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22Clavyus
Cool wrap up. Well worth re-reading from the start once the epilogues are in place. I thank the author for the great entertainment.
22ClavyusCool wrap up. Well worth re-reading from the start once the epilogues are in place. I thank the author for the great entertainment.
2/2 c34 sasuhinaop
That's what I wanted to ask: why the hell do they bring this Tyroshi back so early in the story? And was it so difficult for The slaves sailors to go to the Summer Islands?
That's what I wanted to ask: why the hell do they bring this Tyroshi back so early in the story? And was it so difficult for The slaves sailors to go to the Summer Islands?
2/2 c33 sasuhinaop
It's not possible that Jaime doesn't see all this protection of Cersei's children for what it is: a guarantee of control over the crown!
He's always been this dickhead(The head below thinking for the head above
It's not possible that Jaime doesn't see all this protection of Cersei's children for what it is: a guarantee of control over the crown!
He's always been this dickhead(The head below thinking for the head above
2/2 c32 sasuhinaop
Doran Hammer's plan always seemed pathetic to me, even in the books. An assassination of the three main perpetrators would have been fast and painless. Which wouldn't be to Oberin's taste, but it would have been revenge.
Doran Hammer's plan always seemed pathetic to me, even in the books. An assassination of the three main perpetrators would have been fast and painless. Which wouldn't be to Oberin's taste, but it would have been revenge.
2/2 c94 0richierich0
Don't be so hard on yourself. This was a damn fine chapter. The meeting at the bridge was inspired.
You gave us enough glimpses of Aegon to not be surprised that he gave up, although I thought that the ice sword alone would do that. I was shocked that they would reveal Jon's heritage as they did. And I was almost certain that Connington was going to do something crazy to salvage the situation. All of the characters were well done there. The war ending this way is actually very fitting.
Don't be so hard on yourself. This was a damn fine chapter. The meeting at the bridge was inspired.
You gave us enough glimpses of Aegon to not be surprised that he gave up, although I thought that the ice sword alone would do that. I was shocked that they would reveal Jon's heritage as they did. And I was almost certain that Connington was going to do something crazy to salvage the situation. All of the characters were well done there. The war ending this way is actually very fitting.
2/2 c29 sasuhinaop
Apparently everyone who had any vision of the future was brought to heel by Bran's decision to rewrite history and with Bryden's help I believe even the Valyrian/Essosi side was affected by it. Why apparently even Euron Greyjoy and their warlocks are lost as are Melisandre and the seers with green dreams.
Bran And Bryden didn't choose a future, they had faith in Jon.
Apparently everyone who had any vision of the future was brought to heel by Bran's decision to rewrite history and with Bryden's help I believe even the Valyrian/Essosi side was affected by it. Why apparently even Euron Greyjoy and their warlocks are lost as are Melisandre and the seers with green dreams.
Bran And Bryden didn't choose a future, they had faith in Jon.
2/2 c28 sasuhinaop
I'm curious to know where Ygritte is? She's Giantbane's showed up, but she didn't. And neither did Osha and her little brother.
I'm curious to know where Ygritte is? She's Giantbane's showed up, but she didn't. And neither did Osha and her little brother.
2/2 c27 sasuhinaop
What do you mean "it wasn't an exciting chapter"? It was brilliant.
Maybe an animated body trapped in the ice cells in the wall, but the ice sword is enough to show at the end of the chapter.
And I loved how Ned was able to reason with the king. I always found it strange that Ned didn't win a single one against the stubbornness of the king who was his "friend" for so many years and two wars.
I was curious if Jon talked about the dragons and how after Drogo died and then the queen came to Westeros with the horde of horsemen.
What do you mean "it wasn't an exciting chapter"? It was brilliant.
Maybe an animated body trapped in the ice cells in the wall, but the ice sword is enough to show at the end of the chapter.
And I loved how Ned was able to reason with the king. I always found it strange that Ned didn't win a single one against the stubbornness of the king who was his "friend" for so many years and two wars.
I was curious if Jon talked about the dragons and how after Drogo died and then the queen came to Westeros with the horde of horsemen.
2/2 c24 sasuhinaop
I loved your line of thinking with Barbrey...And especially with Cat and Rob.
Being the young wolf who was able to deceive Tywin himself (and to a certain extent Tyrion) and won every battle he fought it is no wonder he guessed his brother's plan (because I will always see Jon as Ned's son).
I loved your line of thinking with Barbrey...And especially with Cat and Rob.
Being the young wolf who was able to deceive Tywin himself (and to a certain extent Tyrion) and won every battle he fought it is no wonder he guessed his brother's plan (because I will always see Jon as Ned's son).
2/1 c10 sasuhinaop
One thing about Canon that always bothered me was the issue of the bastardy of Cersei's even she could guarantee their bastards. And genetics is a mathematical calculation. Out of four seeds, only one would have the characteristics of the recessive seed. , In other words, who guarantees between Baratheon and Lanister, it would be the latter that would be recessive?
And I was surprised that Myrcella was the oldest of the three royal children.
Maybe a Stark Baratheon marriage is possible in this story?
But instead of Sansa with the blond shit, a marriage between Rob and Myrcella?
One thing about Canon that always bothered me was the issue of the bastardy of Cersei's even she could guarantee their bastards. And genetics is a mathematical calculation. Out of four seeds, only one would have the characteristics of the recessive seed. , In other words, who guarantees between Baratheon and Lanister, it would be the latter that would be recessive?
And I was surprised that Myrcella was the oldest of the three royal children.
Maybe a Stark Baratheon marriage is possible in this story?
But instead of Sansa with the blond shit, a marriage between Rob and Myrcella?
1/30 c2 J
I was interested, but you killed the younger version of Bran off? Nah I'm gone.
I was interested, but you killed the younger version of Bran off? Nah I'm gone.
1/30 c91 Dretnuh
God damn! I thought my boy Garlen had finally caught a break! Started to think maybe the baby is even his. Idk how this man can go on. I get that he’s already tried suicide by combat, but I would really be wanting to kms at that point bro.
God damn! I thought my boy Garlen had finally caught a break! Started to think maybe the baby is even his. Idk how this man can go on. I get that he’s already tried suicide by combat, but I would really be wanting to kms at that point bro.