for Overlord of Biblical proportions3/19/2023 c1 Cookies discord
Realy... Big red die?... In prologue?. Wow, You work hard to keep your stories interesting. (sarcasm)
Realy... Big red die?... In prologue?. Wow, You work hard to keep your stories interesting. (sarcasm)
3/18/2023 c1 Artelsstreimt
To be honest, I think you lacked details but I also think they had their reasons but well the truth is that I liked it, I'll see where you take this story, I have faith that it will be entertaining, but I have questions:
-How often will you update the story here?
-Momonga is stronger than- hahahahahaha just kidding, I just wanted to know which race do you think Rubedo is?
To be honest, I think you lacked details but I also think they had their reasons but well the truth is that I liked it, I'll see where you take this story, I have faith that it will be entertaining, but I have questions:
-How often will you update the story here?
-Momonga is stronger than- hahahahahaha just kidding, I just wanted to know which race do you think Rubedo is?
3/18/2023 c1 inksanstherad
oh i am very interested in this, i just hope this wont be the last we see of bone daddy
oh i am very interested in this, i just hope this wont be the last we see of bone daddy
3/18/2023 c1 
6IceAndShadow
Ah, everything was going so well... and then... [Create Body]... WHY, WHY CAN'T AINZ-SAMA STAY AS THE BONE DADDY WE'RE ALL FAMILIAR WITH? damn it...
6IceAndShadowAh, everything was going so well... and then... [Create Body]... WHY, WHY CAN'T AINZ-SAMA STAY AS THE BONE DADDY WE'RE ALL FAMILIAR WITH? damn it...
3/18/2023 c1 One To Seven
Your Overlord fic is glorious, if a bit too OP. Then again, your writing is superb that it still entertaining and not feel flat. From DxD side however, it's a bit infuriating. Those fic who have their MC kick Great Red easily are usually the worst... but then again the original author of DxD himself decided to write him off just like that on shin. It's disappointing that he just got that one spell though...
Your Overlord fic is glorious, if a bit too OP. Then again, your writing is superb that it still entertaining and not feel flat. From DxD side however, it's a bit infuriating. Those fic who have their MC kick Great Red easily are usually the worst... but then again the original author of DxD himself decided to write him off just like that on shin. It's disappointing that he just got that one spell though...
3/17/2023 c1 10Hobby Writer 46
Can I give a suggestion?
Can you make Momonga's newly created body carry all or at least some of Great Red abilities?
I mean Issei who got his body created by Great Red and Ophis carries a life force that is similar to a combination of Great Red and Ophis. So assuming Momonga uses spell based on Great Red Power, it will be realistic to assume Momonga's new body carries some of Great Red power.
One of the powers Momonga could use will be the Dream power of Great Red, in which Great Red can manifest dreams and wishes of other being either to empower himself or others. Momonga can use this either to strengthen himself or strengthen his summon.
10Hobby Writer 46Can I give a suggestion?
Can you make Momonga's newly created body carry all or at least some of Great Red abilities?
I mean Issei who got his body created by Great Red and Ophis carries a life force that is similar to a combination of Great Red and Ophis. So assuming Momonga uses spell based on Great Red Power, it will be realistic to assume Momonga's new body carries some of Great Red power.
One of the powers Momonga could use will be the Dream power of Great Red, in which Great Red can manifest dreams and wishes of other being either to empower himself or others. Momonga can use this either to strengthen himself or strengthen his summon.
3/17/2023 c1 moose3333
Ah I shoulda waited until the end of the chapter to comment about the humanoid part. I hope Ainz makes himself fairly attractive unlike how he did it in canon. I understand not being overly vain and making some edgelord character. But attractiveness is such a massive benefit in life. Would be pointless to not take advantage.
Ah I shoulda waited until the end of the chapter to comment about the humanoid part. I hope Ainz makes himself fairly attractive unlike how he did it in canon. I understand not being overly vain and making some edgelord character. But attractiveness is such a massive benefit in life. Would be pointless to not take advantage.
3/17/2023 c1 moose3333
Interesting. Personally, I hope for a slightly neutral Nazarick. Oftentimes fics turn them into just insane villains who torture and kill children like it’s nothing. Additionally, bone daddy is cool and all but a humanoid form is always great IMO.
Anyways thanks for the chapter.
Interesting. Personally, I hope for a slightly neutral Nazarick. Oftentimes fics turn them into just insane villains who torture and kill children like it’s nothing. Additionally, bone daddy is cool and all but a humanoid form is always great IMO.
Anyways thanks for the chapter.
3/17/2023 c1 luminaexotica
Wwooh! great first chapter, quite the entrance to the world of DxD for bone daddy hahaha.
Just based on your previous works I am sure that this is going to be yet another great read. I didn't see the author for this when the notification came because I just clicked on it just to check it out for a bit but ooh boy was I surprised, just based on the writing style and the way things were being explained and extrapolated I instantly knew this was going to be good. I really love Grand Foreigner and I keep rereading it now and again and now that this story is here, I better widen my hall of faves since Overlord and DxD are two of my favorite animes and this crossover is for sure gonna be great!
Keep up the good work! I might actually just go on Patreon now since just this first chapter already got me hooked!
Wwooh! great first chapter, quite the entrance to the world of DxD for bone daddy hahaha.
Just based on your previous works I am sure that this is going to be yet another great read. I didn't see the author for this when the notification came because I just clicked on it just to check it out for a bit but ooh boy was I surprised, just based on the writing style and the way things were being explained and extrapolated I instantly knew this was going to be good. I really love Grand Foreigner and I keep rereading it now and again and now that this story is here, I better widen my hall of faves since Overlord and DxD are two of my favorite animes and this crossover is for sure gonna be great!
Keep up the good work! I might actually just go on Patreon now since just this first chapter already got me hooked!
3/17/2023 c1 Daniel-palacio
Joder es lo mejor capítulo que leído sigue así espero con interés la actualización XD
Joder es lo mejor capítulo que leído sigue así espero con interés la actualización XD
3/17/2023 c1 Guest
I'm always wary of Fanfics that kill Great Red so easily but however I suppose that comes from the DxD author himself discarding him from his story as trash and being defeated easily
I'm always wary of Fanfics that kill Great Red so easily but however I suppose that comes from the DxD author himself discarding him from his story as trash and being defeated easily