for Semblance Sapience12/3/2024 c72 superduperdog4
I'm writing through a translator, sorry for the mistakes.
He did the right thing by not telling everything at once, otherwise they would not have listened, being a mysterious figure that knows no less than they do is much more profitable than a child who has already provided all the information and who can be ignored, because they obviously know better, in fact his influence ended at the moment when jean told his backstory, and that's it what makes it valuable are the details, very important, but those that can be discarded. the fact that he changed several catstrophs gave him confidence points that he was the same participant in the conspiracy.
I'm more tired of my Wife's whining, canonically, but damn it. Well, he lied to you, so what? As if you weren't doing the same thing, putting everyone at the same risk...thanks to the actions of this guy: your partner did not die, the city did not fall, and the plans of the criminals were thwarted. And the second one didn't seem to give any reason to present them as characters, on the contrary, he played such a careful game for the offspring that he realized that his mistakes could kill real people. I didn't understand why Jon thought that. Yes, he let Cinder walk around at school, but what choice was there to rat out ozpina? she could have run away or, worse, she would have been replaced by Hazel or Tyrion, they would not have received virgo's powers, but Vale could have fallen since they now would not know how the enemy operates.
I'm writing through a translator, sorry for the mistakes.
He did the right thing by not telling everything at once, otherwise they would not have listened, being a mysterious figure that knows no less than they do is much more profitable than a child who has already provided all the information and who can be ignored, because they obviously know better, in fact his influence ended at the moment when jean told his backstory, and that's it what makes it valuable are the details, very important, but those that can be discarded. the fact that he changed several catstrophs gave him confidence points that he was the same participant in the conspiracy.
I'm more tired of my Wife's whining, canonically, but damn it. Well, he lied to you, so what? As if you weren't doing the same thing, putting everyone at the same risk...thanks to the actions of this guy: your partner did not die, the city did not fall, and the plans of the criminals were thwarted. And the second one didn't seem to give any reason to present them as characters, on the contrary, he played such a careful game for the offspring that he realized that his mistakes could kill real people. I didn't understand why Jon thought that. Yes, he let Cinder walk around at school, but what choice was there to rat out ozpina? she could have run away or, worse, she would have been replaced by Hazel or Tyrion, they would not have received virgo's powers, but Vale could have fallen since they now would not know how the enemy operates.
12/2/2024 c20 Asurayun
Why does everyone in the comments seem to marvel at why things change?
Why is that pathetic second ego excuse making such a fuss about changing the future as if it wasn't expected?
For goodness sake brother, use your brain a little. the moment you change something others will adapt to it and chase you or tend to their own plans!
That's the most obvious bullshit ever. You still said it "butterfly effect" so why all the stupid drama like you can't believe it's possible?
Aaaaaaaah. But yeah it was okay to waste your time with cryptic nonsense and about shutting your stupid mouth about the future.
When from the beginning what you had to do was to give all the information and possible paths that could arise because of that.
The moment you decided to open your mouth, everything was bound to change.
Idiot.
Why does everyone in the comments seem to marvel at why things change?
Why is that pathetic second ego excuse making such a fuss about changing the future as if it wasn't expected?
For goodness sake brother, use your brain a little. the moment you change something others will adapt to it and chase you or tend to their own plans!
That's the most obvious bullshit ever. You still said it "butterfly effect" so why all the stupid drama like you can't believe it's possible?
Aaaaaaaah. But yeah it was okay to waste your time with cryptic nonsense and about shutting your stupid mouth about the future.
When from the beginning what you had to do was to give all the information and possible paths that could arise because of that.
The moment you decided to open your mouth, everything was bound to change.
Idiot.
12/2/2024 c72 
7joecola00
Glynda agreeing with Roman that Cinder needs MULTIPLE ego checks is a riot, lol.
7joecola00Glynda agreeing with Roman that Cinder needs MULTIPLE ego checks is a riot, lol.
