for Semblance Sapience10/5/2024 c2 
2HumbleArtisian45
Good quality writing, so I’m sticking with this, but honestly not the hugest fan of the way Ozpin is being described.
Hopefully it’s just bias on the part of the SI, rather than something that’s going to stain the narrative.
2HumbleArtisian45Good quality writing, so I’m sticking with this, but honestly not the hugest fan of the way Ozpin is being described.
Hopefully it’s just bias on the part of the SI, rather than something that’s going to stain the narrative.
10/3/2024 c1 artistygoku
I really hope I'm not upsetting anyone. I really enjoyed reading [Semblance Sapience]. I would be delighted to incorporate your narrative into my comic style, as I have been considering doing. I think you'll be happy with it, and you might want to consider sharing it. In addition, I'm a talented digital artist that takes commissions right now. If you like, we can connect on Discord or have a more in-depth conversation about it. If I were given permission, I would be delighted to adapt this lovely tale into a comic book. If you're in, let's connect over Discord or via direct messages. If you would allow me the opportunity to adapt this lovely tale into a comic, I would be overjoyed. Here Is my discord Id:artistygoku_20
I really hope I'm not upsetting anyone. I really enjoyed reading [Semblance Sapience]. I would be delighted to incorporate your narrative into my comic style, as I have been considering doing. I think you'll be happy with it, and you might want to consider sharing it. In addition, I'm a talented digital artist that takes commissions right now. If you like, we can connect on Discord or have a more in-depth conversation about it. If I were given permission, I would be delighted to adapt this lovely tale into a comic book. If you're in, let's connect over Discord or via direct messages. If you would allow me the opportunity to adapt this lovely tale into a comic, I would be overjoyed. Here Is my discord Id:artistygoku_20
9/21/2024 c67 ledesmajoaquin418
Gracioso muy vuen capitulo
Mi único pu to sería que no veo como jaune y second pueden participar más en la trama a estas alturas
Gracioso muy vuen capitulo
Mi único pu to sería que no veo como jaune y second pueden participar más en la trama a estas alturas
9/19/2024 c1 naedinefebruary2.0
My absolute favorite moment in this story so far has to be when Jaune realizes that he has a voice inside his head trying to explain things to Dr. Oobleck. The amount of confusion and the humor behind this scene are simply great, considering how weirdly absurd of a situation Jaune finds himself in. Oobleck's rapid-fire questioning to Jaune's growing panic is a perfect counterpoint and leads to a delightful tension. It is mostly in the way voice interacts with Jaune, jumping between reassuring and aside-making while taking what should otherwise be a pretty serious situation into intrigue and mood-lightening. It does great continuity, catching Jaune in his attempts to keep cool amidst this bizarre new reality.
Also, I'm thinking that if I design some character art from your story. I've done quite a few commissions before and work as a commission-based artist, As i'm opened for commission, I'd really appreciate it if you could commission me for this.
Here is my discord: naedinefebruary
Hope to hear back from you soon.
My absolute favorite moment in this story so far has to be when Jaune realizes that he has a voice inside his head trying to explain things to Dr. Oobleck. The amount of confusion and the humor behind this scene are simply great, considering how weirdly absurd of a situation Jaune finds himself in. Oobleck's rapid-fire questioning to Jaune's growing panic is a perfect counterpoint and leads to a delightful tension. It is mostly in the way voice interacts with Jaune, jumping between reassuring and aside-making while taking what should otherwise be a pretty serious situation into intrigue and mood-lightening. It does great continuity, catching Jaune in his attempts to keep cool amidst this bizarre new reality.
Also, I'm thinking that if I design some character art from your story. I've done quite a few commissions before and work as a commission-based artist, As i'm opened for commission, I'd really appreciate it if you could commission me for this.
Here is my discord: naedinefebruary
Hope to hear back from you soon.
9/17/2024 c1 Vinay-kox01
I hope this message finds you well. I recently had the pleasure of reading your story, "Semblance Sapience" and was truly captivated by your compelling narrative and unique vision. The depth of your story, combined with its striking potential, sparked my imagination, and I believe it would translate beautifully into a comic format.
As a professional commission artist with a passion for storytelling through visual art, I am currently open for new projects. I would love the opportunity to collaborate with you in adapting your story into a comic, where I can bring your characters and world to life with meticulous care and creativity. My goal would be to stay true to the essence of your work while enhancing the emotional impact and immersive experience for readers.
If this is something that piques your interest, I would be thrilled to discuss potential collaboration details, including artistic style, project scope, and pricing, to ensure we can create something truly special together. It would be great if we could discuss this further on Discord my username is [graphic_gold] to exchange ideas more seamlessly.
Thank you for your time, and I look forward to the possibility of working together on this exciting project.
I hope this message finds you well. I recently had the pleasure of reading your story, "Semblance Sapience" and was truly captivated by your compelling narrative and unique vision. The depth of your story, combined with its striking potential, sparked my imagination, and I believe it would translate beautifully into a comic format.
As a professional commission artist with a passion for storytelling through visual art, I am currently open for new projects. I would love the opportunity to collaborate with you in adapting your story into a comic, where I can bring your characters and world to life with meticulous care and creativity. My goal would be to stay true to the essence of your work while enhancing the emotional impact and immersive experience for readers.
If this is something that piques your interest, I would be thrilled to discuss potential collaboration details, including artistic style, project scope, and pricing, to ensure we can create something truly special together. It would be great if we could discuss this further on Discord my username is [graphic_gold] to exchange ideas more seamlessly.
Thank you for your time, and I look forward to the possibility of working together on this exciting project.
9/16/2024 c67 Mikhail Sharon
Now who could she be?
Could Summer be the Summer Maiden?
But she's blond and a bit tan.
Now who could she be?
Could Summer be the Summer Maiden?
But she's blond and a bit tan.
9/16/2024 c67 Noob6
so qrow knows the summer maiden, ah his tragic love life i suppose
also his semblance really has it out for him
so qrow knows the summer maiden, ah his tragic love life i suppose
also his semblance really has it out for him
9/16/2024 c67 32Luckenhaft
I'll be honest: This is probably going to be better than whatever canon would have given us with Vacuo and the Summer Maiden.
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32LuckenhaftI'll be honest: This is probably going to be better than whatever canon would have given us with Vacuo and the Summer Maiden.
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9/2/2024 c66 MereC55
Goodness, you've captured Cinder Fall well here. She's so selfish, vile,.and only views herself as important. She's similar to Kiara in Fate. Cinder thinks she's the one that matters, and that no life has any meaning apart from how she can use them. I wouldn't be surprised if, like Kiara, she does view herself as the only real human.
Goodness, you've captured Cinder Fall well here. She's so selfish, vile,.and only views herself as important. She's similar to Kiara in Fate. Cinder thinks she's the one that matters, and that no life has any meaning apart from how she can use them. I wouldn't be surprised if, like Kiara, she does view herself as the only real human.