible for a world filled with magic and incredible beings).
The story progresses at a reasonable pace without seemingly sacrificing depth or characters development.
Masterful.
4/2 c98 Guest
Really great. Thx
Really great. Thx
3/30 c98 back028
Probably my favorite asoiaf fic. Like wow. I couldn’t put it down. Such a wonderfully written and planned out story.
Probably my favorite asoiaf fic. Like wow. I couldn’t put it down. Such a wonderfully written and planned out story.
3/18 c93 Nirome
Thank you for this epic story. I really liked how you went deep into character development, how the plots were really clever and well thought out and especially I really enjoyed that everything was not going easily for the main characters.
So, once again, thank you!
Thank you for this epic story. I really liked how you went deep into character development, how the plots were really clever and well thought out and especially I really enjoyed that everything was not going easily for the main characters.
So, once again, thank you!
3/10 c98 Michaelkoc1
Started reading the story when it was just starting and then stopped to wait for it to finish.
Finally caught up with it now.
Another really excellent story from an excellent writer. Can see definite improvement from the other asoiaf story. Interesting decision on dealing with the white walkers and then moving onto the last arc. The last arc south of the wall felt like it all happened and finished very quickly.
Overall great story and looking forward to whatever the author does next.
Also enjoying the HP story
Started reading the story when it was just starting and then stopped to wait for it to finish.
Finally caught up with it now.
Another really excellent story from an excellent writer. Can see definite improvement from the other asoiaf story. Interesting decision on dealing with the white walkers and then moving onto the last arc. The last arc south of the wall felt like it all happened and finished very quickly.
Overall great story and looking forward to whatever the author does next.
Also enjoying the HP story
3/3 c89 likolye
Of course House Stark owes their smallfolk. Especially that it's their responsability (wars and politics) that despite a long and plentiful summer, smalfolk face starvation in a coming winter (probably a decade long winter).
And it doesn't make sense for House Stark to let their people die when they can do smth about it. Not only because duty to their people was recognized in an asoiaf universe.
What are they going to do after winter, import all the food from then on? Invite smallfolk from other lands "come to work on our fields for a few years untill next winter, don't worry that we'll let you die after you fulfill our granaries"?
Of course House Stark owes their smallfolk. Especially that it's their responsability (wars and politics) that despite a long and plentiful summer, smalfolk face starvation in a coming winter (probably a decade long winter).
And it doesn't make sense for House Stark to let their people die when they can do smth about it. Not only because duty to their people was recognized in an asoiaf universe.
What are they going to do after winter, import all the food from then on? Invite smallfolk from other lands "come to work on our fields for a few years untill next winter, don't worry that we'll let you die after you fulfill our granaries"?
3/2 c73 likolye
I liked Melisandre converting to Old Gods and Shireen being capable. I don't like you taking an easy way out and ending the threat from Others before an expected decade-long Winter. They turned out unbelievably weak.
I liked Melisandre converting to Old Gods and Shireen being capable. I don't like you taking an easy way out and ending the threat from Others before an expected decade-long Winter. They turned out unbelievably weak.
3/1 c98 Skiin1041
An awesome storydefinitely worth the read!
Interesting deviations from cannonreally well done character development. Well done on thorough kingdom building without feeling tedious.
And using time skips to move the story along, while using the narrative to make sure we didn’t miss any important or interesting developments… unlike a lot of FFs that really drag hitting too many details.
An awesome storydefinitely worth the read!
Interesting deviations from cannonreally well done character development. Well done on thorough kingdom building without feeling tedious.
And using time skips to move the story along, while using the narrative to make sure we didn’t miss any important or interesting developments… unlike a lot of FFs that really drag hitting too many details.
2/27 c1 Ahsra78
interessante hatte nur Jon/Myrcella besser gefallen.
interessante hatte nur Jon/Myrcella besser gefallen.
2/25 c22 likolye
No, you don't write first that maids in Stark's household don't get paid, starve and freeze, despite long and plentiful summer - when their fate is supposed to be better then rest of the smallfolk - and then make Ned steal the taxes for himself, when they mean less people in the whole North starving and freezing in the summer and dying in winter.
No, you don't write first that maids in Stark's household don't get paid, starve and freeze, despite long and plentiful summer - when their fate is supposed to be better then rest of the smallfolk - and then make Ned steal the taxes for himself, when they mean less people in the whole North starving and freezing in the summer and dying in winter.
2/23 c95 Ryan
Brilliant story!
Brilliant story!
2/22 c95 Lord Fang
seem the app wont show chapter 98, but i still managed to read it on the web page.
first of i would like to thank you for writing this story, it was an amazing read.
i have finished some of your other stories to and like this one i enjoyed ever updated chapter.
you may think your showing of jon beyond the wall was lacking but i enjoyed all if it and only wanted more of it every week hehe.
i like what you did with the characters jon, val, arya and garlan a lot
- reading about jon was like seeing a legend be born.
- reading about val was a nice and simple romance we all love.
- reading abouts arya made me think you really brought reality into you world w people like her just not making it into adulthood that often because of foolish decisions and no fear of death.
- you really made Garlan into a good character
he was like a second mc doing his own thing and the way you wrapped it up in the end was fabulous.
i always want more direwolfes in stark centric fanfictions and you delivered that too so thank you.
looking forward to your next masterpiece
seem the app wont show chapter 98, but i still managed to read it on the web page.
first of i would like to thank you for writing this story, it was an amazing read.
i have finished some of your other stories to and like this one i enjoyed ever updated chapter.
you may think your showing of jon beyond the wall was lacking but i enjoyed all if it and only wanted more of it every week hehe.
i like what you did with the characters jon, val, arya and garlan a lot
- reading about jon was like seeing a legend be born.
- reading about val was a nice and simple romance we all love.
- reading abouts arya made me think you really brought reality into you world w people like her just not making it into adulthood that often because of foolish decisions and no fear of death.
- you really made Garlan into a good character
he was like a second mc doing his own thing and the way you wrapped it up in the end was fabulous.
i always want more direwolfes in stark centric fanfictions and you delivered that too so thank you.
looking forward to your next masterpiece