12/2/2024 c72 ledesmajoaquin418
Buen capitulo, espero ver que se ocurrira para que second se mas útil que un escudo de carne/aura jsjsj
Buen capitulo, espero ver que se ocurrira para que second se mas útil que un escudo de carne/aura jsjsj
11/13/2024 c71 Guest
It is a common practice to put the last sentence or two of the previous chapter in italics to indicate when a scene is being continued into the following chapter. Doing so refreshes the memory of the readers as to where they left off without having to go back to check. I hope that this feedback helps.
It is a common practice to put the last sentence or two of the previous chapter in italics to indicate when a scene is being continued into the following chapter. Doing so refreshes the memory of the readers as to where they left off without having to go back to check. I hope that this feedback helps.
10/29/2024 c70 Mikhail Sharon
This timeline of yours in interesting. Are you using any characters as a basis for Sam? It's good to have an image to based on.
This timeline of yours in interesting. Are you using any characters as a basis for Sam? It's good to have an image to based on.
10/28/2024 c70 Cooldude101011
Yeah, Glyn’s semblance is bullshit. If she wanted to she could rip someone apart.
Pyrrha’s semblance can be just as terrifying depending on how powerful it is and how minute her control is. The iron in blood is magnetic, so she could theoretically manipulate it to cause blood clots or even just rip all the iron in someone’s body out of them. If someone is wearing armour made out of a magnetic material then she could crush someone in their own armour like a tin can. Think what happened to oceangate, at least in concept.
Yeah, Glyn’s semblance is bullshit. If she wanted to she could rip someone apart.
Pyrrha’s semblance can be just as terrifying depending on how powerful it is and how minute her control is. The iron in blood is magnetic, so she could theoretically manipulate it to cause blood clots or even just rip all the iron in someone’s body out of them. If someone is wearing armour made out of a magnetic material then she could crush someone in their own armour like a tin can. Think what happened to oceangate, at least in concept.
10/24/2024 c69 5Hunter of Entities
Glynda's semblance is so honestly cracked enough that I think that she probably is top 5 in the verse because of it.
5Hunter of EntitiesGlynda's semblance is so honestly cracked enough that I think that she probably is top 5 in the verse because of it.
10/15/2024 c1 Naedine-Daki
Howdy!
I recently read your story Semblance Sapience, and I absolutely loved it! I was thinking how much more exciting it would be for me and other readers who enjoy both reading and imagining if the cover art matched the tone of the story. I'm an artist who loves diving into stories, and it would be an honor if you'd consider commissioning me to create the cover art for it. I'd be love to work on this project!
you can massage me on Discord. I'd love to show you some of my artwork as well.
Discord: daikihinataa
Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Howdy!
I recently read your story Semblance Sapience, and I absolutely loved it! I was thinking how much more exciting it would be for me and other readers who enjoy both reading and imagining if the cover art matched the tone of the story. I'm an artist who loves diving into stories, and it would be an honor if you'd consider commissioning me to create the cover art for it. I'd be love to work on this project!
you can massage me on Discord. I'd love to show you some of my artwork as well.
Discord: daikihinataa
Looking forward to hearing from you soon!
10/15/2024 c69 7joecola00
Honestly, if I was Glynda, I'd break both Cinder’s arms and legs by bending them too far immediately. It wouldn't kill her and would instantly remover any chance of her escaping under her own power. I'd like to see her try to escape from them with two snapped femurs and both arms useless.
7joecola00Honestly, if I was Glynda, I'd break both Cinder’s arms and legs by bending them too far immediately. It wouldn't kill her and would instantly remover any chance of her escaping under her own power. I'd like to see her try to escape from them with two snapped femurs and both arms useless.
10/15/2024 c1 ledesmajoaquin418
Bastante op, realmente quiero saber la historia de fondo de Sam y Qrow
Bastante op, realmente quiero saber la historia de fondo de Sam y Qrow