
3/27/2023 c3 RokenDarkly
I like second thoughts the best out of the listed names, but I think tattletale would also fit nicely. Set ups good so far and I'm enjoying the character interactions, as short as these chapters are. Can't wait for the next one.
I like second thoughts the best out of the listed names, but I think tattletale would also fit nicely. Set ups good so far and I'm enjoying the character interactions, as short as these chapters are. Can't wait for the next one.
3/27/2023 c3
32Luckenhaft
Cassandra because depending how things play out it will either be ironic or fitting.

Cassandra because depending how things play out it will either be ironic or fitting.
3/27/2023 c3 Megoros5
Semblance Name ideas; After-Hindsight, Know-it-all, Verbal Visions, Fact Fiend, Lessons of the Mind, Mindful Mumbo-Jumbo, Cranium Crony, Gray Matter Mate, Thoughtful Companion, Inner Assitant, Nagging Nogging. And if none of those are any good I like the Second Thoughts one most.
Semblance Name ideas; After-Hindsight, Know-it-all, Verbal Visions, Fact Fiend, Lessons of the Mind, Mindful Mumbo-Jumbo, Cranium Crony, Gray Matter Mate, Thoughtful Companion, Inner Assitant, Nagging Nogging. And if none of those are any good I like the Second Thoughts one most.
3/21/2023 c1 Jaune-sam
So, far I'm liking it, the story has caught my interest and I'm curious as to where it goes.
So, far I'm liking it, the story has caught my interest and I'm curious as to where it goes.
3/19/2023 c2
1TemporaryName2
Alright, this looks interesting. I've wanted to see a fanfic like this for a while, and to see my wish granted fills me with joy. Please keep it up.

Alright, this looks interesting. I've wanted to see a fanfic like this for a while, and to see my wish granted fills me with joy. Please keep it up.
3/19/2023 c1 Alex-Kabalist
So, is it possible that our voice is going to see tell everything to Ozpin, avoiding main plot and all that Blakes "authorities doesn't care" opinion?
Interesting
So, is it possible that our voice is going to see tell everything to Ozpin, avoiding main plot and all that Blakes "authorities doesn't care" opinion?
Interesting
3/16/2023 c1
10Calcetin Sock
This is good, some dialogue felt kinda rush, but for the most part is great, a really good first chapter, hope you continue it

This is good, some dialogue felt kinda rush, but for the most part is great, a really good first chapter, hope you continue it
3/16/2023 c1 Guest
Oh this is interesting. I was actually thinking of a similar concept. Hope you continue this. Please dont drop it!
Oh this is interesting. I was actually thinking of a similar concept. Hope you continue this. Please dont drop it!
3/16/2023 c1 Kabuto S. Inferno
Seems interesting enough. And it doesn't appear to be a self-insert of some-sort, so that's always a plus in my book. Gonna have to wait until there's more to this story before saying much more, but I am intrigued.
Seems interesting enough. And it doesn't appear to be a self-insert of some-sort, so that's always a plus in my book. Gonna have to wait until there's more to this story before saying much more, but I am intrigued.
3/16/2023 c1
5Robbeyy9588
Curious, I am eager to see what you will do with this. I wonder this is a future him, or someone from a different world

Curious, I am eager to see what you will do with this. I wonder this is a future him, or someone from a different world