for Shrouded Destiny3/1 c98 Skiin1041
An awesome storydefinitely worth the read!
Interesting deviations from cannonreally well done character development. Well done on thorough kingdom building without feeling tedious.
And using time skips to move the story along, while using the narrative to make sure we didn’t miss any important or interesting developments… unlike a lot of FFs that really drag hitting too many details.
An awesome storydefinitely worth the read!
Interesting deviations from cannonreally well done character development. Well done on thorough kingdom building without feeling tedious.
And using time skips to move the story along, while using the narrative to make sure we didn’t miss any important or interesting developments… unlike a lot of FFs that really drag hitting too many details.
2/27 c1 Ahsra78
interessante hatte nur Jon/Myrcella besser gefallen.
interessante hatte nur Jon/Myrcella besser gefallen.
2/25 c22 likolye
No, you don't write first that maids in Stark's household don't get paid, starve and freeze, despite long and plentiful summer - when their fate is supposed to be better then rest of the smallfolk - and then make Ned steal the taxes for himself, when they mean less people in the whole North starving and freezing in the summer and dying in winter.
No, you don't write first that maids in Stark's household don't get paid, starve and freeze, despite long and plentiful summer - when their fate is supposed to be better then rest of the smallfolk - and then make Ned steal the taxes for himself, when they mean less people in the whole North starving and freezing in the summer and dying in winter.
2/23 c95 Ryan
Brilliant story!
Brilliant story!
2/22 c95 Lord Fang
seem the app wont show chapter 98, but i still managed to read it on the web page.
first of i would like to thank you for writing this story, it was an amazing read.
i have finished some of your other stories to and like this one i enjoyed ever updated chapter.
you may think your showing of jon beyond the wall was lacking but i enjoyed all if it and only wanted more of it every week hehe.
i like what you did with the characters jon, val, arya and garlan a lot
- reading about jon was like seeing a legend be born.
- reading about val was a nice and simple romance we all love.
- reading abouts arya made me think you really brought reality into you world w people like her just not making it into adulthood that often because of foolish decisions and no fear of death.
- you really made Garlan into a good character
he was like a second mc doing his own thing and the way you wrapped it up in the end was fabulous.
i always want more direwolfes in stark centric fanfictions and you delivered that too so thank you.
looking forward to your next masterpiece
seem the app wont show chapter 98, but i still managed to read it on the web page.
first of i would like to thank you for writing this story, it was an amazing read.
i have finished some of your other stories to and like this one i enjoyed ever updated chapter.
you may think your showing of jon beyond the wall was lacking but i enjoyed all if it and only wanted more of it every week hehe.
i like what you did with the characters jon, val, arya and garlan a lot
- reading about jon was like seeing a legend be born.
- reading about val was a nice and simple romance we all love.
- reading abouts arya made me think you really brought reality into you world w people like her just not making it into adulthood that often because of foolish decisions and no fear of death.
- you really made Garlan into a good character
he was like a second mc doing his own thing and the way you wrapped it up in the end was fabulous.
i always want more direwolfes in stark centric fanfictions and you delivered that too so thank you.
looking forward to your next masterpiece
2/19 c94 Guest
Best fic ever
Best fic ever
2/18 c98 House Awesome
Thank you. One of the more enjoyable fan fictions of A song of Ice and Fire, I ever read.
Thank you. One of the more enjoyable fan fictions of A song of Ice and Fire, I ever read.
2/17 c1 Mephistophelian Frog
I wish I could double favorite this story. It has kept me company during a dark time. I will always look upon it fondly. thanks you.
I wish I could double favorite this story. It has kept me company during a dark time. I will always look upon it fondly. thanks you.
2/17 c98 Thrashling
Thank you for a wondeful story. Ive enjoyed it every word and sentence along the tale.
All the best.
Thank you for a wondeful story. Ive enjoyed it every word and sentence along the tale.
All the best.
2/17 c98 
4Supremus85
To not depict the Battle for the Heart of Winter was a little disappointing, but I understand. Great job.
4Supremus85To not depict the Battle for the Heart of Winter was a little disappointing, but I understand. Great job.
2/17 c98 Guest
It was a good undertaking and one I enjoyed. Thanks for the story
It was a good undertaking and one I enjoyed. Thanks for the story